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Thomas Bowling
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29-May-2020
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Covid-23 by Thomas Bowling

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What a thought eh. I'm sure there are people are immune to the virus, they problem is no one knows the answer to that one, the conspiracy theories, I've heard that Bill Gates is the leading "light" in the organisation at present. Along with George Poros. Well done, this is a possibility, a new Adam and Eve. And of course Dr Rubinstein, well done Thomas, great imagination. Blessings, Roy
Typo : Was stopped to(o) soon.


Robert Zimmerman
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29-May-2020
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Disparaging President Trump by Robert Zimmerman

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I think the bible calls all of these things gossip, and aught not to be, political dislike goes on here, but nowhere near as much as in America, Americans seem to dislike most of their ex Presidents, I know what the bible says about bad mouthing leaders, you'll get what you ask for. Quite frankly it simply means your countrymen hate democracy, I think we know what the alternative is. Well done Robert, blessings, Roy


oNray
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29-May-2020
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One Tear Away by oNray

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I don't think it's a weakness to cry, but many males will suffer stress if they hold it inside. I like your poems, they expound things that should be out their in the market place. Are you doing well as a new writer? It's sometimes difficult, they are a kind bunch here. Well done my friend, blessings Roy


MissMerri
Thanks for your encouraging words, Roy. I'm left wondering though, what a "romance tragic" might be. Is there really such a thing, or was that a typo? Anyway, I always love hearing from you. MM
29-May-2020
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From the Window by MissMerri

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What a beautifully written story Adonna. It's so sweet. When my girls were young, the shield of protection for my girls was like a aura in my heart. God has watched over them and protected them both. What a great entry in this contest. The silky smooth narrative was a pleasure reading, from someone who is a romance tragic. Well done Adonna, blessings, Roy


Bichon
Thanks Roy! Really, the kids have gone back to school for you? Not over here yet. For me I should be starting in September, but there are discussions that colleges might be online...
29-May-2020
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repeating dawn by Bichon

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I've almost done it a couple of times myself Chloe, they kids have gone back to school, so my days will be dictated by picking up my sweet granddaughter. Beautifully written my friend, you're branching out well, blessings Roy


Marjon van Bruggen
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29-May-2020
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Searching... by royowen

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We all sinned, we all made mistakes, we all learned from them. We confessed, we repented, we decided to better our lives.
How?
When we are getting older and understand more God's words and lessons, some of us will be wiser and make a radical turn in life. I think that Jesus not only was crucified to take our sins away but His life could serve as an example for us to live in His footsteps. Live with love and compassion in our hearts, be humble, and respect each other, be generous and caring. I try.


judiverse
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29-May-2020
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I Know that Jesus loves me... by royowen

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I remember going to Vacation Bible School, and we sang songs like this. Children would enjoy the action in your song, and it's great that the lyrics tell them what to do. Your words project a happy, upbeat mood for the kids. A great song of praise, and delightful artwork. judi


judiverse
You're very welcome. Take care. judi
29-May-2020
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Searching... by royowen

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This sounds like a person who has made mistakes in life, not knowing which direction to take. He now wants to spend his time being kind and living a life filled with grace. Some excellent alliteration in this, such as folly in flight's foolish flings. Great internal rhyme, too, with adorning and days. Excellent rhyme. You might have a smoother line with "I now want to spend" instead of "I want to now spend." judi


roof35
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29-May-2020
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Fall by roof35

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This is a really good Halku, this sounds like the dance of the autumn leaves, or at least the flitting and floating of the tumbleweed. Great alliteration, and and entry, great humour, blessings, Roy


Sandra du Plessis
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Sandra.
29-May-2020
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The sun glows each day by Sandra du Plessis

Chapter 337 of the book Little Good Morning Quotes

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Some very good advice Sandra, yes indeed, one should count every moment, and every day we should be grateful for. for the time We're given, well done, good job, blessings Roy



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