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Teri7
Thank you so much for this great review and your lovely and true comments. love and blessings Teri
12-May-2021
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I Have Faith Because...... by Teri7

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Your words cover all the reasons to have faith. I like your line" I have faith because He has never forsaken or failed me ". It is a line that is at the heart of faith. Excellent poem and i wish you well in the contest.


judiverse
You're welcome. It is fun to think of names for our pets. judi
12-May-2021
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Gotta Get a Giddles by mermaids

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You must be fond of the name Giddles. It does have a neat sound. I certainly don't know what it would be like to have guinea pigs, but they have to be named, too. I like the names you chose. It is nice that the guinea pig recognizes her name of Lulu. A great name. Spelling--potato. Also, Like he used to, not use to. Delightful presentation. I like the observation that you need to get out more. Don't we all? judi


judiverse
Thanks for your review and comments. You're going above the call of duty if you cook fish for your cats. judi
12-May-2021
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Focus on Cat Food by judiverse

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Cats do seem to favor fish like Smokey. My cats are fond of chicken which I cook for them occasionally. I like the idea of a focus group about cat food, i can see cats participating in it. Excellent dialog here.


judiverse
Thanks for your review and comments. Babies have actually been saved through the Safe Haven Baby Boxes. I hope the newspaper will give a follow up on what happened to the baby that was recently left in one. judi
12-May-2021
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Boxes for Babies by judiverse

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This is a good idea. like you state in your article, it gives the baby the chance at a good life. The firefighter who came up with the idea, is to be admired.


jesse n. behrens
thank you!
12-May-2021
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Fairies by jesse n. behrens

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I love poems about fairies and your words are light, like the flight of a fairy. Excellent free verse form that takes the reader into a fantasy world that well describes the attributes of a fairy.


Ginnygray
Thank you, mermaids, for a review and special comments!
12-May-2021
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Handicapped by Ginnygray

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Your story is heartwarming and shows how the handicapped are often, not handicapped. Your words remind the reader to see things differently and I am sure you enjoyed teaching these students.


karenina
So true! I plan on getting up at dawn at least once a week! All is quiet then...I could hear the !use whisper!

Thank you, Karenina
12-May-2021
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Perusing Pottery... by karenina

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I like the structure of your words, very unique. "Life's cracked and imperfect" is a use of words that reflects life, for life is cracked and imperfect, yet life pushes through. Excellent use of words and free verse form.


Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Thanks so very much for your time and the fine review! I really appreciate it!
11-May-2021
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Visual Delight by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

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Nature is so healing during these trying times. You have a smooth flow of lines and words that makes the flowers come alive."They are only flowers of God's design" is a perfect line and so true. God creates our beautiful flowers.


Leann DS
Thank you very much. Living with an alcoholic wasn't easy, but it taught me a lot. Thanks for your review and comments. Hugs.
11-May-2021
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Busted by Leann DS

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Your words are vivid and your story comes to life. I am sure many can relate to living with an alcoholic. Excellent writing here of a true tale. Best wishes for the contest.


Wils
Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Geoff
11-May-2021
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Phantom of the Darkness by Wils

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Excellent twenty syllable poem that creates a vivid image and brings forth feelings. I like the image of the moon and stars singing together. Excellent use of words and poetic form.



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