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Spiritual Echo

victortouche
Smiling, thank you.
15-Jan-2021
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Evo by victortouche

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Good poets can turn any subject into art, and you have proved just so. No bluebells or birds a twitter but a simple look at evolution. But pray tell what you would do with the theory that we did not come from apes but from the sea?

Very pleasant read.


victortouche
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14-Jan-2021
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Common Ground by victortouche

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A most unusual post and presentation. I suppose the question raised is the same as the urban legend, the story of a philosophy professor who asked his students a single-word question on their final examination paper. The question was 'Why?'

The only student who got a perfect mark was the one with the courage to answer with two words.

'Why not?'

And I'm pretty certain that is my answer to the question you pose.

'Why not?'


victortouche
Flat? Well...I don't think that description has ever been applied to me. LOL Thank you.
03-Jan-2021
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Better Learn Your Shoes by victortouche

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Think the last line would be better served by stating she was grounded, unafraid of her height, or me....but then again, what do I know....are you flat?


victortouche
Yes, it could be either.
But you see, as always.

Thank you,

Doug
26-Sep-2020
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Broken Crimes and Quiet Scenes by victortouche

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Your poetry is always so layered, metaphorically no doubt means something completely different than your intent, it still has a powerful message. For me, I saw gun powder, but it could just as easily be termites who chew away at the foundation of happiness or life. Gloomy moods and defeat moving aside for a new day.


victortouche
Yes, I hope it holds so. Thank you.
20-Oct-2019
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At Last...Acceptance by victortouche

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Yes, I'd have to say, having read your work off and on for years, the curtains parted and you discovered something inside you that you thought lost.

This poem is so very heartfelt in both its wonder at your own emotions and the darkness you seem to be willing to shed.


victortouche
I thank you.
09-Oct-2019
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Relational, Non Rational Point of V by victortouche

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Sure, one could surmise it relates to Point of Victory rather than view. Sanity is all relevant to who is accused and who is judging, yet many relationships with loppy power structures could be deemed successful.

You present thought to ponder.


judiverse
You're welcome. Sometimes great wisdom comes from the mouths of kids. judi
17-Jul-2019
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Ironic Smoke Signals by Spiritual Echo

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Glad to see this post from you. The kid really nailed the narrator. Smoking is an expensive habit, even more now than ever, so a smoker's money is really going up in smoke. I hope the narrator kept that in mind next time she talked to her son about spending money. Excellent background for this with the Fourth of July fireworks and the temptation to buy them. This story is well put together, and best of luck in the contest. Great entry. judi


Sasha
I've been taking some time off to give my eyes a break.
15-Jul-2019
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Ironic Smoke Signals by Spiritual Echo

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This is a terrific entry for this 100 word flash fiction contest. I am still trying to quit and could relate to this one on a personal level. I sincerely wish you all the best in this contest too.


Ulla
I sure hope so as well. x
22-Apr-2019
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Manufactured Enemies by Spiritual Echo

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Hi there, good to see a posting from you. I'm totally on your side. I can't stand the man, but so many in the US think he is the answer to everything. Very well written essay. All the best. Ulla:)))


Sasha
It was great hearing from you too.
19-Apr-2019
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Manufactured Enemies by Spiritual Echo

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I have been locked out of my computer for so long I feared I may have missed one of your awesome posts. I loved this and believe most Americans feel about Trump. Thanks you so much for sharing it with us. I voted, but not for Trump and was mortified that he actually won. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.



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