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Decided to put some of my poems on "Fanstory" so that I can improve my writing skills. My punctuation, spelling etc. is not very good and although I try to rectify that, I struggle to remember what words to use. i.e. "to" or "too" "your" or "you're" etc. If anyone has any tips on how I can remember which one's go where, I would very much appreciate your response.
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brenda bickers:
I am sorry if I have not written any reviews for you all lately.
I did try to write some reviews but I think I need to take a break. Mum Died yesterday morning and I thought I could keep going but I can't. I hope you all have a great holiday this year and hope to be back soon.
Brenda.x
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 December 10, 2019 at 5:03PM
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| mrsmajor: I'm so sorry to hear that sad news, I know this is a difficult time for you. May all the joys you shared with your Mum, stay with you, and bring you some moments of peace...Warm Regards...Victoria
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December 10, 2019 at 5:58PM
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| Jannypan (Jan) : My prayers are with you and your family. Take care of YOU. FS will be here when you return. Know that we care about YOU. Please accept my condolences in the loss of your dear mother. Jan
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December 10, 2019 at 6:47PM
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| judester: My sympathy Brenda, sorry.
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December 10, 2019 at 8:53PM
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| WryWriter: So sorry for your loss. Hugs.
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December 10, 2019 at 10:14PM
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| Gloria ....: I will miss you Lady Brenda, and my thoughts are with you during this difficult time.
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December 11, 2019 at 1:31AM
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| sandramitchell: I'm so sorry for your loss, Brenda, so truly sad. Sending a hug. Take care. Sandra xx
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December 11, 2019 at 1:11PM
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juliaSjames: So sorry for your loss. May your dear mother rest in eternal peace.
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December 14, 2019 at 8:59AM
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| Gypsymooncat: I'm so sorry for your loss Brenda! How bloody sad. I hope the sun shines for you again real soon xoxoxoxoxoxo
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December 16, 2019 at 9:33PM
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FanStory wrote to brenda bickers:
Congratulations! RMS Titanic is the new Poem of the Month!
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November 7, 2019 at 12:13AM
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| Gloria ....: Way to go, Lady Brenda. :))
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November 7, 2019 at 12:54AM
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WalkerMan: Congratulations, Brenda! This was well deserved. -- Mike
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November 7, 2019 at 2:17AM
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brenda bickers: Thank you Lady Gloria and Mike, for my congratulations. That was a surprise. Bless you both.x
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November 7, 2019 at 6:04AM
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| CrystieCookie999: Congratulations on the poem of the month honor!
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November 7, 2019 at 9:27AM
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| Dorothy Farrell: Congratulations Brenda - well done!
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November 7, 2019 at 9:48AM
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juliaSjames: Congratulations on your win
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November 7, 2019 at 10:15AM
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| brenda bickers: Thank you Lady Gloria, and congratulations on your placing too. This was a tough contest.
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November 7, 2019 at 10:23AM
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| fm wright: Congratulations on a well deserved win!
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November 7, 2019 at 12:57PM
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| Gypsymooncat: Congratulations! This deserved to win! xoxo
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November 7, 2019 at 3:33PM
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| lyenochka: Congratulations, Brenda!
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November 7, 2019 at 4:01PM
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| Ideasaregems-Dawn: Wonderful poem! Congratulations, Brenda.
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November 7, 2019 at 6:37PM
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| rspoet: Congratulations!! Loved your poem!
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November 8, 2019 at 9:00AM
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| Sally Law: Congratulations, dear Brenda. Marvelous work! Sally Law xo
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November 8, 2019 at 9:25AM
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brenda bickers: Thank you everyone for your congratulations on my poem of the month win. This was so unexpected. xx
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November 8, 2019 at 9:36AM
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FanStory wrote to brenda bickers:
Suffer the Children finished second in the contest "Halloween Poetry"
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November 5, 2019 at 12:13AM
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| Irish Rain: Congratulations!!
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November 5, 2019 at 12:17AM
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| CD Richards: Well done!. A brilliant entry, and much deserved.
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November 5, 2019 at 4:12AM
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| brenda bickers: Thank you for your congrats, it was a good contest this year.
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November 5, 2019 at 4:18AM
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| Dorothy Farrell: Congratulations Brenda on being placed in the contest. Well done! Dorothy
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November 5, 2019 at 3:29PM
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| Gypsymooncat: Congratulations on your second place for poem of the month!
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November 5, 2019 at 3:58PM
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FanStory wrote to brenda bickers:
Calliope finished first in the contest "Free Verse"
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December 20, 2016 at 8:10PM
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| brenda bickers: Yippeee, my first number one win in entered contest. Thank you all for voting. x
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December 21, 2016 at 5:46AM
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| EricBrady: Congratulations on your win Brenda!!! Well deserved.
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December 22, 2016 at 4:53AM
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brenda bickers: Thank you Eric, most appreciated.
Brenda:))x
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December 23, 2016 at 3:48AM
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FanStory wrote to brenda bickers:
Congratulations! The Wishing Well is the new Poem of the Month!
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December 6, 2016 at 12:13AM
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michaelcahill: Surely you believe me NOW!
One of the best here. :))
Congratulations!!!!
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December 6, 2016 at 12:15AM
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| Gloria ....: Way to go, Lady Brenda. Yessssss.
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December 6, 2016 at 1:21AM
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RGstar: Well done Brenda, Your work, as I told is always on my favorite list.
Best wishes.
