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rama devi
Thanks for sharing! Amazing that you write daily. I don't, but I suppose I do write letters (sometimes), 'reviews' here, and edits on my client's work...so that's also writing! I tend to mostly wrote poems when my muse is in the mood.

Warm hugs!
rd
26-Jul-2020
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Earth by Xylok

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Indeed...we do need major renovations, and yes, we're RAD! I think this is the shortest poem from you I've ever seen--yet no less powerful.

Love the alliteration of R~

Nice to see you posting, Buddy!

Love, bbb


rama devi
Missed you too! Your wordless titles crack me up! I'm not able to review that long one today....too pooped! But I can imagine it's a bunch about empty nests, right?
Congrats to Nakoska!
Sending hugs!
rd
26-Jul-2020
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Earth by Xylok

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Indeed...we do need major renovations, and yes, we're RAD! I think this is the shortest poem from you I've ever seen--yet no less powerful.

Love the alliteration of R~

Nice to see you posting, Buddy!

Love, bbb


MissMerri
Hahahaha Xy, your hyperbole is wonderful to read, yet you never forget the honesty too. I'm glad you have not changed over the years. It is always special to have a review from you, and the many stars and many kind words make my day. Thank you, and don't go too far away. ;p MM
20-May-2020
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You'll Know by MissMerri

Exceptional
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awesome poem, love it, super romantic too. poetry like this fights against nastiness like a whore deserves love regardless! you have a beautiful heart and it's beyond epic that you share it with us and nowhere near enough people tell you so, or with enough emphasis, even though you receive lots and lots of truthful deserved high praise. will this poem outlast poe's the raven, who knows, most would prolly say no is my guess, but should it, well, as far as i'm concerned, that's HEAVILY debatable! keep em coming for millennia ongoing, figure out how to extend your life, rage against the dyin' of the light, don't let em or you tell you you CAN'T POSSIBLY be still pumpin' out poetry like a wonka machine bustin out everlasting gobstoppers when you're over a centillion epochs young!


MissMerri
You do have a most unique take on life and poetry, Zy, and it is always a pleasure to read your effusive words. Thank you so much for challenging me, and then for rewarding me with a review like this one. I truly appreciate both.
21-Mar-2020
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What a Beautiful Day by MissMerri

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ANOTHER SWEET LOVELY AND RHYTHMICAL GEM
FROM THE HEART AND THE SOUL OF MISS MERRI, ahem,
WHO prolly would prefer I didn't all caps
and writes of sweet notions and sentiments freed
from a heart so in LOVE with the sky and the seed,
with space, with NATURE, with Emily, peace,
truth, Truth, GOD, that she'll release
poem after poem in the name of it all,
and those, like me, tip a rose, holler and call
her name to the masses, so all aliens
and angels and monarchs amid diadems
wherever they are, whatever dimensions,
will notice her, WORTHY, of LOVE without end...

SIX STARS, not for rhyme, though I LOVE rhyme, nor
for how your meter and cadence were so
'A' quality according to professors who take
the time to note rhythm and music CAN QUAKE,
exclusively anyhoo, but also since this
poem is the gist of TRUE LOVE'S kiss
applied to whoever it may land upon,
me, and the others who'll feel it spawn,
and also because you released it to me
and all else who'll be glad they found it FREELY,
and also for reasons I'll leave in the rough
for some other time, when we're hugging and stuff!? :)


I'm in love with the green and admire the trees
and the things unseen, like the wisp of a breeze,
and also with poets who dare to soul squeeze!


Marjon van Bruggen
Good Lord, Xylok, those are superlatives, one after another AND 6 stars! Thanks a whole bunch.
17-Mar-2020
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Oak Song by Marjon van Bruggen

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rad! a nostalgic trip, a pleasant place, a break from cornavirus concerns, a respite amid 'swirlin', notions of friendship and peace and gratitude, cooperation, reciprocal determination, brethrenism, ecosystemology, nature blowin' kisses throughout the cosmos, and more, and in three lines at that.


MissMerri
I can't help but notice the similarities in the photo illustrating this poem and the one illustrating YOU. ;p I think you liked this, perhaps because you saw yourself in the words as well as the picture. I know you are an emotional and explosive poet, so I guess that's to be expected. Thank you very much for visiting my portfolio and for granting such encouragement to this old poet. It is great to have you here. MM
15-Mar-2020
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Wondering Heights by MissMerri

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freaking awesome! i love how it takes me so many more words to explain how come your short poem way shorter than this comment ROCKS and how i still don't even barely but beyond begin doing so much less accomplish the FEAT...


Marjon van Bruggen
It was pure pleasure for me.
27-Feb-2020
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Stuck In Now by Xylok

Chapter 142 of the book Volume 3

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Without any doubt a six stars from me.

A poem about poems and poets, in an incredible voice read and heard, seeped into my heart and mind. I am most impressed by the voice, Xylok, you must be an experienced poetry reader, or maybe an actor as well as a first-class poet. I liked especially the dialog-parts, the questions, and answers, the frustrations, and satisfactions of a poet. Where you use some phrases of very well-known poets, it is always fitting, illustrative, logic.
It is a very long, but never boring poem. I preferred to first hear the whole poem before reading it. And I am glad I did because of the interpretation of the poet/reader, which added much to the incredible text. Thank you very, very much for this great experience.


Y. M. Roger
And there I put my focus because who knows what fantastical worlds await me there... ;) :) :)
11-Feb-2020
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Limes Save Rhymes! by Xylok

Chapter 195 of the book Volume 7

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Such a joyful Bohemian Rhapsody for the day... Sublime limes for the Yoda times... and your own vocabulary that would do great in a song!! ;) :) Thanx so much for that detour from reality for the day -- a teacher needs these things, ya know?! Splendid! ;)


Sherman541
you are most welcome -sorry for the slow response I have not been one much as of late and 541 came because Sherman was not aloud at the time so many they said.
16-Jul-2018
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Keepin' It Real by Xylok

Chapter 138 of the book Volume 3

Exceptional
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I absolutely love this. It was a bit hard to read, that blue on the black back ground, but It really is quite clever and so brave. I hope God takes him back to change his ways. Thank you for sharing. Sherman541


rama devi
Absolutely disagree, my friend. It is a tool.
25-Jun-2018
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Define Nothing? by Xylok

Chapter 136 of the book Volume 3

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How can "Nothing" "be"?
(First question in the quiz...)
and if it can't, then how come we
keep claiming, "Nothing is..."?



Hee hee! I enjoyed the irony in your opening and the clever slant rhymes, too!


The second stanza seems to be missing a verb. Here is a suggestion:

How can "Nothing" (be)
"Something",
"Everything",
and yet, unless all things
have always existed,
it MUST have grown wings!


Well put - and fun rhymes:

And if all things
have ALWAYS existed,
than Nothing
ever
er...never...
persisted!


Well put (brain teaser style)...note one spag:

If I could define "Nothing"(,)
Nothing couldn't not be,
or be, for it would therefore be one thing
existing at least technically.


I vehemently agree....and also suggest:

So, how about we vehemently agree
my answer deserves at least a B(,)
and both of us go our separate ways
existing happily?

No need to go separate ways, though. I prefer to go unified! Hee hee


Love,
bbb



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