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Location: Glendale, AZ USA
Gender: Female
Born: June 7, 1938
Member: Eternal Premier Author
Joined: August 2014
I recently moved from Las Cruces, New Mexico to live in Glendale Arizona. I live with my daughter and son-in-law. Since I have vision and health issues, I need to be with family since I can no longer drive.
After being on Fanstory now for almost five years I have learned some valuable lessons.
Am trying new poetry formats. I recently have written a cinquain, acrostics, non-fiction essays about wildlife, limericks and even created what I call a word acrostic. Word acrostics are where the first word of each line become a special message to the poem. I also created a format called spaceship, which is syllable based. the line are 1,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,1 centered and the words look like spaceships.

I'm not on this site to become a published author or poet. I am here to write and hopefully write things that will encourage others to do their best and not feel alone in this crazy world.
To learn all the poetic rules at this point in my life is not something I am wanting to do. So please consider that when you review my work. I do enjoy trying new forms of poetry and if what I write is only worthy of a C grade, then you can know I at least tried something new, and challenging.
My life story is the subject of a radio drama, below is a story of how it all came about.

I live in America, the radio drama was produced in America at the Pacific Garden Mission located in Chicago IL. Pacific Garden Mission is the largest and oldest mission for the homeless and down trodden in the world, it has been running since 1887 or there about. The way my story came about is I sent about 100 pages of stories about my life to the Mission, they in turn passed the stories to a script writer, who took the facts of my story and made it into a drama. There were actors and actresses who played the roles of the various people in my story.

To access my story google Patricia Lawrence unshackled
Go to listen then to the archives for OCT 2014
Name Patricia Lawrence
My program #'s are 3325 and 3326
Here is a message I got from the producer of the Unshackled program where my testimony has been produced as a radio drama.

Hello Patricia,

Thanks for the enormous time that you have given to this amazing
endeavor. All that you have shared will be used by the Lord
to assist our script writer with His story in your life.

Have a great day.
Flossie McNeil

Each time I have listened to it, at points it brings me to tears even though I know the story.
For folks who know me, they may or may not hear me as I sound, but I don't know if we really know how we sound to others. The story is true and the events were painful in spots, for me to tell. But I am so glad I did it and pray there will be hearts and minds changed when they hear my story.

Here is a message I received from the director of the unshackled programs about how my story is touching people around the world.

Thanks Patricia!

Your story greatly impacted many listeners around the world.

Blessings, Flossie

When I was 19 years old I was the victim of a date rape and became pregnant as a result. When I went home to my family, I was told that I was to have an abortion. I didn't know what that word meant. I asked my family to explain it to me. When they told me what the word meant, I said, "If there is a God I will not have an abortion, as I do not want to answer for taking the life of my child."
Therefore it was my decision to have my child and to relinquish him for adoption. This was without a doubt the hardest thing I have ever done in my life.

Here is a link to a blog that features a part of my life story.
My motto would be: If you want to try something, go for it, you will either learn or you will achieve the desired.
Photo is of me taken 1-11-20, after 104 pound loss.

Jesus said, I am the way, the truth and the life.
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patcelaw: I am taking steps to possibly having my book published.
August 25, 2020 at 12:32PM
    Jannypan (Jan) : Best wishes in your publishing endeavors.
    August 25, 2020 at 1:58PM
    patcelaw: Thank you Jan for the best wishes.
    August 25, 2020 at 7:36PM
    mrsmajor: I wish you well, Pat, best wishes in whatever you choose to do as you work toward having your book published..Blessing
    August 27, 2020 at 6:10PM
    zanya: Bravo ! Wishing you every success in publishing your book and looking forward to reading it ! Zanya
    September 3, 2020 at 3:26PM
    patcelaw: Writing the book has been an adventure to say the least. With my vision getting worse, I had to get it published if it was ever going to be done.
    September 3, 2020 at 4:45PM

patcelaw: I am going to be taking leave from the site for about a month. My eyesight is getting worse and it is quite hard for me to read and review. I also will be getting used to new glasses.
June 1, 2020 at 8:03PM
    damommy: I'm sorry you're having trouble, and will be gone a while. Hopefully, new glasses will be just what you need. Good luck.
    June 2, 2020 at 12:49AM
    Jannypan (Jan) : Take care, Patricia. See you when you return. Prayers for you.
    June 2, 2020 at 11:30AM
    Melissa Russell Deur: Patricia, I am praying for you today. I know you are preparing for the memorial of your twin brother and I feel your pain. I ask God to give you the strength to honor him... and your own unique relationship with him...and with Him!
    June 5, 2020 at 12:01AM
    Marjon van Bruggen: Patricia, take the time you need. Your eyes are important and need resting for a while. Glasses will help.
    Take care.
    June 7, 2020 at 6:50AM
    Lucy de Welles: Love you and am praying for you, Patricia! "Blessed are you eyes for they see, and your ears for they hear." --Jesus.
    June 7, 2020 at 8:02PM
    Becky Kern-Taylor: Pat thank you very much for friending me. At least we're in about the same age category.
    July 4, 2020 at 7:41PM

