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victortouche
Thank you.
20-Feb-2021
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A Faded Dress by victortouche

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I want that hat! Looks like a Kentucky Derby Hat! And I love going to second hand and thrift shops! You never know what you can find at those places.

Your poem has a very nice flow to it! And the ending could mean more than a few different things and I like that


victortouche
Thank you.
26-Jan-2021
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Life's Little Illusions by victortouche

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There's a gas station that I go to once every two weeks, but I drive by it probably 2-3 times a week on my way to the bank. I see a homeless man everytime I drive by and it makes me so sad. So, everytime I go into the gas station. I but him something and he's always surprised. I know it isn't much but it makes him happy.

I am assuming you are talking about homeless people because that's what I got out of your poem. I do not turn a blind eye to it but sometimes I walk past people asking for money. Not everyone is who they seem to be and that is sad.

I loved your poem and the picture is priceless.


victortouche
Ain't it thr unadorned truth sister. Thank you.
26-Jan-2016
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Someday, My Friend by victortouche

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This is beautifully sad :(. Completely broke my heart when I read the notes but I was sure this had something to do with a lost loved one. We make promises to hang out and visit the ones we love and something comes up and we say we're too busy, not realizing things can change at any moment and that opportunity may never be there again.

Beautiful poem my friend


victortouche
Ha ha, thank you dear.
25-Jan-2016
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Bug Bites by victortouche

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"It's not what your country
can do for you...
it's what it can take
from you".

Truer words have never been spoken my friend.
I loved your poem. It was put together very well and so powerful.

But I always enjoy your work so this isn't a surprise :)


SueZen
Welcome, big hug to you both !
15-May-2015
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Never loved more........... by costellsgirl33

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Five stars for delightful poem and photo of you and Dusty! The saying goes "A d.... mind is a joy forever" ...Those who believe that haven't met you, nor read your poem, nor met Dusty ! True "love-song" to Dusty, straight from the heart, flows well and good rhyming too, makes me smile, well done !


SueZen
My pleasure...heart, intuition and feelings are are "threesome", x Sue
15-May-2015
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Intuition by costellsgirl33

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Sixty stars for "intuition" haha, but as poem, have to stick to rules. Good to literally "write off" (for good haha). Intuition does not betray & will always prove its "worth" listening to on all levels of life.


meggie13
You are welcome, Arnetta. Have a nice day. meg :))
15-May-2015
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Intuition by costellsgirl33

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You had good intuition. He went back to his girlfriend and now they are going to be parents. The truth comes out sooner or later. The picture tells the story. Good luck in the contest.


Dean Kuch
Thanks so much for your thoughtful and supportive comments, Arnetta. I'm very happy to know that you enjoyed the poem. ~Dean
15-May-2015
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Nocturnal Shadows by Dean Kuch

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A 5-7-5 poem at it finest!!! And I love the background and dancing image that you used. It's a perfect compliment for your poem. Which is my favorite kind, short and awesome :)

Great job as always. Good luck in the contest


victor 66
Thank you very much for your review.
14-May-2015
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Exercise by victor 66

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Hilarious!!!! That was me a little while ago. I hate exercising but because of my health I had to start. I would just watch people.....lol

It's just awful and plus I don't like to sweat!!!


Very funny and cute!

Good luck



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