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kiwisteveh
Many thanks for the kind words.

Steve
24-Nov-2020
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Dreamcatcher by kiwisteveh

Excellent
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There is emotion and feelings in your words. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words that adds to the strength of your theme. You did well with the 5-7-5 form and your words have a strong steady beat.


Thanks very much for your review.
23-Nov-2020
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Winter Fun

Excellent
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This is a happy, cheery and positive poem. Playing in the snow sounds like so much fun right now. Excellent use of the 1-6-1 form that creates a clear winter scene.


Gert sherwood
Thank you very much for your thoughts.
Gert
23-Nov-2020
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Look in Your Mirror at Yourself by Gert sherwood

Excellent
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Your poem is so true. When we look in the mirror, we see our real selves."Study the features of your face" is a great line. How often do we study the features of our face.


Pam (respa)
You are welcome, Elaine.
23-Nov-2020
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Winged Angels by mermaids

Excellent
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-Nice image
and presentation, Elaine.
-I enjoy birds, too.
-You have written a good
poem about them with
specific examples, imagery,
and rhyme.
-I like the line about variety
and the new day, as well as
the closing couplet.
-Well done.


lyenochka
Thank you, Elaine! Thanks for reviewing. Hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving!
Blessings!
23-Nov-2020
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Moose-licking-Cars Season by lyenochka

Excellent
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This is a fun poem to read out loud. I can see the moose licking the cars. Your poetic form is smooth and is a theme that I never thought of, creative and unique.


Helena Frances
Thank you:) It's hard to give up traditions, even temporarily,
but it seems necessary and wise to do so.
Stay safe:)
23-Nov-2020
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Not Just A Day by Helena Frances

Excellent
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I like your poem because it is so true. Gratitude can be given from a distance. This is an excellent Thanksgiving poem that is relevant to today. Excellent use of words.


Jerome Goldberg
Mermaids - Thank you for the 5 star review. Hope you have a wonderful holiday despite all that is going on in the world and your sensitive stomach. We will be dining with the kids and grandkids via Zoom. - That is a beautiful picture that you are holding, did you paint it? Stay well - Jerry
23-Nov-2020
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Thanksgiving Day by Jerome Goldberg

Excellent
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I applaud your poem. I love Thanksgiving but with a sensitive stomach, over eating is out of the question. You have created a two line poem that shows we need to not overindulge. Excellent use of words.


l.raven
HI Elaine, so good to see you my sweet friend...
thank you so much for a wonderful review...
and your so right...this was such a year with so much...
Happy Holidays...love you...Linda xxoo
23-Nov-2020
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Happy Thanksgiving to all by l.raven

Excellent
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Your words covered it all. This was such a year with so much. I appreciate your mention of those who suffered through the fires in California, my heart goes out to them. Excellent free verse form that captures the essence of our times and the importance of thanking God.


Mary Vigasin
Thank you for your review and comments. Believe me when I say age does not improve experience!
Mary
23-Nov-2020
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Dead Duck Wallpaper by Mary Vigasin

Excellent
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Love your upside down duck wallpaper tale. Our house needs so much work and we have no money to pay someone to do it, so here I go and I am sure I would have made the same mistake. Love your story.


Badger_29
Thank you so much for your warm review, sorry for the delay in responding. There to support me and for this I'm truly grateful.

#givethanks

Blessings, and Happy Thanksgiving!

Brother 916-737-6697 Cull

Darren
22-Nov-2020
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Thanksgiving by Badger_29

Excellent
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Excellent acrostic form that captures well the meaning of Thanksgiving. Gratitude is wonderful and keeps us on a good path. Your last word "gratitude" fits your poem perfectly. It is the meaning of Thanksgiving.



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