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judiverse
Thanks for your review and comments, and have a great weekend. I don't know why people keep coming up with this silly ideas about names. judi
28-May-2022
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Too Many Chiefs by judiverse

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I think removing the word "chief" is along the same lines as talking in pronouns referring to gender, But the name doesn't bother me, when it comes to signifying roles, I would rather invoke the depth of the Shakespearean quote, "a rose by any other name..." but this is interesting, well done, blessings Roy


Mary Vigasin
Thank you for your kind words. Yes, he is highly intelligent, but once in a while, he does go off the tracks, but nothing serious, like telling him to put an ice cream cone in the car and he gets distracted, he then sits on it. (he was
supposed to get in the car with the ice cream.)
Blessings,
Mary
28-May-2022
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What was he thinking? by Mary Vigasin

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How fascinating that your husband did that, yes, I do believe that folk with Aspergers, usually function normally, but occasionally not, how hilarious, beautifully written, good luck Mary,, blessings Roy


jessizero
Thanks for the input
28-May-2022
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PREVIEW: Rafe by jessizero

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I think this would be an excellent series, I could imagine that this would have plenty of room for inventive writing, and would look forward to How you would tack, it, well done Jessi, blessings Roy


I remember that Port Arthur massacre in 1996. It only took 12 days for laws to be passed. The results are clear... no more mass shootings.
28-May-2022
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Hostage To The Horror

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It is truly tragic. When a madman went on a rampage at a famous tourist site in Tasmania, he shot and killed 36 people, including women and children, the government went into action and banned non essential guns, there has never been a mass shooting since. The government did it under great opposition, the courage of the incumbent prime minister and his deputy was to be commended, beautifully written, blessings Roy


Cindy Decker 2
Thank you, Toy, for the great critique. I changed my poem.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Blessings,
Cindy
28-May-2022
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Ferret Charm by Cindy Decker 2

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An excellent poem to go in this contest, I've put in a couple of suggestions for your perusal, only 4 syllables in the last line, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Suggestion: leaving out words is not good, "spending earned wages" and "a landlord's pet rage, that will put you on track.


Thank you, Roy, for giving this a look.
28-May-2022
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Horror Day

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Killing sprees are not common here, but yes, there are in the US, and now Ukraine, although I've been to both places, and they weren't when I was there, and we frequented New York a lot. Beautifully written my friend, but we do have our own horrors, and excellent post and entry in this contest, well done, blessings Roy


T B Botts
Hello Roy,
I know we're on different sides of the issue here. We hear this argument every time there is a situation like the one we're dealing with now. There are a number of problems that come in to play here. One is the mental illness issue. In many cases people have been turned loose when they should have been institutionalized. There are violent video games that kids have access to. In so many homes in America, there is no father figure. Many boys grow up angry. In a number of cases involving school shootings the killers were bullied. Of course if there were no guns, theoretically no one could get shot. In America, the statistic I heard was that there are something like 400 million guns. There is no way to outlaw them all. They have tried to regulate them, but the end result is that criminals own guns, and honest people can't buy them. Do criminals obey the law? By their very nature they don't. America is suffering from a deficit of the spirit of God. We have turned our back on Him and we are reaping what we've sown.
I hear the passion with which you write Roy. If perhaps we were governed by people with integrity, there would be more willingness to give up our guns. The fact is, at least half the country doesn't trust this government in the least. We have been lied to for years and in recent years, the power grab has been unprecedented. Perhaps the people of Australia are of more noble character, but we are being governed by a corrupt lot whose souls are for sale to the highest bidder, and gun control is looked upon as another government power grab.
The second amendment, which is part of the Bill of Rights, gives us the right to own guns for the purpose of a militia. Our founding fathers had the wisdom to know that a populace that is armed is less likely to be ruled by tyrants. If we had no weapons, how would we be any different than the Jews of Nazi Germany when they were led to the slaughter?
Thanks for your sincere opinion Roy. I know that you have a good heart and I respect you. It may be that you will be proved right, but I have never killed anyone, nor have most of the honest law abiding citizens of this country, nor do we intend to, but we do maintain the right to protect and defend ourselves. I do wish you a blessed day my friend.
Tom
28-May-2022
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How can a child defend themself? by royowen

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Hello Roy,
I appreciate your opinion on this very controversial subject. There are a number of people who feel like gun control is the answer. In liberal cities all across America, where guns are more difficult to get, there is more crime and loss of life than in cities where common sense is at play. In this country there are thousands of people who die from car accidents every year. Many are the result of people being drunk or high or because they were trying to drive while using their cell phones. Should we outlaw cars? Abortion has been legal in this country for over fifty years. In some states, babies are killed in the womb up until the time of delivery. The outcry by the left against stopping abortion is deafening. Sixty three million babies have died, not from guns, but from their own mothers taking their young lives. The same people who want abortion want to outlaw guns. There are many issues in the world that need to be addressed. Right now, the rich elite of the world are trying to control the masses. They are gathering in Davos Switzerland for the World Economic Forum. Do I have a say in that? Do you? Of course not. The CEO of Phizer wants to have people swallow a pill that will monitor whether or not they are getting vaccinated. The governments of the world, including our own president are pushing to allow the World Health Organization to determine when to declare a pandemic, anywhere in the world with no way to dispute it, willingly giving control of our sovereign rights to an organization that is pushing a one world government. This is the same organization that refuses to hold China accountable. In many liberal cities in this country, criminals are being released from prison. Our president has thrown open the borders for anyone to come into our country without back round checks, they just stream over the border. Can they do that in Australia or New Zealand or just about any other country in the world? I think not. There are thousands of people across the country who are dying from Fentenyl overdoses supplied by China and being brought into this country by illegals, who we can't call illegal aliens for fear of offending someone. School age children are being encouraged to question their gender and parents who get involved at school board meetings are labeled as domestic terrorists by the justice department. There are men in this country who want to be addressed as women and women who identify as men. They scream bloody murder if you don't use their preferred gender identifier. The lines between good and evil have been drawn and there is no room to sit on the fence any more. Will taking the guns from all the people in America make us a safer place? I don't think so. Guns are only dangerous when criminals use them. They are a tool like a hammer or a saw. We have a lot of problems in this county. Outlawing guns won't fix the problems. Turning to God will. We need a spiritual awakening, not gun control. Our hearts are broken by another senseless killing at the hand of a mentally disturbed individual, and yet the shameless politicians who hope to advance their agenda use this tragedy as an opportunity to push gun control.
Have a blessed day my friend.
Tom


Dolly'sPoems
Thank you for your review Roy, much appreciated, love Dolly x
28-May-2022
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Love and Loss by Dolly'sPoems

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Well done, written in deftly written heptameter, the theme is a very good, the fact that we'll all die one day is glaringly obvious, it's not a question of if, but when, but that's in God's hands, not ours, beautifully written Dolly, superbly scribed, blessings Roy


Dolly'sPoems
Thank you Roy for your review, the Mother was so patient and just accepted the Chick?s aggressive behaviour a bit like human Mother?s with their own children, we put up with a lot when kids are growing up and feeling their feet, love Dolly x
28-May-2022
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Flying the Coop by Dolly'sPoems

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They were created aggressive, not only by inclination but by instinct, this is a beautifully written poem dear Dolly. They really are a special bird, the symbol of bravery and magnificence, well done, blessings Roy.


Carolyn Dooley
You are welcome.
28-May-2022
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Who said? by royowen

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My granddaughter has a dog and a cat who love each other. They play and never fight. And according to my grandmother, when I was seven, she told me that one day we will see all animals get together and play. I believe it is the way you introduce the animals. Thank you.



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