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Cindy Warren
Thanks. This one was fun.
28-Jun-2019
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A View of Venus by Cindy Warren

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I love the upbeat feel of this verse...

I see them as much friendlier sorts
Around a volcano toasting smores
Maybe dancing and singing while building forts
In case ash and lava pours.


Mystic Angel 7777
Thank you.
28-Jun-2019
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Forlorn Thorn by Mystic Angel 7777

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This is an excellent entry for the 10 word poem... great job and well said in such an economy of words... Good luck in your contest and looking forward. di


Mystic Angel 7777
Thank you very much for the kind encouragement and feedback. It is greatly appreciated.
28-Jun-2019
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haiku (autumn mist rises) by Mystic Angel 7777

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Hey Mystic Angel... wonderful job on your 15 syllable poetry contest... wo much to say in so few words... the imagery is beautiful too... looking forward... thanks, di


humpwhistle
Thank you, Diana. Just followed the prompt. Glad you enjoyed. Peace, Lee
28-Jun-2019
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The Leary Trip by humpwhistle

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Congratulations humpwhistle on your first pace win in the sentence start a story. I love how clever this is and most unexpected... looking forward... yours, Diana


duchessofdrumborg

Diana, as always, you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless and have a happy and safe weekend,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
28-Jun-2019
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Forsaken... Forgotten by Artasylum

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"Forsaken......Forgotten", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was pleasure to both read and review. This is a true six. I look forward to seeing your next post.


Mrs. KT
Hello diana!
So pleased my words resonated with you!

Thank you!
diane
27-Jun-2019
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Heritage of Faith by Mrs. KT

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Very nice and very well said Mrs. KT... I think your point as follows spoke to me a lot. yours, di

My lifelong guides just lived their faith
without pomp or chastising ways,
yet by their example of faith,
God's presence still graces my days.


dragonpoet
You're welcome, Diana.
Joan
27-Jun-2019
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Forsaken... Forgotten by Artasylum

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This bench looks so sad and lonely. It seems that it had a busy life before it was ignored and forgotten by those who used it for their reasons. Maybe someone can cut back the weeds and revive its use. It looks like a good place to rest and think.

Keep writing

Joan


royowen
Well done
27-Jun-2019
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Forsaken... Forgotten by Artasylum

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It's so sad to see once elegant monuments to artistry allowed to run to wrack and ruin, like old buildings, only needing some renovation and TKC to return to their former glory. Old bench seats, (some donated by once prominent citizens) a beautfully orchestrated work here, with deftly crafted.stanzas glowing with articulation and elegance, rhyme and slant rhyme dominating, well done Di, blessings, Roy
Typo : parishioner(')s fears.


evesayshi
You are so welcome, Diana, my pleasure I assure you...Eve
27-Jun-2019
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Forsaken... Forgotten by Artasylum

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

In my opinion, a simply beautiful write, outstanding in every detail of its stunning rhyming rhythm - loved my read and appreciated the smooth flow of this lovely poem - a standard with this exquisite writer....


Patty Palmer
You're welcome!
27-Jun-2019
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Forsaken... Forgotten by Artasylum

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Very pretty poem about the memories of a park bench over the years. He proposed on that bench and she said yes. A new mother out for her first walk with her newborn needed a place to sit and ponder all that has gone on in their lives and how blessed this tiny little bundle was theirs. I could go on, but this is what I see in your poem.



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