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judy corcoran
thnk you very much for the read and very kind comment
so sorry i have taken so long to write my appreciation :)
love judy xxx
08-Oct-2013
For the review on
Back to Life by judy corcoran

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Bravo. It opens up my eyes that whatever road you take...whatever challenges lie ahead of you...whatever decisions you'll take, don't forget that you're holding God's hand.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you.


country ranch writer
welcome
01-Aug-2013
For the review on
When Fire Works Above by Zephyr05

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YOU ARE ON THE RIGHT TRACK KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. THE FIRE WORKS DISPLAYS ARE ALWAYS A BEAUTY TO WATCH AND ARE FANTASTIC IF YOU CAN FIND A SPOT ON THE BEACH AWAY FROM EVERYONE AND IT IS LIKE YOU ALONE WITH THE WORLD IN A CONCERT


Bryana
English is my second language, can you tell? I have to be careful and use the right words. I wrote this poem in Spanish first and translated it into English.
Thank you for your very nice comments.
03-Jun-2013
For the review on
My Friend Butterfly by Bryana

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It's cute. I really saw the beauty of the butterfly in it.
Thank you for the Spanish translation even if I can't understand it. I know that you know the feeling of being confident or proud in speaking in a different language, even if you don't know the meaning. That is what I felt. *laughs*

Thank you for sharing your work. I enjoyed it. May God bless you all.


Max Edon
Thank you so much
02-Jun-2013
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Sticks and Stones by Max Edon

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I gave it five stars because I saw your intentions are clear. But, I became quite sensitive in the use of profanity. But, it's good.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.


Fireshadow
Hi, Zephyr
Thank you so much for reviewing and rating Chimera, your generous stars and supportive comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the theme, as well as my style of presenting it.

Ama
02-Jun-2013
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Chimera by Fireshadow

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It's haunting me. Believe me. It is well-crafted. The structure is good. I love it. But, I think I need a dictionary for some difficult words. *laughs* Actually, I kind of lost understanding in your work, yet it's wonderful.

Thank you for sharing it. May God bless you all.


Cookie333
hehehe, love your response to the piece my friend
very witty indeed!
thanks for sharing it with me
k
02-Jun-2013
For the review on
Meadow Muffins by Cookie333

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It made me laugh and be amazed
At your smart and funny poem I gazed.
The precious rhymes at the end
Makes my laughter come, not trend.

It is very cute. *laughs* Artistic. Bravo!
A clever interpretation and entry.

Thank you for sharing it. May God bless you.


Cookie333
Thanks for sharing this one with me
k
02-Jun-2013
For the review on
Today an Open Door by Cookie333

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Nice style. Unique. Very unique. What I like the most is the meaning of the poem. Just call on God, and He'll answer back maybe not now, not tomorrow, but He will according to His will.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.


Cookie333
You are welcome! I try not to cling to a particular form, I don't care for 'some' rules, and often make my own. Happy to provide a new perspective my friend.
k
02-Jun-2013
For the review on
Inside-out-Flip by Cookie333

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I like it. It's new to me. I quite sense a little confusion. At the beginning, I didn't understand what it is all about. At the end, I thought it was about you dealing with your secrets, yourself. You want to get out of the cage you yourself made. Am I right? *laughs* Overall, It's amazing. I'm used in reading poems with the same style. And you brought a new look for me.

Thank you for sharing your work. May God bless you all.



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