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victortouche
Thank you, Marijke.
19-Nov-2020
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A Different Take On Intelligence by victortouche

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I have read some very thought provoking poems on this site tonight, and this one is certainly one of them. Well put. Well structured and thought out words, put together so as to make the reader think about its message. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o)


bichonfrisegirl
I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem, Marijke. Thanks for your review and for your very nice comments. I'm glad that you saw the humorous side of it. :)

Wishing you a wonderful weekend!

Connie
25-Mar-2017
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Keeper of the Shop by bichonfrisegirl

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Ah, yes, that demon drink. I believe it can cause quite some misfortunes when imbibed in large quantities. Loved this poem, it told a whole story and although on a serious subject, was cheeky and fun. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx


BeasPeas
Hi Fiona. No, "doubts" is the word I want there. Someone else suggested that, too, but I have no doubts at all that he was a good man and nobody else would either. It was plan to see. If a person were to say, "no doubt he was a good man" implies there IS a doubt--it's "iffy." No "ifs" with my father. Thank you for your nice review. Marilyn
25-Mar-2017
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Truly The Last Boy Scout by BeasPeas

Chapter 16 of the book Family Matters ~ Poetry & Prose

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What a wonderful tribute to your father, with this well written and well structured Rime Couee poem. Just one small observation:
this good boy turned good man, no doubts. (should that be doubt? not 'doubts'?
Warmest regards, Marijke :o)


Sandra du Plessis
Hi Marijke,

Thank you very much for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this poem.

Have a great weekend,
Sandra
24-Mar-2017
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Autumn starts by Sandra du Plessis

Chapter 25 of the book 34. Seasons

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Lovely descriptive 2-4-2 poem, which paints a picture in the mind of the reader, Sandra. Loved listening to Moving Autumn, just beautiful. Thanks for sharing and warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxx


Sandra du Plessis
Hi Marijke,

Thank you very much for your kind comments and feedback, I appreciate your time and continuous support of my work. I am pleased you enjoyed this poem.

Have a great weekend,
Sandra
24-Mar-2017
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Ode to Migrating Birds by Sandra du Plessis

Chapter 26 of the book 34. Seasons

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What a delightful Ode to Migrating Birds, Sandra. Very descriptive and good flow and excellent rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing, my friend and warmest regards, Marijke :o)


misscookie
Your'e very welcome. it's good to see your work in print again.
Have a nice week end.
Cookie
24-Mar-2017
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I 'll write again ... by fionageorge

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Hello welcome back
sometime Gods says you need a break
and due time your mind, body, soul and muse will get your motors going again.
Thank you for sharing this uplifting write.
Cookie


Pam (respa)
You are quite welcome.
23-Mar-2017
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I 'll write again ... by fionageorge

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-Very good artwork.
-Glad to see you, Marijke.
-Nice poem about how that
muse will return, and I know
you will be sharing more.
-You are a good writer.


Sasha
You know we could have a contest to prove which of us is the worst. I have all the confidence that I will come out on top in this one. I think I will create a contest just to find out. This new project will prove to be quite challenging but I am looking forward to giving it a shot.
23-Mar-2017
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Time To Step Out Of My Comfort Zone by Sasha

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... and of course, all the luck in the world for this. I can't wait to read chapter one, and contrary to your own belief, I have seen far worse grammar and spelling than on any of your rants I have enjoyed over the years (see... I don't think that last sentence of mine was grammatically correct!). I enjoyed reading this, had a laugh or two along the way, and as I said, am looking forward to chapter one, bring it on! Warmest regards, Marijke :o) xxxx


CD Richards
Hi Marijke,

I didn't mean that I realised the implications at 4 years of age. At the time, it was just two boys playing. It was recalling the incident many, many years later that made me think how silly it seems to waste time on the things we so often concern ourselves with. Thanks for the lovely review :) Craig
23-Mar-2017
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Kyle by CD Richards

Chapter 21 of the book Miscellaneous stories

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A heart-rending and yet uplifting I remember story. So much to learn at such a young age, and some very empathetic advice for the readers. Great read, well written, I wish you well in the contest. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)


Sandra du Plessis
Hi Marijke,


Thank you very much for your kind comments and feedback. I appreciate your time and continuous support of my work.
I am pleased you enjoyed this poem.

Have a fantastic day,
Sandra.
23-Mar-2017
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A Dreaded Race by Sandra du Plessis

Chapter 84 of the book 40. Humor, Fun and Poems about Life

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A great Minute Poem, and one most of us here on FS can relate to. Ah, yes, those long long nights, absorbed in what we are writing, forgetting time. But... life, nor writing should be a race at our age... Enjoyed, and good luck in the contest. Warmest regards, Marijke :o)



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