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DonandVicki
You are very kind.
12-Mar-2021
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Peacekeepers by DonandVicki

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Woop woop, that's the sound of the poem police! Woop woop, that's the sound of the beast! - Or whatever Ice Cube said.

I kid, but what's not a joke is this piece, it is well constructed, amusing and hits it's mark. Good work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.


DonandVicki
Thank you so very much.
12-Mar-2021
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Just Enough by DonandVicki

Excellent
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Not really for me but there is an audience for this and it is a well done piece nonetheless. Best of luck in the writing prompt, it is sure to do well. Thank you for sharing and later daze.


Gert sherwood
Thank you elchupakabra for your comments.
12-Mar-2021
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Words are the Fruit of Poetry by Gert sherwood

Excellent
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This is a playful piece and I enjoy the picture you selected for it as it matches the same energy as the poem. Really good work, thank you for sharing, later daze.


David M. Miller
Thank you for the feedback!
27-Feb-2021
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Change by David M. Miller

Chapter 1 of the book Tribulation

Excellent
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Having retreated from their homes and jobs to this place, there was a great sense of weariness which seemed to hang in the air as everyone slouched in their chairs around the embattled wooden table.

This very small note was the only edit I noticed, this chapter is very well done. Keep up the great work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.


victortouche
Awe, thank you.
22-Feb-2021
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A French Fry Thesis by victortouche

Excellent
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I like this piece though your response certainly seemed a bit awkward. I think my response might've been a bit different, something like;

To the product of my seasons;

try some cheese and gravy on those fries
it's so good it will make you cry
it's like going to Heaven without having to die
they call it Poutine, the greatest snack of all time.

Bam, lol. Anyways, I liked the piece as a whole regardless. Great work overall on this write, thanks for sharing.


victortouche
Thank you.
20-Feb-2021
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A Faded Dress by victortouche

Excellent
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I do a lot of shopping at thrift shops and secondhand stores because I hate paying full price for clothes. I've been like that for years. With that said, I was able to easily identify with this piece. Great work overall on this write, thanks for sharing.


Iza Deleanu
Thank you
06-Dec-2020
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Wisdom 16 by Iza Deleanu

Chapter 15 of the book Wisdom

Excellent
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There are many, many typos, far too many that I'm going to point them out. If I ignore that, your voice shines through and the story itself is a good one. Thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest. Later daze.


Fonda Little
Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
16-Oct-2020
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My Undying Devotion! by Fonda Little

Excellent
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The piece is well done and is sure to be a popular and strong entry in the love poem poetry contest. Great work overall here, thank you for sharing. Later daze.


Brett Matthew West
Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
09-Oct-2020
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Don't Tread On Me by Brett Matthew West

Excellent
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The violent unrest in the United States seems to have reached unprecedented levels because people are exasperated. I understand your feelings expressed in this piece, but I think it's more fair to blame leadership than protesters if you ask me. Good work nonetheless, thank you for sharing. Later daze.


TPAC
I'm doing current revisions to enhance this write clarity, revealed through comments as your, thanking you for those helpful thoughts and generous rate despite flaws.
05-Oct-2020
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The Throne by TPAC

Chapter 29 of the book Act of Endurance

Excellent
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There are some challenges with the piece, it has a very 'beatnick' feel to it but then it is almost too structured and the subject matter doesn't quite fit. I still liked it. Good work, thanks for sharing. Later daze.



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