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Gloria ....
Thank you so much. I agree with you and appreciate you. :))

Gloria
01-May-2021
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Accept VS Except by Gloria ....

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This is a brilliant rendering of the difference between accept and except. The graphic says it all, and no commas needed there! I think that the next time I come across descriptive words , sounding the same, but with different meanings I shall try to write a poem with a graphic!


Susan Newell
You are welcome.
28-Apr-2021
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Disconnected by persevere

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I have heard about this before and have great sympathy. It's bad enough to feel pain where it does exist, without feeling it where it can't exist. I try not to put words in poet's mouths, but the word "deceased" seems a little inaccurate, and I wonder if "severed" might "sing" better, while adding some alliteration. Great job with a loop.


4theloveoftrees
Thanks so much, that's actually my favorite line! I appreciate your review.
24-Apr-2021
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The Illusion by 4theloveoftrees

Chapter 3 of the book Humble Musings

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A well worded stress release with a day in the trees. I love the handing of the keys to the rooted trees; this implies a total trust in the arboreal surroundings.This is indeed a means of stress relief.


Dilettante junior
Thank you for your great comments. I believe alliteration is contagious. Lol. Really appreciate it. Cheers, DJ
24-Apr-2021
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Heart To Heart by Dilettante junior

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Brilliant compulsory compatibility coupling in one sentence! The sentiments expressed could not be better matched by the perfect illustration. Heartfelt feelings are needed to tone down haughtiness.


Gloria ....
Thank you so much for a great review. :))

Gloria
20-Apr-2021
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Lavender Somersaults by Gloria ....

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Your enchanting haiku entices me to somersault among the lavenders! Sadly, spring is playing hide and seek with us, and somersaulting with one leg is challenging.


Gloria ....
I remember when I tried to learn Mandarin. Tried being the operative word there. Nursery rhymes may have helped. Thank you so much for a fine review and exceptional rating. :))

Gloria
20-Apr-2021
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The Starfish Star by Gloria ....

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What a delightful children's poem! When read to a child I can hear the pleading fo it to be read again. The illustration is equally appealing. I was once asked to teach English to a 3 year old Chinese kid and nursery rhymes were the means.


AnnaLinda
I much enjoyed!

You are welcome.
20-Apr-2021
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Penny Phrases by persevere

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Persevere,

LOL! Shall I count your words or can I trust you after 40 years as
a mathematics teacher? Are you sure there are 20? I think this is
funny. I just rhymed...how about that. Perhaps the loo is calling
me. It could be an urgent call.

Thank you for selecting my toilet paper photo. lol

AnnaLinda


Pantygynt
Indeed I am and object to paying more. Lol.
20-Apr-2021
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Penny Phrases by persevere

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You'd be lucky if they'd let you in for only a penny. It's more like a pound these days or a euro if you are on the continent, and you are probably not supposed to be their either, and they've closed most of the loos for fear of the pandemic. So I suppose it will be typhoid next.


Susan Newell
You are welcome.
16-Apr-2021
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Renewal by persevere

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I had to chuckle at the flat-out wisdom of this one-line poem. It is so true that if we clutter our minds with negative thoughts, we don't have space for positive ones. I love the photo you chose. A little extra humor.


Gloria ....
Thank you so much. Yes a laugh is day is okay, but not as tasty as an apple with peanut butter. Always great to hear from you. :))

Gloria
14-Apr-2021
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Twee & Repartee by Gloria ....

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A delightful tit for tat Friday night silliness. It brought a grin to my face and, as for the illustration, it is a perfect , pompous accompaniment. These days a laugh is a tonic!



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