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AJ McCall:
Hey everyone... I won't be active on my paid account after June 7th cause other things have to be paid for.. just giving a heads-up.
God bless!!!
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 May 14, 2022 at 8:35PM
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| karenina: Hurry back!
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May 15, 2022 at 12:39AM
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FanStory wrote to AJ McCall:
Benny finished second in the contest "Dialogue Only Writing Contest"
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April 9, 2022 at 12:13AM
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juliaSjames: Congratulations!
Julia
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April 9, 2022 at 6:58AM
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FanStory wrote to AJ McCall:
The Warning Signs finished second in the contest "80 Word Flash Fiction"
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January 8, 2022 at 12:13AM
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| scongrove: You are a talented writer and a wonderful person! I'm so thrilled to have got to know you here. Keep writing my friend!
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January 28, 2022 at 11:53AM
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AJ McCall:
I want to thank everyone who revied the chapters of my book Dava and Goliath. I appreciate and love all the feedback. But I will be taking down chapter four because I realize it's not key to my story. All I wanted to do was highlight 'The Garden,' in that chapter. I'll be revising chapter 3 and making it longer and then post a completely different chapter 4. This is all occurring since I read over my story and thought it could be done a little bit better. I'm not sure if I'm the only person who feels this way. But right now, it does, lol.
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October 6, 2021 at 5:14PM
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AJ McCall:
Can anyone give me an example of a terrifying description for a goblin? I'm working on a story where the goblins are being used to spread disease by biting their victims. I want to make them have almost the same ferociousness as a werewolf... Any thoughts are welcome.
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September 28, 2021 at 5:47PM
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| lancellot: There is an Anime/Manga called Goblin Slayer. You should read or see it.
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September 29, 2021 at 2:25PM
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| AJ McCall: Okay... I'll check it out. Thanx
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September 30, 2021 at 10:14AM
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| AnnaLinda: A covid-19 injection
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September 30, 2021 at 5:38PM
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AJ McCall:
Got a question, a second edition of a book is basically that book re-written, right? I want to re-write a book I published about three years ago...
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August 1, 2021 at 5:25PM
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| Brett Matthew West: A key question might be what benefit would the second edition have for readers of the first edition? Needs to be more than minor edits of misspelled words and a few scene detail changes.
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August 1, 2021 at 8:52PM
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| AJ McCall: Actually, it's a pretty short book and I wanted to make it longer since the entire book is around a hundred pages or so. I want to almost a completely new story for this character; give it some depth in order for my readers to get to know her and the other characters better.
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August 2, 2021 at 10:57AM
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| AJ McCall: *almost make
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August 2, 2021 at 10:57AM
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| Sandra Barlow: I don't think that it means that the book is rewritten. It can mean that there are some changes, or that the book went out of print.
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October 31, 2021 at 7:13AM
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AJ McCall:
For those who read my post, The Light, I just entered the contest. Cross your fingers for me!!
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May 15, 2021 at 5:11PM
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AJ McCall:
Can anyone help with describing an 'underground room'? My main character is underground in a room made of dirt but I'm not really sure how to write it...
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April 21, 2021 at 4:56PM
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Adwin Clark Ace: Not sure of the story's location, or the direction you're going in, and how you're needing it to read, but maybe this will spur some ideas for you.
"Georgia red clay adds a touch of color to these walls. Usually red isn't my first choice. It doesn't really scream "welcome friends", but you can't be too picky when you're living underground."
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April 22, 2021 at 2:35PM
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| AJ McCall: Hmm... it's underground right now. But it's not a tunnel. More like an underground room. And the dirt is more like a normal color: black or dark brown but thank you.
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April 22, 2021 at 2:51PM
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AJ McCall:
For those who read the 1st Chapter of Jonetta's Rhythm, I'd suggest you go back and read the ending because I did edit it a bit. The second chapter will be coming soon!
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March 1, 2021 at 4:17PM
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December 9, 2021 at 12:14AM
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AJ McCall:
Does anyone know a good website for describing loud sounds?
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December 19, 2020 at 3:37PM
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| nor84: There are various writers' phrase books that describe the senses, including hearing. Check out Amazon books. There's no website I know of that does it. There's also the adjectives in the dictionary: banged, crashed, boomed, deafening, etc.
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December 19, 2020 at 9:05PM
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| AJ McCall: Okay, thank you!
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December 21, 2020 at 10:48AM
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FanStory wrote to AJ McCall:
The Surprise finished second in the contest "What Would Happen?"
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August 24, 2020 at 12:13AM
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| Colin John: Well done on your placing and thank you for noting my place 9 days ago with FanLove, I have just seen it. cheers Colin
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September 2, 2020 at 11:12AM
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AJ McCall:
I thank all the people who've been reviewing my posts! I'm more confident and found a new joy in writing because of FanStory! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
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July 18, 2020 at 8:50PM
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AJ McCall:
For all those who enjoyed My DNA's What?! I will be posting the chapter soon. Still working on it. If you think you can help, PM me.
Have a lovely Sunday morning!! (Or afternoon!)
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July 5, 2020 at 12:45PM
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None yet. 
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No writing posted.
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| Benny finished second in the contest "Dialogue Only Writing Contest" | April 9 at 12:13AM
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| The Warning Signs finished second in the contest "80 Word Flash Fiction" | January 8 at 12:13AM
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 | Of Shadows reached "Recognized" status. | August 28 at 11:48PM
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| Rhythm reached "Recognized" status. | March 2 at 8:48AM
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| The Train finished second in the contest "Suddenly a superhero" | September 19 at 11:10AM
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