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Ella25

IndianaIrish
Thank you, Ella, for taking the time to read and review my autumn haiku. I appreciate your encouraging and kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
25-Mar-2017
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haiku (empty swing) by IndianaIrish

Chapter 14 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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Playgrounds are bare, no laughter and smile there...the wind pushes the swings on a rainy day. It is a very lovely written haiku. I picture those empty swings and children sitting quietly in the classrooms. Autumn leaves dancing in the rain. Well done, my friend. With love, Ella


l.raven
hi sweet girl...feeling a bit better...but have a ways to go...it's one day at a time....thank you for caring sweet angel...love to ua ...Linda xxoo
23-Mar-2017
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Rose by Ella25

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HI Ella, my favorite flower sweet girl...I loveeeeeeee your poem you...it is soooooo true...when a woman is loved correctly...she becomes a better woman...I guess you have to give all you have until you finally realize....he never loved you....and never will...love a woman true...and it will be returned in billions...I love your poem sweet angel...and love your picture...so beautifully written...please take care...love ya you...Linda xxoo


Sis Cat
Thank you, Ella, for your generous, six star review of Dean's and my "provoking and insightful" poem. We appreciate it. Blessing to you, too.
23-Mar-2017
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Atomic Renga by Sis Cat

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It is a beautiful poem. Very well-written and enjoyable to read. What had happened with the atomic bomb that landed on Hiroshima is hard to take as many innocent people lost their lives or terribly suffered in pain. The flow of the poem is smooth, and it is easy to understand. The comments are provoking and insightful. The image speaks on its own. Excellent co-work. Blessings to both, Ella


Sis Cat
Thank you, Ella, for your review and interpretation of my "beautifully written haiku."
23-Mar-2017
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haiku (at the road's bend) by Sis Cat

Chapter 15 of the book Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author

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Another beautifully written haiku, Andre. The image exquisitely expresses the words. The message is clear; this is what humans do to nature. Litter and destroy as the glass in the hot sun can start the fire. Excellent work. Blessings, Ella


moonsunrise
23-Mar-2017
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Rose by Ella25

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What a strong message. I felt the confidence while reading your poem.
The imagery is beautiful but strong!
Thanks for sharing.


Jackarrie
Thanks ella for your excellent review and great comments. Mary
22-Mar-2017
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Our blue print by Jackarrie

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It is a fascinating concept and beautifully presented, Mary. The baby in the womb is a real miracle. So precious and protected. A blueprint of life. Well done. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella


RGstar
Ditto, Ella. So loved your last work...so sorry missed the public support. Lovely write. I hope it gets somewhere. Beautiful.
Thanks for the super six.
My best wishes, little Ella.
RG
22-Mar-2017
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Seventy, Sixties Something by RGstar

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Another brilliant piece of yours, RG. Travelling back in time to songs that made sense and meant something. Music is healing and leading us to a better place. The poem is very smooth, calm and refreshing. Yes, we are One. No matter of our wealth, colour or tongue, like Imagine by John Lennon. Delightful and bright descriptions make this piece an outstanding one. Like the moon kissed the sun. All the best, my dear friend. Ella


Jackarrie
hi ella
I am so pleased that you enjoyed my entry into the contest, thanks for your exceptional review I really appreciate it. Mary
22-Mar-2017
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Hot stuff by Jackarrie

Chapter 28 of the book Poetry

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Excellent contest entry poem, Mary. The flow is great, the rhyme and the theme, amazing. The story of Donna and the disco is superb and the image fantastic. Thank you for sharing. Best luck in the contest. With love, Ella



pharp
Dearest Ella,

You are so kind, wow! I never thought I would get a six star on this Haiku. I came across the photo on Google images and the beauty of the tulips inspired me to pen this poem. Thanks you my dear for your review, six star and more than anything your support. Lots of love...Portia
22-Mar-2017
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Haiku (tulips take charge) by pharp

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It is a breathtaking haiku, sweet Portia. The image is striking and vibrant like you there, almost touch the tulips. Shake the snow away to protect its beauty. Beautiful, amazing. The words crest the image. Superb work. With love, Ella



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