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December 6, 2016 at 6:28AM
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| sandramitchell: Congratulations, Pam! xxx :)
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December 6, 2016 at 8:16AM
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| Irish Rain: congratulations!!!
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December 6, 2016 at 11:11AM
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| rama devi: Congrats! :-)
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December 6, 2016 at 1:54PM
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| Ulla: Congratulations. So well deserved.:)))
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December 6, 2016 at 1:59PM
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brenda bickers: Thank you to everyone who sent congratulation messages. I was surprised to even be in the contest.
Thank you all. xx
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December 6, 2016 at 3:15PM
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| tfawcus: Congratulations, Brenda!
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December 6, 2016 at 10:40PM
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| BeasPeas: Hi Brenda. Congratulations on winning poem of the month. Hugs, Marilyn
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December 7, 2016 at 2:34PM
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| Ridley Williams: Great job, Brenda! So proud of you!
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December 15, 2016 at 9:44AM
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brenda bickers:
Happy Birthday to Dean Kuch. Hope you have a wonderful day. A great ghoul writer, a master of the word.x
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June 21, 2016 at 7:02AM
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| Taffspride: Happy Birthday Dean,
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June 21, 2016 at 7:13AM
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| mrsmajor: Happy Birthday Dean!
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June 21, 2016 at 8:18AM
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| Lynn27: Happy Birthday!
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June 21, 2016 at 8:21AM
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| F. Wehr3: Happy Birthday!
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June 21, 2016 at 10:01AM
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| TAB_that's me: Have a great one Dean and many blessings to you.
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June 21, 2016 at 11:10AM
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nancyjam: Wishing you the Happiest Birthday. May your year be blessed with all good things.
Nancy
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June 21, 2016 at 2:13PM
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FanStory wrote to brenda bickers:
Bitter-Sweet Revenge finished third in the contest "Crown of Heroic Sonnets"
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June 5, 2016 at 12:13AM
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| Gloria ....: Woohoo Lady Brenda. Super job and your first Crown. :))
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June 5, 2016 at 12:30AM
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michaelcahill: Well, duh! I told you so. LOL
What are you going to do when you know what you're doing? Congratulations. I'm not at all surprised. :)) mikey
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June 5, 2016 at 12:55AM
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brenda bickers: Hey Lady Gloria and Sir Mikey, thank you so much. I am so grateful for your continued support and all your help. I am so over the moon with this. My first ever win. the most I have ever won before this was a miniature conifer tree in the church raffle. LOL.
Thank you.
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June 5, 2016 at 1:16AM
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| I am Cat: Great job Brenda!
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June 5, 2016 at 2:49AM
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Dean Kuch: Great work, Brenda.
Congrats! ~Dean :)
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June 5, 2016 at 5:14AM
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brenda bickers: Thank you all again for my congrats from you all. So pleased I have managed third place. it certainly does boost the confidence.
thank you.
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June 6, 2016 at 6:52AM
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brenda bickers:
Hi to all
just wanted to say that I have finally managed to receive my first Accomplishment certificate. Yippee!!!
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April 21, 2016 at 6:44AM
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| I am Cat: What's an Accomplishment certificate?
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April 21, 2016 at 11:46AM
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brenda bickers: Sorry Cat, I meant an all time great certificate. Think I have just invented a new one. lol
Brenda:))x
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April 21, 2016 at 1:58PM
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I am Cat: Oh... You mean, All Time Best? Ahhh... Yes, I thought there was a new category I was missing. Lol
Congratulations!
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April 21, 2016 at 3:21PM
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| Gloria ....: Great news, Brenda! And with a magnificent Crown of Heroic Sonnets too!
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April 21, 2016 at 4:07PM
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| michaelcahill: Major coolness. Your first ATB on an awesome Crown of Heroic Sonnets. You know how to make an entrance, Girl!!!!
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April 21, 2016 at 4:46PM
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| brenda bickers: Thanks everyone for all your comments, much appreciated. Brenda:))x
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April 21, 2016 at 5:54PM
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brenda bickers:
Hi Folks, just wanted to say that there are some amazing people here on Fanstory. I have been a member for just over four months now when I joined didn't have a clue about poetry and formats etc. It was quite daunting at first but some people were quick to help and support me and now I enjoy every moment of it. What a great place to find unselfish helpful friends. Thank you all so much.
Brenda:))x
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April 21, 2016 at 5:13AM
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| giraffmang: I've been here for seventeen months and I still haven't a clue...
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April 21, 2016 at 6:01AM
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| brenda bickers: Bless you giraffmang, if I can help at all!!!Brenda:))x
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April 21, 2016 at 6:41AM
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brenda bickers:
Hi everyone,
I have a poem posted in the music forum called "A Soldier Comes Home" Micheal Cahill has posted it for me because I didn't know how to do it. Would love it if you would have a listen:)) Thanks.
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April 11, 2016 at 7:34AM
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| flylikeaneagle: brenda: the music, words and photos are breath taking. I felt I was the Mom waiting on my son. So many have suffered the loss of youth who served our country. Our country should promote our country instead of fighting their battles. Love this. flylikeaneagle
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April 11, 2016 at 8:21AM
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brenda bickers:
Would just like to say a big "THANK YOU" to Michaelcahill for posting my poem set to music on the music forum as I wasn't sure how to do this myself. x
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April 10, 2016 at 3:41PM
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| michaelcahill: It's major coolness. Go listen!
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April 10, 2016 at 5:19PM
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