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Asem.inspirations

Ricky1024
Thanks for your wonderful and precious review.
Asem.
Doctor Ricky 1024
12-Jan-2021
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Peaceful Soul by Ricky1024

Chapter 8 of the book "Written Faith"

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Hi Ricky, I see that you are still writing. I'm back Tier V. KING. But my pen name is changed to asem.inspirations.

This poem is sweet and it's somewhat like a lullaby. Nice


RGstar
Hey T,,,good to see you back..,Just logging in after Xmas break...not sure how long, but thank you.
Hope to read from you soon.
Have a great day. Thanks for going back to this
Best wishes.
09-Jan-2021
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Brothers In Arms by RGstar

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But of course it is a perfect poem. It gives honor to those who have paid the highest price, given their lives for a country who so easily forgets such sacrifice. Those who survive come back mostly to a life that many shun. You have explained this so eloquently, in a way that reminds us of the sadness of it all. My heart went out as I read it. There is evil in war, murder and in death itself. May the day finally come when these things will become only something that used to happen on this earth.

Bravo, my dear brother. It is as usual, extraordinary work. It's great to be back to read your work.


Dolly'sPoems
This book is for adults, I used a little bit of humour and hopefully quell people?s fear of bugs, I really appreciate your kind review, love Dolly x
05-Jan-2021
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The World of Poetic Bugs by Dolly'sPoems

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Hi Dolly, your introduction poem to your new book is great and the book is a great idea. Yes, because you're right most people don't like insects. But them there are those insects that are extremely important to our universe. They play a major role so to learn of each and what their contribution is is very smart.


Bill Schott
This is only the third chapter and they are very short. The other may still be promoted.
05-Jan-2021
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Zoo Murder: Interview by Bill Schott

Chapter 3 of the book Zoo Murder:

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Hello Bill: I'm very interested in those faux fur chairs. This story seems well on its way already so I will have to dig deep to see where you started the story.

Your characters are interesting so far


royowen
Thanks Asem, so much for your lovely comments and super review, blessings, Roy,
01-Jan-2021
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Sister Sledge... by royowen

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Good morning Roy: Love the poem, full of good thoughts and I can totally relate.

When I returned to God, I had to leave all of my old habits and friends. If I ever bumped into them I would explain the changes on me but mostly they knew because even in my old ways I would preach to them or share a scriptural thought.

Change was totally necessary so once again I can totally relate. Loved it all


lyenochka
It's so hard! I'm saying a prayer for the Lord to reveal the truth now. We can only pray and then it's up to the Lord - He can always surprise us! Blessings to you in the New Year! Hugs!
31-Dec-2020
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Selective Hearing by lyenochka

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Good morning Lyenochka: I fell in love with this lune poem right away as I am dealing with this situation with my 22 year old daughter. I cant tell her anything. She wants to be right about hom but mother knows he's a creep and a con.

Anyway, I loved it and it's right on point, exactly what happens.


Dolly'sPoems
Thank you for your review, glad you enjoyed this poem and glad I evoked some positive images for you, love Dolly x
30-Dec-2020
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Contentment Wins by Dolly'sPoems

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Good morning, Dolly: This is such a pleasant and thoughtful poem. It's full of positivity and goodness in life. So I agree: contentment wins. Life is so much better and we live longer when we're content.

I love the pictures that came to mind as I read your poem, beautiful!


Jannypan (Jan)
Thank you for taking time to read and review my presentation. Most appreciative. Jan
30-Dec-2020
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Heard by Jannypan (Jan)

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Hey there Janny pan: The poem is interest, brief and to the point.
But the total post is full of interesting information about your topic. It's obvious you did your research. It was an interesting read.


royowen
Thanks so much, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings
Roy
30-Dec-2020
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My Brother died for me... by royowen

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Oh Owen, how I do love your poetry. And there is not one subject you could fail at writing for but especially Jesus Christ. Forthere is no greater love than anyone who would so willingly sacrifice their life for so many that we all my live.

You've expressed it well and I love this form of poetry.


Barb Hensongispsaca
I am truly honored by your words, thank you
30-Dec-2020
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Did I Remember To ...? by Barb Hensongispsaca

Chapter 55 of the book 2020 - 6

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Good morning again, barbara: This is another thoughtful poem. I love that it is in the form of a prayer and is so realistic. Sometimes we tend to forget to thank God. I guess it's because we know that he knows everything already so we think that we don't have to say what he knows. I know that lately I forget to even pray
ir just put it off for later. But God actually wants to hear us express ourselves. So your poem was a wonderful reminder for me.



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