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garrymc5
Now released: Chapters 18, 19, 20 and 21, completing Part One of Knowing Simone. Three of these chapters offer high reward cents for reviews.
Thanks. Garrymc5
07-Feb-2015
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Kev's Outback Part 2 by garrymc5

Chapter 96 of the book Forgetting and Remembering

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This is the first I have read of this, 96 chapters deep, so it stands to reason that I have missed a bit.

I like your writing style, your word choices and phrases are interesting and engaging. Your descriptions are vivid and lyrical. Very enjoyable.

I don't see any SPAG here.

Thanks for a great read.


garrymc5
Now released: Chapters 18, 19, 20 and 21, completing Part One of Knowing Simone. Three of these chapters offer high reward cents for reviews.
Thanks. Garrymc5
07-Feb-2015
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Danny's Nadir Part 3 by garrymc5

Chapter 99 of the book Forgetting and Remembering

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A very well written chapter. The story sucked me right in with lots of tension and a very strong lead character. I didn't catch any SPAG.

Thanks for a great read.


Sankey
have done another big edti and addition to Chapter 1 and created a new Chapter four moving the old one forward, if you wanna check them thanks.
06-Dec-2013
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My Forebears Starting Poor & Reprise by Sankey

Chapter 2 of the book The Little Dog That Wouldn't Let Go

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A very good first chapter. I enjoy your writing style. I don't see any SPAG. It's an interesting life so far...

Thanks for a great read.


angelmagnet
Thank you very much
27-Nov-2013
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My Star by angelmagnet

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Wonderfully done. I enjoyed this very much. Makes me hope there is a star out their for all of us. Matches well with the artwork.

Thanks for the great read.


bduckett1
thank you. yes they were I haven't master the fanstory layout program yet.
21-Nov-2013
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Double Trouble by bduckett1

Chapter 3 of the book

Excellent
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A good chapter. Strong main character, plenty of tension, it pulled me right along.

Well written, but would be easier to read if you went back in and defined paragraph breaks. They are probably correct in your original, but were lost when you pasted in.

Thanks for a great read.


bduckett1
Thank you.
21-Nov-2013
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Unpacking by bduckett1

Excellent
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A well written and interesting first chapter. Enough mystery to keep the readers interest, and ended in a good spot to leave me wanting to see more.

A couple of things to look at:

---No one insight (in sight), she...

---A red whelp (welt) appeared...

As in Chapter 3 you should look at the paragraph breaks.

Thanks for a great read.


jjstar
Thanks so very much for the awesome review! :)
11-Nov-2013
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I am a Rare Gem by jjstar

Excellent
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Very well written and interesting. I like the story and am anxious for the next part. Don't see any spag.

Thanks for a great read.


joneau2
Thank you kindly for your review and suggestions. I do appreciate them.
08-Nov-2013
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Chapter 56 From the Realm Beyond by joneau2

Chapter 56 of the book From The Realm Beyond

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Well done. I enjoyed this. A couple of suggestions:

along with a letter describing that(how) Billy employed the knife...

Sarah, and Alligator John, and(as well as) Stan's final exploits.

Thanks for a great read.


n.rosej.
Thank you for your kind comments and review! Blessings : )
07-Nov-2013
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Church Bells by n.rosej.

Excellent
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Well done, we should all follow those bells. The flow of this reminds me of a Christmas song in a way, maybe it's the bells but especially in the first verse I get that Christmas feeling.

Thanks for a great read.



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