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victortouche
Thank you, patrick.
31-Jan-2021
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Of Nurture and Nature by victortouche

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Hi victortouche,

Interesting poem, it touches on a number of matters in the human condition as I read it. Good imagery in the lines and some interesting thoughts to consider.

Patrick


victortouche
Yes, you understand.

Thank you,

Doug
31-Jan-2021
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Caned Reflection by victortouche

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Hi victortouche,

Interesting and pleasant theme, a reminder of those dalliances, of evenings and perhaps afternoons spent in company of friends and loved ones. Nicely done.

Patrick


victortouche
Thank you, Patrick.
12-Sep-2019
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The Estate Ruins by victortouche

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Hi victortouche,

An interesting and somewhat challenging theme running through your poem, it seems to highlight both the failures and the successes.

It reads well, you have used some very good and powerful imagery.

Patrick


Alcreator Litt Dear
Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
07-Aug-2018
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God Gifts Breasts' Beauty! by Alcreator Litt Dear

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Hi Alcreator Litt Dear

An interesting form in which to express your thoughts on the beauty of creation. Beauty and function in the means for succouring the offspring.

Patrick


Alcreator Litt Dear
Sorry for being late.
Thank you for this good review.
07-Aug-2018
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Discover Your Real Status by Alcreator Litt Dear

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Hi Allcreator Litt Dear

Interesting thought to ask one's spouse for a view of your status - it could lead to some rather frank exchanges. But I expect it depends on how confident one feels in oneself.

Patrick


victortouche
Thank you so much.
29-Nov-2017
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And The Ethics Thereof by victortouche

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Hi victortouche,

Yup, as a father with now adult daughters, I can hear myself saying (and writing) more or less the same things to my girls (and to my son come to that) at about the same age as your young lady.

One can but hope they take the advice offered. I admit I wish someone had given me this sort of advice and guidance when I was sixteen. Perhaps they did, and perhaps with typical hubris ...

Patrick


jadapenn
Thank you. I have been away. Luv jada
13-Sep-2017
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Sweet Call by jadapenn

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Hi Jada,

Good to see you back to writing poems - even naughty ones, though in this instance I think the image is perhaps naughtier than the poem!

You haven't lost your touch, obviously. Nice one, it made an enjoyable read.

Pat


Janilou
Thank you so much, Patrick. I have finally gotten going on this project once more, and revised the beginning. Thank you for your encouraging words.
14-Apr-2017
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JULU - The End Of The Beginning by Janilou

Prologue of the book Julu

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Hi Janilou,

It seems Jacks anger has awoken something in his cave. You give a hint of something scale, perhaps opalesque, but Jack doesn't wait to see it. Hopefully you will follow up with that revelation.

Interesting tale and it has potential to develop further. One small correction for you -
one Friday afternppn while - afternoon ..

Patrick


barbara.wilkey
LOL Thank you for the kind review. Your reviews are always a joy to read.
24-Apr-2016
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Chapter Veintisiete, (27) Part Uno by barbara.wilkey

Chapter 92 of the book Texas Dream Catcher

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Hi Barbara,

I see the thot plickens on this land deal ... I'm guessing there is something questionable about the missing acerage, like perhaps a rival land gift by the Mexican government. The note on the Commanche chief's name raised a smile as it shows the perhaps earthy humour the tribes enjoyed. Terry Pratchett picked this up in some of his stories, with a Indian 'spirit guide' named Two Man Bucket and his twin brother named Two Dogs ... Which he would have given anything to have ended in 'Fighting' ...

Patrick


barbara.wilkey
Louisville is an interesting city on it's own. Thank you for the kind review.
13-Apr-2016
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Chapter Veintiseis, (26) Part Cinco by barbara.wilkey

Chapter 91 of the book Texas Dream Catcher

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Hi Barbara,

I can't wait for the revelation of the chief's real name ...

Every family has its skeletons in the cupboard, but it seems that Gunther must have been a bit of a real character. Those old river boats were fascinating and the river a tricky place in itself. A few years ago I visited Louisville, KY, and wanted to look round the Louisville Belle, but wasn't allowed to, apparently on orders of the Coastguard on security grounds.

Patrick



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