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AnetteAurora

AlvinTEthington
It was so long ago I don't remember of what you write. Thanks for a great review.
22-Sep-2012
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My Mother by AlvinTEthington

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For sure these words will touch many people because allmost every family has big problems. No body should feel alone about that and you help here and you were with her when needed and thats the important. Great job!.....really did'nt mean to affend your friend the other day, but when I wanted to write her back, her profile was no longer here. You must tell her I am sorry if she found me roud, I was not menat to be. My husband still says that the gramma is not correct spanish and it was then just in my interest if it is the language that has changed so much over the distance. But with anger I am not sure we are going to find out. maybe...it was only to help you anyway!! .0)


victortouche
Thank you Anette.
06-Jun-2011
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Assumptions by victortouche

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Hey there. since english is not first language I think I dont understand your jokes either, but thought it interesting and looked up your other reviews to try and get the point. And now I get it and you are so right. So sad only to hear about all the crab...we need to start to focus on the good and positive stories of life. Thanx for sharing .0)


tati
I'm so sorry for taking so long to reply your review, my dear friend. My heart is still heavy with grief after losing my dearly loved husband and best friend of almost fifty years, 65 days ago. Thank you for your great review. Happy New Year to you too, and also to your loved ones. Best regards from your faraway new friend,

tati
23-Jan-2011
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Greed Rules the Waves by tati

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I find it a bit hard to read this as poetry. Somehow it comes to sound like an article in the newspaper. Despite that I must say that what is in this writing is of most importance and it makes me so sick I could vomit. When you use numbers from statistics it works very good and makes it very real...as It sadly is. I would surely have given you six stars if you had made more like poetry! Happy NewYear and hope for the world that the people begin to think for them self. Money can't be eaten!!!!


Nanette Mary
Thank you, AnetteAurora ... for reading and reviewing this free-thought writing. I appreciate your kind words but am at a loss to understand why you have docked off a star in your rating. We are permitted to ask this question - did you find anything wrong with the writing? Love from ..... Nanette Mary.
03-Jan-2011
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~ In A World Of Their Own ~ by Nanette Mary

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Beautifully well described, how we all will live with secrets so heavy of love, that no one else than us selfs know if we are there alone with it or not. I prefer to believe that those persons will get a second chance to meet again in a new life!


Nanette Mary
Thank you, AnetteAurora ... for reading and reviewing this short work and for the interest you have shown in being able to verify the reports about which I have written. Go to the website -
www.censorbugbear-reports.blogspot.com This is done by a woman in Holland who used to be a Reporter with the Sunday Times in Johannesburg. Her reports were so truthful that they did not suit the authorities and, for her own safety, she left S.A. and returned to her home country. Her reports are sent to her directly from other Reporters out there as well as relatives of the victims - together with photographs that tell their own story. I look forward to hearing from you when you have done your own research. On opening the website, in addition to the current reports, if you scroll down on the left, you can open up all those which have been written since the middle of June 2010 when this intense killing of the white people, especially the Afrikaners, was declared. Apparently, there are very definite declarations about this on FaceBook. Bless you.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
03-Jan-2011
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< Hate-Speech > by Nanette Mary

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Very important Naani poetry screaming out for help to change what this cruelty is doing to our people and earth. Are you from South Africa yourself?. Not that I don't believe you or like to see pain, cruelty and suffering, but I would like to see your evidence, to be able to continue this work. I have a poem in here called "Lioness" which is about a woman from CapeTown that I know and about how she was working as an journalist under the apartheid. The other day was a documentary about Nelson Mandela showed here in Denmark and it is terrible to see how the majority of black still lives. We need to change it, and we need to do it now!. I will work on this with your help Nanette Mary!

Inspired by your poem I just posted an Acrostic called "South Africa". I hope you will read and comment on it. Please let me know what you think should be done.


melyuki
gooday Anette, thanks for your grand thoughts and hey how wonderful that you too have experienced australian beaches.. Byron Bay is a really popular beach resort, and where I live is just a bit further south down the coast... Did you happen to hit Byron Bay when the blues festival was on....anyway, just wanted to say thanks for sharing my crazy aussie thoughts about sunshine, beachtime and having heaps of fun... happy smiles back to you, from melxxxx
03-Jan-2011
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Barbeques, Aussies & beach time fun by melyuki

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Oh I wish so much I was you today and many other days. I am from Denmark on the other side of the world, but I have really really good Aussie friends, and have been visiting your beautiful land three times and is deeply in love with all part of the beauty it holds. Enjoy the beach, while I will go and slide down some hills in this freezy snowing land of mine. Happy New Year. Will never forget my newyear in year 2000 at the beach in Byron Bay. Unreal time!!!


Perp Ihebom
Thank you soooooooooo very much. cheers
03-Jan-2011
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Uncle Duffy by Perp Ihebom

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I think you need six stars for this, because of the way you get in behind the poor soldier and leave us with his loneliness and poor memories...and Craziness. All beautiful and smooth and rhymes in the closet. I am not a fan of wars and what it does to mankind and in one little soul you showed here why!. Excellent!!


esfandiar
Thanks very much.
Thanks you very much Adama,
In this poem the Iron Boots refer to a Persian folk story in which a prince wear Iron boots and sets to travel. He is told that he will find his love only when his boots are torn apart.
02-Jan-2011
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Shadow by esfandiar

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Kind of funny way to write this. I like a lot the story behind the iron boots which I think you should explain in the author notes, so it makes more sense to us who didn't know. I really enjoyed her big nose, contra her perfect reflection.


mountainwriter49
Thanks for reading and providing an excellent review of my poem. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my new year's verse. -ray
02-Jan-2011
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Sonnets From the Soul: XVIII by mountainwriter49

Chapter 18 of the book Sonnets From the Soul

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Very very beautifully description of a very personal and honest way to speak of past and wished for the future. I enjoyed reading this a lot!


sweetwoodjax
thank you for your review
02-Jan-2011
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The Last Dance by sweetwoodjax

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I know that a poem doesn't have to rhyme, but in this case because you are writing of a dance, I think it would have been better if it had a rhyming sound to it. What is in the poem is beautiful and I am sure she is up there still waiting for you to make her laugh again! Blessings!!



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