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Brett Matthew West

Sandra du Plessis
Thank you for your kind comments and support.

Have a great day,
Sandra.
09-Apr-2020
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Piano Music by Sandra du Plessis

Excellent
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True, Good music certainly livens up the party, and piano music is some of the finest. While this poem uses strong rhymes, why the change in rhyme scheme?


Drew Delaney
Thank you Brett! Yeah, but... he wasn?t very old! Thanks for the read and comments!
Drew
08-Apr-2020
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Oh, What A Fright by Drew Delaney

Chapter 8 of the book Book of Poetry

Excellent
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Knowing this is real adds another dimension to this well crafted story in a poem. Seems real life events always do. Strong rhymes used throughout. Would be a funny sight to see a pig chase him.


Cindy Warren
Thanks. Yep, Aaron's life is about to change. It's amazing how things work out sometimes.
08-Apr-2020
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Decisions by Cindy Warren

Chapter 28 of the book Aaron's Dragons

Excellent
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Seems Aaron will be king whether he wants to be or not, though he will continue to receive as much assistance as he requires. Sounds like he better get some sleep, he is going to need it.


Jannypan (Jan)
Thank you for your detailed review. Greatly appreciated as is your time. Respectfully, Jan
08-Apr-2020
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A Note About Homer the Gnome by Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent
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Interesting format for this well crafted pome. Although it has been hard, seems Homer is on quite an adventure. Good and strong rhyme words used throughout.


Bichon
Thank you so much Brett!!
08-Apr-2020
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The Drive by Bichon

Chapter 2 of the book Ivy on the Cliffs

Excellent
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Seems Ivy has some serious issues to overcome, and her mother's insensitivity will not help her get there. The ending leaves many possibilities this story could travel in.


Pam (respa)
Thanks for the review, Brett. It is amazing when you start looking at the small things to appreciate. I am glad you liked the poem and rhyme.
08-Apr-2020
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Nature in my Neighborhood by Pam (respa)

Excellent
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Is it not simply amazing what treasures and trinkets nature has to offer? This well crafted poem indicates the pleasures from this stroll. Strong rhyme scheme throughout.


judiverse
You're very welcome. judi
08-Apr-2020
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Greenbacks by Brett Matthew West

Excellent
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You use your 80 words with precision and tell your story smoothly. Mark Jackson seems to have done his planning and used perfect timing. All that money flying through the air! What about passers-by? Would this have occurred late at night? He might have had competition for getting all that money. Great insight into what drives Mark Jackson. He doesn't want to toil in the underbelly of life. Best of luck in the contest. judi


Bill Schott
Thank you, Brett, for the kind review.
08-Apr-2020
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Angels by Bill Schott

Excellent
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Contains 100 words so meets that requirement of the contest. Covers not only your youth, but now your admiration of your grandchildren, and the enjoyment received from both. Well told.


Pam (respa)
Thanks for the review, Brett. I am glad you liked the form, and I appreciate your comments about the beauty of nature and the poem, too.
08-Apr-2020
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Once Upon A Log by Pam (respa)

Excellent
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Interesting format for the poem. Nature has beauty humankind can not come close to matching as this well crafted poetry depicts. Would indeed be a sight to behold.


Shirley McLain
Thank you, Matt. I appreciate your support. Shirley
07-Apr-2020
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Hard Heart by Shirley McLain

Excellent
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Good, strong, homonym. Meets the requirements of this contest spot on. A steel heart would be very hard to steal. Should make an interesting entry for this contest.



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