What do you believe in? Part 2
...Chapter 8 of The Waiting Room
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Jay Squires
http://www.fanstory.com/jay_squires
Location: Bakersfield
Gender: Male
Born: 08/10
Interests: Writing, Reading, and recently Frisbee Golf
Member: Premier Author
Joined: May 2006
INFORMATION
I AM an author, salesman, optimist, dreamer: May the four always cohabit & produce wondrous progeny. In the gene pool of life, I'm an unflushable floater.
FAVORITE QUOTE
If you sit, sit. If you stand, stand. But don't Wobble.
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FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: FITBIT: The Devil's in the Details finished second in the contest "True Story"
August 30 at 12:13AM
    giraffmang: congratulations, Jay.
    August 30 at 12:16AM
    Dean Kuch: Congrats, Jay.
    August 30 at 3:53AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!
    August 30 at 10:24AM
    Spitfire: See, I told you you're the best. (should have been first.)


    I know a winner when I see one.

    August 30 at 4:32PM
    RPSaxena: Congratulations, Jay Squires.
    Too late, but better late than never; at least in some such cases.
    September 8 at 8:26PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Alice, Rick and Officer Scott finished third in the contest "Dialogue Only Writing Contest"
August 9 at 12:13AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!
    August 9 at 10:37AM
    Jay Squires: Thank you, my friends.
    August 9 at 4:16PM
    Curly Girly: Congratulations, Jay.
    August 13 at 1:14AM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: The Window finished third in the contest "Cinquain Poetry"
June 16 at 12:13AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!! Loved this!!
    June 16 at 12:19AM
    Dean Kuch: Congrats, Jay.
    Excellent poem!
    June 16 at 2:04PM
    Spitfire: I know a star when I see (or read) your work.
    June 17 at 7:25PM
    Spitfire: I know a star when I see (or read) your work.
    June 17 at 7:25PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! First place finish in the reviewing contest!
June 1 at 9:15AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations Mr. Jay, so deserved!!!
    June 1 at 11:30AM
    giraffmang: Nice one, Jay. Congrats.
    June 1 at 11:54AM
    MNOEL: Congrats! So happy for you-well deserved!
    June 1 at 12:15PM
    Jay Squires: Hey, Dean ... is that an onion or a bomb! EVERYONE! You are all so kind. Thank you for your congratulations.
    June 1 at 12:23PM
    rama devi: Congrats! :-))))
    June 1 at 12:56PM
    F. Wehr3: Always a great choice! Congrats!
    June 1 at 3:32PM
    Jay Squires: Thank you all my friends. You've made my day!
    June 1 at 9:38PM
    rspoet: Congratulations. Well done!
    June 1 at 10:50PM
    bob cullen: I've been away for four months and it's so good to see some things don't change. You're still the top reviewer
    June 2 at 2:28AM
    Jay Squires: You guys and gals are all so kind. I appreciate you.
    June 2 at 4:09PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations on winning the reviewing contest!
April 1 at 10:10AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!!
    April 1 at 12:54PM
    rama devi: Congrats! Much deserved.
    April 1 at 1:52PM
    Jay Squires: Thanks for the kindness, Judy and Rama.
    April 1 at 1:57PM
    F. Wehr3: Always a great choice. Congrats!
    April 1 at 2:50PM
    judiverse: Congratulations on your reviewing contest win! judiverse
    April 1 at 3:10PM
    Jay Squires: Thanks a bunch, Russell and Judi!
    April 1 at 3:51PM
    RGstar: Well done, old friend, whatever you do , always done well, and that makes my day.
    best wishes.
    April 1 at 5:03PM
    Margaret Snowdon: Congratulations, my friend - so well deserved. M
    April 2 at 6:23AM
    granny goes viral: Gee Jay,
    Still at it I see. Great going. Me, I am still struggling with getting myself working properly. What a struggle. No energy to write or even think most days. Hopefully surgery to initiate the dialysis process will take place this spring, followed by the intense training, followed by the process, followed by the restoration of some needed energy, followed by, well who knows? Barring any medical complications, which as I am learning can be multiple and dangerous. Oh well. If my fingers still work, and my brain is not drowning in urea, maybe I will be able to be productive in more ways than dialysis output.
