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Gert sherwood
You are Ricky
Gert
05-Apr-2021
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Easter Day 2021 by Ricky1024

Chapter 7 of the book "Restorative Appeal"

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Hello Ricky1024
I read your thoughts about The Reason for Easter is good,
I read this of what you said in your post ---
For I truly have been...
Cursed as well as Blessed!
And, as that horrible suffering of Christ.
Gert







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Flyaway1
Thank you for reading,
I decided to write about my youngest son, instead of my older two that have gone through so much.
I do not remember when my boy started calling me his momma - but he does it to this day.
29-Mar-2021
For the review on
Mothers and Sons by Flyaway1

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I really enjoyed this.
A mother's love for her child is extremely important and powerful.
And when you bridge it with your daughter even more.
I have four beautiful daughters and four beautiful grandchildren.
But in a couple days it'll be the anniversary of my son Jason's death on the 31st.
...
And then the very next day on April Fool's Day it'll be 18 years 3 out of four people walk just playing it with his organs.
Both our sons are amazing.
Yours is working here below and mine is working above?
And I say these words in the name of Jesus Christ.
Amen.
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Bicpen
Thanks Doc glad to see your still in one piece after this death stalking the lands is still prevalent ...
19-Mar-2021
For the review on
Beguile me by Bicpen

Chapter 5 of the book A Book of ... Freeverse (Vol.2)

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"Beguile Me"
After I read this, and before I reviewed, your piece.
I went on my TV system where I stream.
And, I got the movie "Beguiled" to come up.
But, the only problem was they wanted $2.99 to rent it.
So, instead I decided to write my own piece about Lilith.
..
Yours was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
...
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024


Bicpen
classic thanks doc ...
18-Mar-2021
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Beguile me by Bicpen

Chapter 5 of the book A Book of ... Freeverse (Vol.2)

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"Beguile Me"
After I read this, and before I reviewed, your piece.
I went on my TV system where I stream.
And, I got the movie "Beguiled" to come up.
But, the only problem was they wanted $2.99 to rent it.
So, instead I decided to write my own piece about Lilith.
..
Yours was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
...
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024


Ronni
Thank you for your very concise and comprehensive review on
this poem about March. So pleased you enjoyed!! God Bless!
Best always, Ronni
17-Mar-2021
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Before and in between by Ronni

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"Before and In-between'
Was well written and Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
..
Complete Synopsis:
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024


robyn corum
Sad but true.
16-Mar-2021
For the review on
Restoring Christ by Ricky1024

Chapter 14 of the book "Written Faith"

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Ricky,

I hope people will soon see that 'restoring Christ' is our only way back out of the mess we've made of things. Wow. This was a kind of cool arrangement. It sort of seemed like word association as I read - one word (mostly) following after another, and placing certain thoughts in my mind. Nice job! (And that image is amazing!)


Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you very much for your fine review and kind words.

gypsy
15-Mar-2021
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Garnet Glow by Gypsy Blue Rose

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First off I must comment on the artwork which is excellent.
I don't write haikiu's but I have a couple times.
(Too short)
...
This Flowed well and read well with no grammar issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky1024


Teri7
Thank you so much my friend for this great review, your lovely and true comments and pretty six stars. It's nice to see you again on here. May God bless you! Teri
15-Mar-2021
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Am I Doing the Right Thing? by Teri7

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This was well written and Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and have a Blessed Sabbath Sunday.
Doctor Ricky 1024


Gert sherwood
You are welcome Ricky
Gert














ricky
14-Mar-2021
For the review on
Restoring Christ by Ricky1024

Chapter 14 of the book "Written Faith"

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Ricky,
You Dedication
The chapter in the book "Written Faith"
Restoring Christ
has away with your words makes one see that you are telling with your telling us when we pass we will be ashes and with faith and belief we will be restored and have eternal life.
Gert


Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.

Gypsy
14-Mar-2021
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Thorny Beauty by Gypsy Blue Rose

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Beautiful Art for this 5-7-5 Haiku.
Flowed and read well with no Grammar Issues.
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024



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