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Gloria ....
Yes, I am glad you are again prompted to write a sonnet. Always appreciate you. :)))

Gloria
19-Dec-2020
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Little Lights in the Snow by Gloria ....

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What a nostalgic meander through the seasons of life, a sonnet of note. I also raise a glass of brandy wine to waning rays of good ole summertime.
And,Gloria, once again I am prompted to write a sonnet.


Gloria ....
Birds are quite smart I find, and I think it was only we humans who've assigned them to bird-brain status, when perhaps it was ourselves we had in mind. lol. Thank you so much always for a great review. :))

Gloria
16-Dec-2020
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Duck Reflections by Gloria ....

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What a delightful bird wisdom poem accompanied by your daughter's charming photograph.. I am fascinated by the intriguing intelligence of birds. I have just been reading a study that is taking place about the intelligence of ravens. Apparently they are rated alongside some apes.


Gloria ....
Thank you so much always for a great review. We have to make do the best we can. Always appreciation to you my friend. :))

Gloria
01-Dec-2020
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Indifferent by Gloria ....

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So true that a non reader lives one life! Your marriage of convenience seems inevitable under the present conditions but hopefully you have means of obtaining new books. I am reading your excellent poem, in lockdown, as the cars pass relentlessly outside on London Road.


Gloria ....
How nice that you older brother gave you the Complete Works of Shakespeare. He sounds like a smart brother for sure. Thank you so much always for a great review. :))

Gloria
28-Nov-2020
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A Walk in the Park by Gloria ....

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Intriguing though the illustration is, your sonnet alone paints the picture of remembrance of a loved one whose whisper travels through the forest. I feel like slipping a copy of your brilliant sonnet into my " The Complete Works of William Shakespeare" which was given to me by my older brother for my 13th birthday.


Anne Johnston
You are welcome. Children today are missing out on a lot of things we enjoyed.
27-Nov-2020
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Spying by persevere

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A delightful story in verse. Good rhyming. Remember playing that game lots of times with my children. How exciting when no one can guess and then are surprised that it was so simple.


Bloomer Burbs
You to. Thank you for your kind words, Pete
27-Nov-2020
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Spying by persevere

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Hi persevere

A very unusual and quirky little poem about seeing your own reflection. Reads well and has a great flow that adds to the message/power of your verse.
Take care and stay safe, Pete


Gloria ....
Wouldn't he though? Thank you so much always for a terrific review. :))

Gloria
26-Nov-2020
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Christmas Stars by Gloria ....

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Once again, you have used meaningful rhyming in this Christmas Stars hepticrime. The latter poetic form is obviously new to me.
Dr Seuss would be delighted with your mention of Gringe.
On a personal level, I share your eye apple taste!


R56Ma3
You're very welcome
12-Nov-2020
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Covid-19 by persevere

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This is what we are facing now as our lives and habits change to stay safe. Now with holidays upon us, we have to adjust plans to slow the spread. It's a sad situation. Well done! R56ma3


Gloria ....
Thank you so much always for a great review. :))

Gloria
12-Nov-2020
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Celebration by Gloria ....

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What a perfect description of winter; with winter forest smells, cold powder of silvery snow and the non migratory chickadees. I'll think of the latter the next time I sip champagne!


robyn corum
welcome!
11-Nov-2020
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Covid-19 by persevere

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P,

What a kind and sweet piece as an offering for your friend. This definitely reveals your kind heart and generous spirit. I am sure that phone call meant the world to this lady.

Your syllable counts are all just right, but I think you need a space after 'card' in the second stanza. Thanks and good luck!



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