patcelaw: I would like all my fan story friends to pray for me and my family. My twin brother passed away about 20 hours ago. It is very difficult to lose a sibling, but doubly difficult to lose a twin, He was my womb mate, and as we grew up he was my protector and my very best friend.
May 21, 2020 at 5:40AM
    Jannypan (Jan) : Prayers to you and your family. May God surround you with His love.
    May 21, 2020 at 9:39AM
    Irish Rain: So sorry Miss Patricia. Prayers for your family. Your faith is an assurance that you will see him again. He is only gone from here, not from God, whom you walk with daily. God bless you.
    May 21, 2020 at 11:47AM
    damommy: Prayers sent up for you and yours. I'm so sorry for your loss.
    May 21, 2020 at 12:25PM
    mrsmajor: So very sorry for your loss, Pat. I do understand how devastating the loss of a sibling can be...especially a twin...may God in His infinite Mercy, hold you close, at this time...My Prayers for your well being..
    May 21, 2020 at 3:55PM
    Vanny: I am new I am a new member to the site. I give you all of my sympathy because I know how hard it is to lose a best friend and a protector .I also lost my only brother and my best friend and it was very very hard for me to get over it .My prayers are with you. Please take care of your self.
    May 22, 2020 at 2:14PM
    Gypsymooncat: I'm sorry for your loss Pat. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family through this difficult time xoxox
    May 24, 2020 at 9:19PM
    Lucy de Welles: Oh Patricia...I am so sorry. You can count on my prayers. May the Lord be very closely felt by you and the Holy Spirit be your abiding Comforter.
    May 24, 2020 at 11:28PM
    Melissa Russell Deur: Patricia, I am so sorry. My late husband was an identical twin. His brother was killed by a drunk driver when they were only 21 years old. My husband mourned for him for 28 years before he was reunited with him. I can imagine your pain from having watched my husband. You and your twin had a bond unlike most siblings. I pray that you feel God's peace and comfort.
    May 25, 2020 at 10:21PM
    Becky Kern-Taylor: So so sorry, but you know he is in good hands in heaven. Becky
    July 4, 2020 at 7:42PM

patcelaw: Has anyone heard form Sasha of late? I have not seen her in over a week>
March 13, 2020 at 9:46AM
    patcelaw: I know her health condition was bad, so I am hoping she is okay, just unable to communicate.
    March 14, 2020 at 1:22PM
    patcelaw: I just looked at her last reply to a review and it was on Mar 7.
    March 14, 2020 at 1:27PM

patcelaw: I would like you all to pray for my family at this time. My youngest brother died early this morning. Pray especially for his wife Flora, as she has lost her lover of over 35 years and this is going to be hard for her.
November 10, 2019 at 5:13PM
    Joan E.: I am so very sorry for your tremendous loss. My thoughts are with you and your family- Joan
    November 11, 2019 at 12:11AM
    mrsmajor: My sincere condolences, Pat, what a terrible loss for you, and especially for his wife, my thoughts and Prayers are with all of you..God Bless
    November 11, 2019 at 1:49AM
    Brett Matthew West: Condolences offered. May His peace that passes understanding be found in this difficult time.
    November 11, 2019 at 2:09PM
    Eve Lovell: Prayer and loving wishes for you Patcelaw. Such a hard time or you and yours. Blessings, Eve.
    November 11, 2019 at 4:49PM
    Marilyn Lou Berry: Oh, I am so sorry for your the loss you and your family are going through right now. Bless all of you and I am praying you all get the comfort you need at this horrendously hard time - love and tender thoughts - Marilyn
    November 11, 2019 at 11:34PM
    Brenda Elizabeth Rose: I am so sorry for your loss. Hopefully in time things will get. Blessings. ~Brenda
    December 4, 2019 at 11:45AM
    juliaSjames: I read your wonderful, caring tribute to your dear brother. May he rest in eternal peace. Sincere condolences to you, Flora and all family and friends.
    December 5, 2019 at 5:38AM
    Darlene Franklin: Oh, Pat, I'm so sorry to hear this news. Prayers ascending.
    December 10, 2019 at 6:35AM
    lauralumummu: I am sorry about your brother my oldest sister died suddenly 2 years ago it was very difficult. I am praying for you and your family.