    April 2 at 11:26AM
    Jay Squires: RG, Margaret and Granny, you guys inspire me. Thank you for the congratulations.
    April 2 at 2:00PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Mental Floss finished third in the contest "Share Your Story"
February 12 at 12:13AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!!
    February 12 at 12:25AM
    giraffmang: Congratulations Jay
    February 12 at 12:55AM
    F. Wehr3: Nice!
    February 12 at 10:41AM
    Selina Stambi: Hey, Jay, congratulations!
    February 14 at 6:04PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! Winner of the reviewing contest!
February 1 at 3:00PM
    giraffmang: Nice one, Jay. Always deserved. G
    February 1 at 3:16PM
    Ric Myworld: Congratulations! Well deserved.
    February 1 at 3:20PM
    robyn corum: HUZZAH! Well deserved~! Congrats!
    February 1 at 3:34PM
    F. Wehr3: Great job, Jay!
    February 1 at 4:04PM
    sandramitchell: Big congratulations, Jay! You really deserve it. :) xx
    February 1 at 4:12PM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!!
    February 1 at 4:22PM
    Jay Squires: Awwwww, you guys. Thanks.
    February 1 at 4:23PM
    judiverse: Congratulations on your Reviewer of the Month contest win. Great work. judiverse
    February 1 at 7:07PM
    RGstar: Well done, Jay
    February 1 at 7:55PM
    Spitfire: Ah, so that's what you've been doing with your time. :-) Congrats, my friend.
    February 1 at 11:45PM
    w.j.debi: Well deserved win. Congratulations.
    February 1 at 11:59PM
    Margaret Snowdon: Congratulations, Jay - so well deserved. M
    February 2 at 5:54AM
    Angelwhispers: Congratulations on your reviewer win! It's well-deserved, and I know you've worked hard for it. Keep up the great work!
    February 2 at 10:01AM
    pome lover: congrats on winning Reviewer of the month!
    pome lover
    February 2 at 7:47PM
    I am Cat: Congratulations, Jay
    February 3 at 11:38AM
    judester: congratulations on winning reviwer of the month, Well deserved.j
    February 3 at 11:03PM
    Selina Stambi: A worthy win, Jay. Your reviews are always helpful and kind. Congratulations!
    February 9 at 9:09PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! #4 Ranked Script Writer of 2016!
January 1 at 12:00AM
    judiverse: Congratulations on being #4 script writer. You started late but really moved once you started writing scripts! All the best in 2017. judiverse
    January 1 at 7:47AM
    lancellot: Congratulations!
    January 1 at 10:30AM
    Xylok: Rad yo! way to go!
    January 3 at 8:56AM
    RGstar: Well done Jay...thank you for your congratulation. Haven't read from you for a while, but always a pleasure.
    Thank you. Have a great New Year. I hope you have something planned for reading. Good to read quality as you always give.
    Best wishes
    January 3 at 10:24AM
    Selina Stambi: Jay, congratulations. Well done. Happy New Year!
    January 4 at 8:47PM
    vwilks: Hi Jay
    Thank you so much for your comments and five stars. I really appreciate it. I have made all the edits. May I now have that last star? Please.
    January 6 at 8:24PM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!
    January 25 at 2:44PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! Honorable Mention in the reviewing contest!
October 1 at 7:28AM
    giraffmang: Good stuff, Jay. Always deserved.
    October 1 at 10:44AM
    rama devi: Bravo and congrats. Much deserved!
    October 1 at 1:26PM
    mfowler: Nice one, Jay. Congratulations.
    October 1 at 10:37PM
    Dean Kuch: Congratulations, Jay.
    ~Dean
    October 2 at 4:05PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Romancing Mr. Bryce finished third in the contest "Romance Story"
September 19 at 12:13AM
    mfowler: Congratulations, my friend. Well done.
    September 19 at 12:46AM
    barkingdog: Congratulation, Jay. :) ellen
    September 19 at 9:23AM
    F. Wehr3: A two kisses good day! Congrats!
    September 19 at 10:38AM
    Jay Squires: Thank you, good friends!
    September 19 at 2:41PM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations!!!!
    September 20 at 7:30PM
    Delahay: Waytogo!
    Ward&Mary
    September 23 at 1:53AM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! You won the reviewing contest!
August 1 at 7:28AM
    I am Cat: Congratulations to a great reviewer!
    August 1 at 1:15AM
    bob cullen: Can't think of a more deserving winner
