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The Gulag
Chapter 68 of the book The Corona saga

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Really? No decorating? But you can decorate your own place, right? You should put lots of decorations! I'm so sorry to hear about the terrible rise in cases there. I did like the "coup de foudre" you felt with the Christmas movies!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020 by lyenochka


The Gulag
Chapter 68 of the book The Corona saga

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It's fun to read your monologue and it expressed my feelings l, too. I really want to see family in Christmas but it's hard now due to COVID19. I hear that the death rate in general population is less than 2% while it's 20% for people over 70. I pray I can go to Mexico at the end of January and most people will have vaccine by then.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020 by Lisa Wharton


The Gulag
Chapter 68 of the book The Corona saga

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Spot-on! My sentiments exactly.

I know [comma] no biggie

deny that it is [omit NOT] real

four season realism [REALITY]

cheese [CHEESY] movies

deal[HYPHEN]breaker

speak [omit UP] my mind

They ... makes [MAKE] me wanna try everything

put many asides [ASIDE]

The devil no is in power [the devil is not in power]
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020 by Elizabeth Emerald


The storm

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Great imagery in this poem. You certainly packed volume in those lines, and I liked the message.

This should do very well in the contest - good luck in the booths.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020 by Eternal Muse


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Chapter 68 of the book The Corona saga

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I have mixed feelings about the Holiday restrictions of the pandemic, because, although I love celebrating, I feel that they are necessary. The speaker in this piece certainly shows her spunk!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020 by Susan X Smith


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Chapter 68 of the book The Corona saga

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I think you must be suffering in Canada with the sheer number of infections and deaths, the trouble with a free country is really thinks that Covid understands what freedom, I think freedom to catch Covid -19 is probably more the go, beautifully written Iza, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2020 by royowen


The power

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I believe you are Iza. I just read your full bio, and it's clear you have many amazing accomplishments in all categories of writing. And in 3 languages.
It's an honor to know you. :>) Brad
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020 by Brad Bennett


The power

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There is a lot of strength in this poem for so few syllables. I imagine the power as an all powerful being - either religious or mythical. His effects on the world as he passes will be legion.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020 by Katherine M. Kean


The power

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Iza! Haven't heard from you in a while. I was worried when I heard on the Canadian news about Alberta's rise in Covid cases. Hope you are staying safe and healthy!
I like your poem. It sounds like the wind is talking about the "power to roam." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Nov-2020 by lyenochka


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I like your poem.
One tear cracking is quite an amazing image. There is the visual of the tear and the sound image of cracking...quite a great line.
Your poem carries a lot of weight and makes us think.
Thank you for your work.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020 by Cynthia Adams1


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