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Ideasaregems-Dawn
You're very welcome. A six well-deserved. It's a pleasure to read your work again. :)
11-Oct-2020
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Steam by YNWA

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Awww! Mitchell, you always manage to capture the very essence of human emotion with your poetry, and this evokes much empathy in me for the young woman-- "...the mousiness of her voice ...dressed in shame" For the man, too. Especially "...the awkwardness of him drowning in his self-importance."
Superb!


dragonpoet
You are most kindly welcome, YNWA.
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08-Oct-2020
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Steam by YNWA

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This poem gives a clear image of an outside one night stand after too much alcohol. It shows the shame of such a happening and how they will not see each other again. Will this go in her journal as a regret?
It is a well written free vers poem using line breaks well.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
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Jeffrey Mitchell
Your welcome
07-Oct-2020
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Steam by YNWA

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Very nice, a one time encounter of lust, unforgettable memory, lost in why? Now pick up the pieces of life and carry on, I must leave its morning. Very creative thank you for sharing.


Miss Cookie Atkinson
My pleasure
Cookie
07-Oct-2020
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Steam by YNWA

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I found this to be a very emotional poem to read.
you captured my attention from the first line to the last
this is what i call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie


Ideasaregems-Dawn
Mitchell! Good to 'see' you!
06-Oct-2020
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Sand by YNWA

Excellent
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Mitchell, your free verse is second-to-none. I adore reading it, but you've been gone so long, and posted when I was probably not checking my PMs so didn't see the notice. (I'm not here as much as I used to be...)

Anyway, as usual, this is brilliant. Although I am so late reviewing it, a six wouldn't do anything towards promoting it, I'm glad I didn't miss it!
:)
Dawn


Gert sherwood
YNWA you are welcome
Gert
05-Oct-2020
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Steam by YNWA

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Hello YNWA you excellent free verse One night stand poem
Steam
You are so right it's steamy. There are so many lines that are indeed sizzling and hot, here is one that opened my eyes

Doused in sensuality
they tumbled free--
into a frantic, incalculable dinosaur

Gert


royowen
Welcome
05-Oct-2020
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Steam by YNWA

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This is a great metaphor for what really ales people in life, the only momentary relief from the sheer pain of life. is to feel the life of escape, it can be a book, running ten miles, a skinful of grog, a pill, or a sexual encounter. Beautifully written Mitchell, haven't seen you for awhile, welcome back. Blessings Roy
Typo, sunshine(')s morning smile. 2 : last night(')s steam.


Carlos' girl
my pleasure
05-Oct-2020
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Smoke by YNWA

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what a gorgeous poem...brilliant! How many of us have done the walk next morning after such a night lol. This poem is truthful. It doesn't make a happy or even a hopeful ending. It just makes an ending that imitates real life. I loved ? this poem.


Darkhorse555
thank you deeply mitchell i pray you have a blessed weekend
21-Sep-2019
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Flowering beauty grows by Darkhorse555

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I really enjoyed this love poem contest entry, some wonderful lines that entrap the feeling of being in love beautifully.
Excellent writing
Best wishes
Mitchell



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