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Marykelly

nbonner
Thank you for your kind words and the review.
27-Aug-2017
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Holding me Down by nbonner

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In a very few words you have described the experience of losing a loved one but also the comfort one finds in faith. The emotional content of this brief poem is real and moving.


nbonner
Very true. Thank you for your awesome review and for taking the time to read my poem.
27-Aug-2017
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Annoying by nbonner

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The success of this poem stems from the emotional context that seems to come directly from the heart without any filter. The speaker is fed up with the people around her and there is no doubt about how she feels. I think there are times when we all get that sense of annoyance with people we can't seem to get rid of, and so the speaker somewhat speaks for the reader too.


pome lover
nifty idea.
27-Aug-2017
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Save Nifty by Marykelly

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what a nifty post and nifty poem! I love Nifty - and say it often. Now will say it more often so it won't go the way of "double decker" (meaning bunk beds.) I was talking to a Texas friend (I'm originally from Georgia) and was telling her that a room had a double decker in it and she had no idea what I was talking about.
So... nifty it is. I hope you get lots of positive responses.
Nifty responses!
Pome Lover


Pantygynt
Thank you so much for this review. I have come to believe that imagery is perhaps the key poetic device and all the others, metaphor, alliteration etc. are all there to enhance the imagery.
27-Aug-2017
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Meteorological Cascade by Pantygynt

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The strength of this poem is its imagery. The word choice is creative and imaginative when describing weather and the roller coaster backdrop for talking about weather brings the reader along for the ups and downs of weather changes.


Possummagic
Than you for your feedback. It's much appreciated.
27-Aug-2017
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Homelessness - a child's destiny by Possummagic

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Joey's story is told in a vivid way that makes the reader see Joey physically and emotionally. Mental health is a difficult subject to deal with when something is wrong but diagnosis is difficult. The frustration for Joey and the people around him is well expressed in this story and it raises the issue of how to deal with such profound behavioral disorders. Your love and loyalty to your son seem to be the answer.


Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for the review and kind words.
08-Aug-2017
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haiku (cherry blossoms) by Gypsy Blue Rose

Chapter 8 of the book Haiku Club Challenges, Book II

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This poem creates a lovely image of petals falling to the ground. The tongue-in-cheek conclusion is delightful since the tree has no remorse for littering.


Unspoken94
Mary, you probably know by now that I won't publish something that doesn't include a challenge to the reader. It's the nature of my profession as a psychotherapist. I love to write poetry, and stories, but not without a challenge to the reader. Thanks for the read and review. I've been gone for a few weeks. Home tomorrow via Spain. -Bill
07-Aug-2017
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Confinement by Unspoken94

Chapter 60 of the book Conversations

Exceptional
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This is a very powerful piece. The self reflection is forthright and recognizes a combination of good qualities and some not-so-good qualities. The strength of this poem is its honesty. In addition to the reflective nature of your poem there is also a challenge in this poem. You bare your soul and in so doing encourage the reader to do the same.


harmony13
Thanks so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
10-Jul-2017
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The Key to My Heart by harmony13

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The subject of this poem is the key to the speaker's heart and the poem offers a complexity that the expression, key to my heart, belies. The key to her heart demands trust and results in trust.


Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank you for the review and kind words.
Gypsy
10-Jul-2017
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haiku (day of the dead) by Gypsy Blue Rose

Chapter 4 of the book Haiku Club Challenges, Book II

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The tone of this poem is comforting. Praying for loved ones at the altar is formally recognizing the value of praying for the dead and gives comfort to the one praying that there is still something you can do for the one who is loved but out of reach.



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