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R56Ma3
You're very welcome
12-Nov-2020
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Covid-19 by persevere

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This is what we are facing now as our lives and habits change to stay safe. Now with holidays upon us, we have to adjust plans to slow the spread. It's a sad situation. Well done! R56ma3


Gloria ....
Thank you so much always for a great review. :))

Gloria
12-Nov-2020
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Celebration by Gloria ....

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What a perfect description of winter; with winter forest smells, cold powder of silvery snow and the non migratory chickadees. I'll think of the latter the next time I sip champagne!


robyn corum
welcome!
11-Nov-2020
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Covid-19 by persevere

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P,

What a kind and sweet piece as an offering for your friend. This definitely reveals your kind heart and generous spirit. I am sure that phone call meant the world to this lady.

Your syllable counts are all just right, but I think you need a space after 'card' in the second stanza. Thanks and good luck!


equestrik
yes, i sure did make compost!
10-Nov-2020
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Winter sunset by persevere

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I love this write for the 'Take a Photo Poetry' contest. I have spent the day raking and bagging leaves. We got about 20 bags before the wind and rain got to be too much. Good write for the season.


Taurus the Elder
Thank you for your kind words and the review.
08-Nov-2020
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Horse by Taurus the Elder

Excellent
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From the haiku words I can visualise this mighty black horse running at the breaking waves of the white grainy coastline. You have satisfied the requirement of a haikuThe vicinity is obvious in the illustration but the horse seems to running away from the breaking waves.


Mark Schardine
Thank you for your review and insightful words.
08-Nov-2020
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Free to Be Callous by Mark Schardine

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This is an interesting piece of work and the syllable count is spot on. Poor girl being sized up and what a smirky,self centred critical gentleman.Those were the days!


equestrik
Thank you for these kind comments on my writing. I appreciate the time you took to read and review my work.
07-Nov-2020
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To Write by equestrik

Excellent
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I am not surprised that this is your happy place and your writing does justice to it. Enticing natural scents and the rhythmic munching on oats are certainly amongst ingredients for free thought flow.


Wendy Gordon
Thank you for your encouragement.
07-Nov-2020
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Snakes in spring by Wendy Gordon

Excellent
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This poem takes me on a conducted tour of a snake inhabited countryside. Good advice is there and a hint that emergency treatment may be needed. You have to let someone know where and when you are going. A job well done.


Boogienights
Thank you, that's very nice of you to say. Have a great weekend.
07-Nov-2020
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Spring Cleaning by Boogienights

Excellent
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How I relate to this spring cleaning! Those Christmas decorations still clinging to the tree in the corner and the Thanksgiving turkey gone bad. What an entertaining piece of writing.


Taurus the Elder
Thank you for your kind words and the review.
07-Nov-2020
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Down the Road by Taurus the Elder

Excellent
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This 3-6-9 portrays the sense of freedom of a lone traveller. A slow meander into unknown territory must be a unique experience. Well done on a good piece of work accompanied by an ideal illustration.



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