God and Man
A 4 Line Poem Contest Entry in 1, 5, 5, 9 syllable
Pays: 8 points.
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Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Thanks very much for your time and nice review. I appreciate it!
23-Jan-2021
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Natural Tips for Guys! by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent
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As a nurse, I find this fascinating. I have many male patients with UTIs and never thought of how urinating behind a tree could be so educational. Funny but true advice here.


Seshadri_Sreenivasan
I am grateful to you for taking time and commenting on my posts. It is very heartening indeed. Thanks very much for your support.
23-Jan-2021
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Sustainability by Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent
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I like your words, they make a clear statement about our actions being beneficial. Your poem also makes the reader think about doing good for this earth and people. Excellent little poem that says much.


Charley Lake
Thank you so much!
23-Jan-2021
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Delicate by Charley Lake

Excellent
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There is emotion and feelings in your words. Glass being broken and then repaired by love is a perfect analogy to the cycle of abuse that exists. You say much in few words which is not easy. Excellent four lines of poetry.


BethShelby
Thank you so much for the review and the nice comments. The contest is over. It one third.
Beth
23-Jan-2021
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My Link With the Great Beyond by BethShelby

Excellent
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Excellent dialog between you and the house plant. The house plant is quite the character as your Mom and is a great way to communicate with your Mom. Plants bring joy and nature into our lives. Best wishes for this unique contest.


Mary Vigasin
Thank you for your kind thoughts and review. It is appreciated.
23-Jan-2021
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Rose by Mary Vigasin

Excellent
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I enjoyed reading about Rose. She is a strong woman and obviously can take anything. Excellent writing with a smooth flow of story and the characters of Rose and Marco are vivid.


Pam (respa)
You are welcome, Elaine.
23-Jan-2021
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Dancing Flowers by mermaids

Excellent
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-Nice artwork, Elaine.
-You did a good job with
the special Friday edition of a poem.
-It is fanciful with very good imagery.
-It is full of joy, and even a cat!
-Well done; have a very good day!


Pam (respa)
You are quite welcome, Elaine
23-Jan-2021
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The Mermaid and the Owl by mermaids

Excellent
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-Very nice image and
presentation, Elaine.
-You really do like owls!
-A well written poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You also tell a story with
a few words.
-I like the second verse about
"giving a hoot!"
-The whole poem is good, and
the ending couplets provide
a positive and magical ending.
-We need more of those!


Melissa Russell Deur
Thank you for your commitment to helping those in a nursing home. I know you have a generous spirit--because you gave me a sixth star.
I really appreciate your review!
23-Jan-2021
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Covid Angels by Melissa Russell Deur

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Thank you so much for your words. I am one of those workers, I am a nurse in a nursing home. Your words have a spiritual feel that makes the reader feel good. "by God's sweet hot breath" is a wonderful line.


Susan Larson
Thank you. I wasn?t sure how obscene fart was but there is a children?s book called Walter the Farting Dog and I?ve seen it in elementary school libraries! But,yes, I thought subbing was fun
23-Jan-2021
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A Sub Story by Susan Larson

Excellent
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This is a great story. Maybe a farting contest seems off color but I think you ignited something in this young man and he became so successful. Your story is uplifting. I was a substitute teacher for high many years ago, quite the experience.


Faith the Border collie
Thank you :D and I 100% agree! They do not understand things like "I just vaccumed".
23-Jan-2021
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Mud dog by Faith the Border collie

Excellent
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As a dog lover, I can relate to your words. Excellent use of the 1-6-1 form. Dogs still want to jump on us even if they have been in mud. You have a smooth flow of rhyming words that create a clear scene.



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