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Sandra du Plessis

Thank you for the kind review, Sandra.
29-May-2020
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Dirt Devil

Excellent
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the dirt devil that ran across the ground picking up dust and sand as he spins over the dry sand that make whirlwind and pick up everything in its path.


harmony13
Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great
comments. Have a great weekend!.....Maria
29-May-2020
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Confusion by harmony13

Excellent
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A very well-written Lune poem about the confusion that overwhelms us when the guidelines cross and the picture and solution is not very clear we are quite perplexed.


Janice Canerdy
Thanks so much, Sandra. Janice
29-May-2020
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Hourglass by Janice Canerdy

Excellent
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A very well-written rhyming poem about the hourglass is set for the countdown and we should prepare to be ready when the last grain of sand falls, our time will be up forever.


Sandra, thanks so much for this wonderful review!
29-May-2020
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Last Will Be Best

Excellent
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A very well-written 3-7-5 poem about the last breath we take in our lives will free the soul to enter heaven as a pure entity chosen and created by God himself before we were born.


Thank you very much, Sandra.
29-May-2020
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Rainy Nights

Excellent
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A very well-written 3-7-5 poem about rainy nights that reminds us of our childhood days when we jump from puddle to puddle for fun.and getting dirty as much as we possibly can.


MissMerri
Thank you for reading this poem about my parent's love. I was a fortunate child, I know, to have them.
29-May-2020
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From the Window by MissMerri

Excellent
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A very well-written story/poem about your life as a child and young woman shaped by a loving father that prepared you well for the cruel life away from the safety o f the nest.


victor 66
Thank you so much, Sandra! Had you not mentioned it your review, I would've missed it altogether.
29-May-2020
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Minnesota Nice? by victor 66

Excellent
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A heartfelt poem about the incident where the police cause the death of a citizen. Unfortunately, your format for a lune poem is not correct it should be 5-3-5 syllables.


Bichon
Thank you dearest Sandra. Hope you are keeping safe x
29-May-2020
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repeating dawn by Bichon

Excellent
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A very well-written poem about the repeating cycle we are finding ourselves in where the one day seems to be like the previous and the next for the past ten weeks and we seem to go absolutely nowhere.


Thanks so much for your review and comments. I loved the picture because I thought the clothes really looked to be dancing. My poem isn't meant to indicate that I advocate hanging clothes out to dry.
29-May-2020
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Clothesline Dance

Excellent
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the wind breezes that can make the clothes on the line looking like they are dancing when the wind blows them in all directions.


Patty Palmer
Thanks for the great review and positive feedback!
Patty
29-May-2020
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Nurse's Notes by Patty Palmer

Excellent
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A very well-written Lune poem about the love between nurses sending secret notes to one another that only they can understand. Each loving couple seem to have their own secret notes only they can understand.



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