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victortouche
Thank you.
16-Jun-2018
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A Hat of My Design by victortouche

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This so reminds me of a Gatsby like figure. Dancing and leaping in attendance, a creature obsessed with a narcissist.
The pain is evident in your words, 'But no one wraps those hats 'cept me.' An emotive, sad poem. Wonderful........


fairydancer
Thank you so much for your kind review :)
25-Jan-2015
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In Time by fairydancer

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Moving, powerful poem; your first verse is really great.
I also love 'and as my eyes climb the rockface, I see the axe-marks where each of life's blows left its scar'..


mermaids
I am honored by your review. Thanks for reading about these beautiful creatures. Elaine
03-Nov-2013
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The Beautiful Sea Dragon by mermaids

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This is so lovely.
I loved the repetition of red,blue,green wings, in reading it aloud those words seem to give a tidal like cadence to the poem.
I did not know there was actually a sea creature named a Sea Dragon until I Googled sea dragon and images. What a pretty, leafy thing !Now the precious leaf in your poem is understood.
Thanks for the pleasure you've given........


sgalletti
And thank you so much for that six! I absolutely adore this song and this provided me with an opportunity to combine all kinds of art...Appreciate your review very much. Hugs, Sue
02-Nov-2013
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Unchained Melody by sgalletti

Exceptional
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A lovely, touching poem. Your placing the narrator against the sea, not knowing if it is dusk or dawn has your reader locked in time with her. I love 'coffee cupped in two hands', that was nifty. I also thank you for the beautiful song by Susan Boyle, a rare and delicate gift to us all. Much admiration...
Here's my 6.


Irikidzai Mkushi
Thank you so much 'Quillian' for your feedback-I truly appreciate it! Not sure if you're interested, but Abba is the Hebrew word for Papa or Daddy which Jesus used when addressing God in the Garden of Gethsename! Best wishes and thank you!
31-Oct-2013
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Abba, your daughter's are dying by Irikidzai Mkushi

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I don't know who the ABBA is in your poem, but man, this is one raw, rambling, powerful, piece of free verse. You have some editing to do and some spelling to check, but DO it, because you have something really good here. Good luck...


Virginia Pike Gielow
Thanks for your comments, Quillian..I am new at this adventure called writing for the public!
17-Oct-2013
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He That Throws Mud Loses Ground by Virginia Pike Gielow

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I liked the way you set up the way having your feet undermined by shifting sand was a great deal of fun as a kid, but to have it happen as an adult did not carry the same pleasure; then to segue into your simile of sandslinging and mudslinging and how verbal badgering can topple a business or personal relationship, just like a sandcastle. Sounds like a sermon, but without being preachy.


reconciled
Hi....-smile- thank you so much love michael
15-Oct-2013
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Lullaby by reconciled

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We do not celebrate Hope enough. Thank you for reminding us of this life sustaining/saving force with your selectively chosen words; every offending failure is offered one more try and bubbles bursting, not. All that seemed to be couched in the whispered words to a crying child. Very, very well done.


Selina Stambi
Thank you so much for the wonderful review, and the very, very generous rating, Quillian. Have a great weekend. :)
27-Sep-2013
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Shadow From Our Past by Selina Stambi

Chapter 9 of the book With This Dance

Exceptional
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A lovely, lyrical and bittersweet tale of a glimpse into the past. I loved this concept. To see yourselves and to celebrate in this couples joi de vivre was a double treat. Great tile, too. Here's my 6......Quillian


EMB
Thank you, my friend! :)
22-Sep-2013
For the review on
Tip for Writers #9 by EMB

Chapter 9 of the book Tips to Treasure

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Good advise, I agree with your Facebook line for socializing and ignoring sniper reviewers! You put down the truths we all know, BUT have to be reminded of constantly. Thanks for the reminder....


IndianaIrish
Thank you, Quillian, for your kind review and comments for my little story. I appreciate your taking the time to read and respond. I'm sorry there was some confusion for you, but Jack is the name of her puppy that she went to find in the rose bushes.
Smiles,
Indy : )
21-Sep-2013
For the review on
What Is Death? by IndianaIrish

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Nice work. Those childhood questions and learning the shocking truths are such a common ground for us all. This will resonate with every reader. I'm not sure having her lose her puppy made it easier to read or harder. I had a solid emotional response
to your piece.



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