    December 13, 2019 at 5:45PM
    lauralumummu: Hi Patricia, I listened to some of your story its like the old radio shows. It is very interesting I hope to listen to rest when there are fewer interruptions here. I am so sorry you had such an unsupportive family. Thank God He is faithful.
    December 13, 2019 at 8:35PM
    lance michaels: I'm so sorry to hear that. My thoughts and prayers are with you and your family. Very Heartbreaking to hear.
    February 1, 2020 at 5:49PM
    Dolly'sPoems: My thoughts are with you Patricia, love Dolly x
    February 8, 2020 at 1:16AM
    A. Louise Robertson: I am so sorry to hear of your loss. I pray that God gives you and the rest of your family the strength you need at this difficult time. You are not alone, let the prayers of those who care hold you up.
    February 8, 2020 at 1:40PM
    Marjon van Bruggen: The death of a beloved one is always a difficult moment to overcome. It is so incredibly sad! My thoughts go out to your sister-in-law Flora for the loss of her husband and to you for losing your beloved brother. May you all find strength in knowing that he dwells with God in peace now.
    February 17, 2020 at 1:14PM
    Teri7: I am so sorry to hear about your loss and his wife. You will all be in my prayers! May God bless and comfort you all! love, Teri
    April 4, 2020 at 4:06PM

patcelaw: Yesterday, I became a great grandmother for the 8th time, 5 great grandsons and 3 great granddaughters.
Today one of the great grandsons is 15 years old. How much more can an old lady be blessed? My oh my as my quiver is getting full.
May 10, 2019 at 11:38AM
    Irish Rain: Congratulations Miss Patricia! Wonderful news!
    May 10, 2019 at 1:58PM
    Susanjohn: Wonderful news!
    May 10, 2019 at 4:10PM
    nancyjam: That's wonderful. Congratulations!
    May 10, 2019 at 6:04PM
    Debra White: Congratulations! x
    May 11, 2019 at 11:53AM
    Ms. Snyder: 16 times blessed - fantastic! And a big Happy 15th Birthday to your great grandson! Cheers, Fonda
    May 11, 2019 at 7:33PM
    damommy: How wonderful!
    May 12, 2019 at 7:34PM
    Diana L Crawford: So precious, I too am a grandmother of 4 with one soon to arrive in October and a great-grandmother of three so far!! Truly, we are blessed!
    June 17, 2019 at 8:00PM
    Miss Jane: Congratulations! You are truly blessed.
    June 21, 2019 at 8:39PM
    Teri7: congratulations!
    April 4, 2020 at 4:07PM

patcelaw: I saw the eye specialist today and I have the early signs of glaucoma. Hopefully we have caught it early and that there are some steps we can take to help my sight.
April 2, 2019 at 3:51PM
    damommy: My prayers for you. 8-) I have macular degeneration.
    April 2, 2019 at 5:21PM
    Colin John: Good luck,its amazing what they can do today.
    April 2, 2019 at 5:59PM
    Irish Rain: Hope all turns out well Miss Patricia!
    April 2, 2019 at 8:58PM
    mrsmajor: My Prayers for your well being, Pat,
    I'm glad they caught it in time...
    April 4, 2019 at 12:46AM

FanStory wrote to patcelaw: The Fox Outfoxed finished third in the contest "Write a Lipogram! "
February 20, 2019 at 12:13AM
    lyenochka: Congratulations, Patricia!
    February 20, 2019 at 12:17AM
    patcelaw: WOW, I finally won a cash prize. Yahoo!!!!!!!
    February 20, 2019 at 3:14AM

patcelaw: I took a very hard fall today and spent several hours in the emergency room, after being transported by ambulance to the hospital. The x-rays and the CAT showed I did not have any broken bones, just quite a lot of bruises outward as well as internally. I am quite sore and will need to be needing to be treat my body gingerly.
February 5, 2019 at 11:14PM
    Jannypan (Jan) : I will say a prayer for a speedy recovery. Don't worry about replying to reviews. Take care of You!
    February 5, 2019 at 11:48PM
    Irish Rain: So sorry to hear this Miss Patricia. You are in my prayers, God bless.
    February 6, 2019 at 12:38AM
    Debra White: Wishing you a speedy recovery...take care, Debra :) x
    February 6, 2019 at 3:15AM
    mrsmajor: I'm so sorry to hear that Pat, I'm glad there were no broken bones, but I'm sure you must be sore...You will be in my Prayers...God Bless...
    February 6, 2019 at 8:17AM
    rama devi: Sending healing thoughts, love and prayers. xxoo
    February 6, 2019 at 10:57AM
    nancyjam: I'm so sorry to hear this Pat. Sending prayers and wishes for a speedy recovery. Nancy
    February 7, 2019 at 3:19PM
    MissMerri: It makes me sad to read this Patricia. I hope you are starting to feel better now, and please know we miss you and hope you're soon well. MM
    February 9, 2019 at 2:08PM
    Stephanie Launiu: Please take care of yourself.Looking forward to reading much more of your writing.
    February 14, 2019 at 3:16AM
    JudyE: I'm sorry you've had a fall. I do hope you'll take time to really give yourself time to heal. Being new, I'm just working out you fell quite a few days back so I hope you're back to full strength now.
    February 14, 2019 at 4:54AM
    patcelaw: After two very painful weeks I am getting better. Still cannot lay flat in bed, so I sleep in my recliner.
    February 20, 2019 at 5:33PM
    DeborahWrite: Dear Patricia, I joined today and just read sorry for your fall and I am relieved to read you had no broke bones.
    Although, I understand how frightening and painful a fall is. Take the best of care, Deborah
    March 5, 2019 at 5:25PM

