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victortouche
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13-Mar-2021
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A Face So Etched by victortouche

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Outward appearances are sometimes deceiving. Like the old saying goes. Do not judge a book by its cover. Even eyes cam be deceiving.
Good use of alliteration with face/fascinating, youth/yet, aware/assumed
Well written and causes you to do some introspection


victortouche
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Doug
02-Mar-2021
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A French Fry Thesis by victortouche

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Great use of alliteration in the first line.
Good appeal to smell taste touch sight. Love the idea of the twinning of daughter and dad in this poem.


victortouche
Yep. Lol.

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22-Feb-2021
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Bug Bites by victortouche

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very whimsical in expression of a strong message

from veerin',
(a)to the right. was the "a" intentional?
Well penned poem about the direction the country is taking


victortouche
Yup.
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Doug
20-Feb-2021
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Weeds of Me by victortouche

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Until we find the true value of a plant we consider it a weed but one can never tell its worth at face value. Many plants that grow where it is not intended have medicinal value


victortouche
Yes, all so true.

It's amazing biology
allows a neophyte
to raise children.
20-Feb-2021
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Bruises by victortouche

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no use trying to parent unless you start from babyhood.
There must be a bond and a strong relationship between parent and offspring in order to gain the confidence and trust necessary to guide a child. of course when the child is old enough you must allow them to space to make their own judgement/ decision


victortouche
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20-Feb-2021
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A Dark Well's Drink by victortouche

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That is why we are advised to forgive. holding on to hate consumes so we hurt ourselves in the process. forgive and forget is the best way to go.
An enjoyable read


victortouche
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31-Jan-2021
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Walk a Bridge by victortouche

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Good use of metaphor
Good use of sort crisp phrases
Good visuals created
Well paired picture and poem
we should consider every stumbling block a stepping stone


victortouche
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31-Jan-2021
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Release by victortouche

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You kept the reader engaged with the use of questions.
Good use of alliteration--cathartic/callable, bones/bruise
rail/righteousness
remain/review
Excellent ue of enjambment


victortouche
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31-Jan-2021
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Of Nurture and Nature by victortouche

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and I a thirst
for justice's
sweet draught.Loved this

Good use of metaphor
Effective use of short phrases/ sentences
Good choice of strong verbs


victortouche
Yes, so true.
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31-Jan-2021
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Living Within the Hurricane by victortouche

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Reminds me of a poem i wrote on youth.youth is the only time when you are free to be free, to explore and to enjoy life. However there must be boundaries or there might be pitfalls that can have serious consequences



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