I believe the first stanza tells a story not yet told. In the mystery of its question. I also feel that the rest of the poem tell of the wandering mind the writer portrays of the person whom may or may not be trying to forget "from the night it contains"...Well written!

I was actually pretty taken away but the understanding of this message you convey. God's creative plan is perfect in all his Holy glory. It is man who creates things that are not perfect and in order. I agree with your message.

It is hard to read with spags.

I not quite sure of this one Alcreator Litt Dear....though I understand some bits of it, am still not certain as to what is it that you're actually attempting to get the reader to understand. I think you might have mixed reviews on this one, as well as its just hard to read with the various spags.

Your author notes are genuinely truthful. Never thought about it like that. Your poem is excellent. Not a hat person, that to the extent I would want to write a poem about it but I love this one. Very true.

I applaud this writing for the deep message that is hidden in these lines you've created. A truly thought provoking pieced. I couldn't grasp all of it as this felt almost personal...a Breaking of something important maybe, not necessarily a box...I Like this because the poem is powerful and the words are absract like the painting.

I thought this was a good poem. 5-7-5 can be tricky, but you did it just fine. Love should be given freely because God give it to us freely. Was kind of confused as to the comma after "That" but seems you wanted that intended pause. Thanks for sharing.

Simply about adjusting...adapting and evolving...a wonderful poem. I enjoyed the continuous flow of wisdom filled consideration of ...life unknown. I also enjoyed the song. Very refreshing.

I definitely looooovvveee that line that states, "black stockings all the way to heaven" yes! I am feeling this poem. It's smooth and jazzy, yet sexy and tempting. and the closing line...Yes...girl...them heels feel good walking away from you. I love that!

Laughing at your author notes...I can only imagine and that is one poem I do not desire to try. I will stick to what my creative monster knows..As far as this, it may have taken you all day, but it was a days worth because you did excellent. Truly, it not only made sense, but it was if you painted the picture with your words. Good job, great poem.

This is wonderful. Informing and educational. I love poems like this. You teach in a creative fashion. They rhyme was through and through and flowed exceptionally smooth. The additional author notes were detailed and good for further reference. Thank you for sharing this. Many blessings. ~NF~