    August 1 at 1:32AM
    bob cullen: Can't think of a more deserving winner
    August 1 at 1:32AM
    giraffmang: Excellent, Jay. Congratulations.
    August 1 at 1:34AM
    barkingdog: Congratulations, Jay. You worked hard for this. :) e
    August 1 at 2:44AM
    Phyllis Stewart: Way to go, Jay. You're paying your FS bill and then some. :)
    August 1 at 4:05AM
    mfowler: Well deserved, Jay. Congratulations.
    August 1 at 4:11AM
    humpwhistle: Congratulations, Jay. Your reviews are always welcome, and helpful.
    August 1 at 9:08AM
    Cumbrianlass: Woo hoo, Jay! Well done, and richly deserved.
    August 1 at 9:18AM
    sandramitchell: Congratulation, Jay, you really do deserve this! xxx
    August 1 at 10:24AM
    Jay Squires: Thank you, everyone, for your kindness. Love you all!
    August 1 at 10:59AM
    Ulla: Congratulation, Jay. so well deserved. :))
    August 1 at 11:31AM
    RGstar: Been away, but well done Jay. best wishes
    August 1 at 11:49AM
    boxergirl: Congrats, Jay and well-deserved!!
    August 1 at 12:05PM
    F. Wehr3: Congrats!
    August 1 at 12:24PM
    lancellot: you're the best, Jay
    August 1 at 1:20PM
    rmj09: Great news, Jay. I was glad to see you won the reviewing contest, you well deserve it. Keep on writing. Look forward to your reviewing my work again. Rita
    August 1 at 4:59PM
    write hand blue: Congratulations Jay, none more deserving than you...
    August 1 at 6:28PM
    IndianaIrish: Your reviews are always helpful and kind, Jay. Congratulations on this honor.
    August 1 at 7:47PM
    Irish Rain: Awesome reviews!!! Congratulations!!!!
    August 2 at 1:29AM
    judiverse: Congratulations, Number 1 Reviewer! judiverse
    August 2 at 3:16PM
    Spitfire: You deserve it. I know I can count on you. Don't spend your money all in one place. LOL
    August 2 at 3:56PM
    bob cullen: Well done Jay. In my opinion you should win this award every month.
    Feeling a whole lot better
    August 6 at 6:09PM
    junglefighter: Piece of cake! Right, Jay? It all comes back to kiss you! Why? Because you're the best, my friend! Respectfully, Junglefighter
    August 7 at 10:33PM
    Selina Stambi: You did? Again! Congratulations to a sincere and scrupulous reviewer. Way to go, Jay!
    August 30 at 1:42PM
    K. Lorraine: I'll look into your suggestions. Not to demean you in any way, but I always chuckle to see the errors in a reviwers review. I ran yours through grammar check and you'd be surprised at the number of errors found. However, I do rely on my FB writers to help improve my work. So, I appreciate the time and dedication that it takes to review and critique another's writing. See you next time. K. Lorraine
    September 16 at 2:13PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! Third place in the reviewing contest!
July 1 at 7:28AM
    I am Cat: Congratulations Jay!
    July 1 at 10:48AM
    F. Wehr3: Well deserved!
    July 1 at 10:55AM
    rama devi: Congrats! :-))
    July 1 at 11:03AM
    mfowler: Consistently good. Well done, Jay.
    July 2 at 9:54AM
    barkingdog: Congratulations, Jay. You're always a big help to me. :) e
    July 3 at 3:02AM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! You won the reviewing contest!
May 1 at 12:28AM
    Turtle... who?: Congrats on the reviewing contest win!
    May 1 at 8:55AM
    judiverse: Congratulations on winning the reviewing contest. You certainly deserve it. judi
    May 1 at 9:36AM
    RGstar: Well done, Jay
    May 1 at 9:40AM
    boxergirl: Well-deserved, Jay. Congrats!! 8-)
    May 1 at 10:05AM
    F. Wehr3: Congrats, Jay!
    May 1 at 10:17AM
    Lynn27: Congratulations!
    May 1 at 10:44AM
    michaelcahill: Yep. The gold standard!!! Congrats. Waiting for that drink. Make it a double now that you're wealthy. LOL
    May 1 at 11:07AM
    mrsmajor: Congratulations, Jay!
    May 1 at 11:51AM
    I am Cat: Congratulations Jay!
    May 1 at 12:24PM
    robyn corum: YIPPEE! Congrats, buddy!
    May 1 at 12:50PM
    JTStone: Congratulations, Jay
    You have always been one of my favorite reviewers. I love your helpful insight and your honesty
    May 1 at 1:33PM
    Dean Kuch: Congrats, Jay. based on what few reviews I have received from you, I can certainly understand why.
    Nice...
    ~Dean  photo 4_17_51_zpswnoawaso.gif
    May 1 at 4:42PM
    Ulla: Congrats, Jay, well deserved. Ulla:)
    May 1 at 5:05PM
    Jay Squires: Thank you, everyone. I'm so humbled by all this.

