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Sandra du Plessis
Thank you for the kind comments and feedback. I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

Have a great day,
Sandra.
27-Oct-2020
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Shattered Dreams by Sandra du Plessis

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This poem is well written and highlights the problems we face. The world is afraid and this brings the haters out of the wood work. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.


Sandra du Plessis
Thank you for the kind comments and feedback. I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

Have a great day,
Sandra.
27-Oct-2020
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Spiritual Warfare by Sandra du Plessis

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This poem is all about faith and love. I like the chinese dragon picture as well. I think the poem and picture illustrates the different cultures in the world. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.


Sandra du Plessis
Thank you for the kind comments and feedback. I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

Have a great day,
Sandra.
27-Oct-2020
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Meritorious by Sandra du Plessis

Chapter 72 of the book My Own Teacup Dictionary

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I like this form of poetry as it enlarges my vocabulary. I lean something new every day and now I have learned a new word. I really enjoyed this poem and thank you for sharing.


Sandra du Plessis
Thank you for the kind comments and feedback. I appreciate your time to read and review my work.

Have a great day,
Sandra.
27-Oct-2020
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The Houses Of God And David by Sandra du Plessis

Chapter 242 of the book 33. Spiritual Poetry

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I like this poem and thought it was very well written. I enjoyed the sing-song voice used in this poem and thought the flow was well timed. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.


robyn corum
hahahaha Thanks a bunch!
27-Oct-2020
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National Grouch Day! by robyn corum

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I only saw the head going up and down lol. I thought, oh no not one of them poems lol. When I scrolled a little further, imagine my relief lol. Great poem, loved it. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.


tfawcus
Many thanks, dmt. I appreciate your review and good wishes. All the best, Tony
27-Oct-2020
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Hope by tfawcus

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This is a very uplifting poem and I like the picture, although, I am not sure how relevant it is to the words. This is a well written poem and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.


Gloria ....
We shouldn't have snow here so it's just not right. Thank you for the great review. :))

Gloria
26-Oct-2020
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The Snow Moon by Gloria ....

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We don't get snow until early in February lol. This poem made me feel cold lol. It was very well written and I liked the picture. I like the snow, as long as I am tucked up with a cup of coco lol. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.


karenina
Sad that COVID has made these special acts of affection a risk to our health! We all need physical contact. I pray for a cure soon. Thanks for reviewing!--Karenina
24-Oct-2020
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Skin to Skin by karenina

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This is a very well versed poem and I love the flow and beat. I liked the picture, showing the good old days lol, when people could hug and kiss. Thank you for sharing.


oliver818
Thanks so much. I?ll try and work on some more stories too!
24-Oct-2020
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Look back by oliver818

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This is a great piece. I prefer your stories, though. I like your descriptive pieces but I do love your stories. Very well thought out and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.


oliver818
Thanks for the great feedback! Yes he has Alzheimer?s, a sad a nasty disease which unfortunately or fortunately makes a good topic for stories. Thanks again
24-Oct-2020
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Into the darkness by oliver818

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This is a sad but well told story. I would presume the dad had mental issues and I know how had that can be for the carer. Thank you for sharing and stay safe.



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