patcelaw: I am so sorry to hear of the passing of Michael Cahill. He truly will be missed. His poetry was always so well written and presented beautifully.
February 2, 2019 at 11:25AM

patcelaw: My sister tells me that the cloudiness in my vision could be from scar tissue that has grown over my lenses that was put in when I had cataract surgery almost 4 years ago.
November 26, 2018 at 7:24PM
    Jannypan (Jan) : Is it possible to have it treated with a laser to get rid of it?
    November 26, 2018 at 7:50PM
    patcelaw: If it is scarring, it is my understanding that it can be treated with a laser.
    November 27, 2018 at 10:31AM
    damommy: I had mine lasered. It works!
    November 27, 2018 at 12:35PM

patcelaw: It is with regret that I have to say, I am almost to the point where is is becoming impossible for me to read and review works because of my worsening eyesight.
November 19, 2018 at 1:54PM
    Jannypan (Jan) : Patricia,
    Please just write and ignore writing reviews/replies. We understand. I would rather read your super poems/prose and not have you struggle reviewing/replying.
    November 19, 2018 at 4:05PM
    Susanjohn: Patricia, you keep on writing! Don't worry about reviews. :-))
    November 19, 2018 at 5:21PM
    damommy: I agree with Jan and Susan. If you can keep writing, don't worry about reviewing and such. 8-)
    November 19, 2018 at 6:39PM
    michaelcahill: Yep, they're on the money, Pat. Just write and do what you can. No worries. :))
    November 19, 2018 at 9:27PM

patcelaw: Mother's day was good until late in the afternoon and then I had an emotional meltdown. The last two weeks has bee quite emotional for me with the sale of my home and car and then making the move.
May 13, 2018 at 11:11PM
    Jannypan (Jan) : Patricia,
    You are with family who LOVE you & God is watching over you. Take it one day at a time.
    May 13, 2018 at 11:23PM

patcelaw: My move is finished, now just to do the unpacking and the final things to make it truly home. The home I am sharing with my daughter Penny and her husband Larry is beautiful. My two rooms being small have almost wall to wall furniture. It is nice to be here and it gives me a feeling of safety. I will get back to writing in the next few days.
May 5, 2018 at 9:26AM
    Jannypan (Jan) : Thanks for the update. You have been missed here. Take care.
    May 5, 2018 at 9:57AM
    mrsmajor: I'm so glad for you, I know what it means to feel safe with families near...God's Blessings for all of you...Hugs!
    May 5, 2018 at 10:16AM
    Irish Rain: Yay!! Sounds awesome Miss Patricia!!!
    May 5, 2018 at 9:40PM

patcelaw: Misty Dawn wrote: You haven't posted anything in two days I hope you're alright. Know my thoughts and prayers are with you, take care.

Thanks for your concern and prayers, I had upper chest, neck and jaw pain so had to be put in the hospital, The did and angiogram and found the stents in my hear working well and no more plaque build up in the arteries than was there two years ago. It was determined that the pain was heart related, but was found quickly enough that it did not cause heart damage. The pain could have been caused from stress related to the severe back pain I have endured for the past 2 1/2 years. I was given a light dose of morphine and it relieved the back pain enough that I can get some of my strength back.
After the eighteen days I may again have back pain, and not be able to get more morphine, until I have moved to Phoenix in May, then have to find a doctor there who will prescribe me morphine.

February 8, 2018 at 8:38PM
    damommy: Dear Patricia, I'm praying for you that you will have no pain, and you will keep writing.
    February 9, 2018 at 2:11PM
    Kathy Allmon: Hope you have a speedy recovery, Pat.

    February 20, 2018 at 5:23PM

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