Sweet, Jesus! Its so good having you back with us on FanStory, Ella. Last time I read your work was on June 7th, when you posted--"Pillow of Dreams." Your Non-Fiction Romance Presentation, ""Lily," a part of your book "My Life," is truly a most
commendable post. Of course, you're picture of July 2011--"Is commendable as well!" Did I say that? "You bet I did!"
While reading along, I was wondering? You wrote; "Lily is like any other woman. She is patient, kind and full uncomplicated energy." Shouldn't there be an "OF" in between "Full and Uncomplicated?" Also, "He would love to know more about her as so far he likes the way she lives her life." Shouldn't "SO FAR" be taken out? Then, "Deep cut added to the scars Lily carries from her marriage." Shouldn't "Cut read; Cuts?" Once again, "ADIL" responds right away, and then for the next three weeks, "ORION" and Lily exchange emails. Which is it--ADIL or ORION? And finally... "Orion lived his life to the limits he could take in a very respectful way." Did you mean; "He could TALK in a very respectful way?"
Of course, I'm not asking additional questions. However, I am recommending you using "Grammerly--etc.," to clarify your meaning. Oh, "I've been there--and still visit at times. If it wasn't for Grammerly, I would probably write; "Dem dar dogs--er gonna bite yo..."oh, you know?" I love "Lily!" Hope you are receptive of my remarks--"in a positive way." Once again--"it is good to have you back!" Best wishes--and God bless.