    Jay.
    May 1 at 5:52PM
    gloria ...: Yay, Jay! Congratulations to you. :))
    May 1 at 6:46PM
    Marvin Calloway: I know why you won. Very deserving. Cngrtltns.
    May 1 at 10:12PM
    Spitfire: Yea! You deserve this, cool dude.




    May 1 at 10:59PM
    Word Junkie: Congrats, Jay! I don't know where you find the time, but here's a big pat on the back for you. You rock!

    Lana
    May 2 at 5:47AM
    Captain Jack: Great job, Jay. Your reviews are always spot on.
    May 3 at 12:24AM
    Selina Stambi: Well deserved, Jay. You always do such a thorough job with the reviews.
    June 1 at 9:01PM
    Jay Squires: Thank you all my dear friends. I'm touched--at least, wait, who touched me?
    June 2 at 1:17AM
    Gone but not forgotten: Hi Jay...just wanted to let you know that I'm moving on. I've had fun on FanStory, but ready to get back to the land where they pay me to write! Thanks for your comments and support. Best to you and yours.
    June 18 at 1:46PM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations! Third place finish in the reviewing contest!
April 1 at 12:28AM
    I am Cat: Congratulations, Jay! Awesome!
    March 31 at 11:53PM
    Dean Kuch: Congratulations, Jay.
    You're an ace, buddy!
    ~Dean  photo BilltheCat-300x212_zpsuqm9bhcj.gif
    April 1 at 12:37AM
    rama devi: yay, Jay! Congrats! :-))
    April 1 at 4:53AM
    F. Wehr3: Well deserved!
    April 1 at 9:38AM
    boxergirl: Congrats, Jay. You are one of the best!
    April 1 at 9:49AM

FanStory wrote to Jay Squires: Congratulations the #2 Ranked Novelist of 2015!
January 1 at 12:40AM
    giraffmang: Many congratulations Jay.
    January 1 at 1:10AM
    barkingdog: Congratulations, Jay! This is quite an achievement.. :) e xx
    January 1 at 6:31AM
    Tessa Kay: Yay! Nobody deserves it more. You're a hard worker both in writing and reviewing.
    Well deserved. Will you still review my stories now that you're rich? :D
    January 1 at 8:47AM
    judiverse: Many congratulations to you, and much success in 2016. judi
    January 1 at 10:20AM
    I am Cat: Congratulations Jay! Awesome! ;)
    January 1 at 11:27AM
    gloria ...: Way to go Jayster. You write pretty good for a man. ;-)
    January 1 at 11:38PM
    Ideasaregems-Dawn: CONGRATULATIONS! You are a tiger, and you did swimmingly! (LOL) Way to go, Jay - so well-deserved. :)
    graceful animals animated photo: Cute animals animated 9361_074b_420.gif
    January 3 at 1:35AM
    Spitfire: I know a great writer when I read one. I urge you to enter contests!
    Hugs,
    Shari

    January 10 at 6:54PM
    Jay Squires: You are all so sweet. Thank you one and all!
    February 2 at 1:28AM
    Selina Stambi: Just saw this. You deserve it, Jay. Way to go ... happy for you!
    February 2 at 9:01PM
    justafan: I came to send you a PM and saw this...Congrats, Jay. :)
    Well deserved, my friend.
    February 3 at 10:31AM
    Walter L. Jones: I smile, and more, finish up, send me a packet where I can find the end. Walt
    March 6 at 3:07PM
    pegesusunicorn: Congratulations of the #2 Ranked Novelist of 2015. it is well deserved/
    Peg
    March 26 at 1:14AM

 
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Poetry 100 (+1)
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