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victortouche
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14-Aug-2020
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The Music of Stillness by victortouche

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The poem flowed really well. I love the metaphors and imagery used, it really makes the poem come alive. Thank you for sharing, N.B.


victortouche
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05-Aug-2020
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Steppin' and a Livin' by victortouche

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Dancing is the essence of love. I believe you can dance and look into someone eyes and know they are the one. Thank you for sharing, I liked. N.B.


Konikita2009
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02-Aug-2019
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Love by Konikita2009

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Love is definitely all those things and more. I think a lot of people take love for granted and when they have they don't respect it enough to keep it. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB


bertodi
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03-Mar-2019
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Descent by bertodi

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Nicely written. I agree, what has happened to society? My favorite line 'One day in the future all will be clear
when they are all dead and disappeared
Thank you for sharing, NB












Cranial Thinker
Thank you so very much nbonner for this wonderfully up building encouragement and the high rating on this work again thank you so very much....Cranial Thinker
10-May-2018
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Our Silent Language Read Expertly by Cranial Thinker

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Faith is all about not allowing yourself to be tempted but sometimes we fall which is okay, we just get back up again. I liked. Thank you for sharing


Cranial Thinker
Thank you so very much nbonner for this very up building review and high rating on this work again thank you so very much....Cranial Thinker
10-May-2018
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The Equated Sum of True Life by Cranial Thinker

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I believe life for each is how they perceive it. I love the imagery and metaphors used. My favorite line is in stanza four-The equation of life is the willingness to fall in love with the divine of waiting. I liked. Thank you for sharing


Cranial Thinker
Thank you so very much nbonner for this very up building review and high rating on this work again thank you so very much....Cranial Thinker
10-May-2018
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The Newness of My Breath by Cranial Thinker

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With faith anything is possible. We all chose our path and we hope it's the right one (sometimes it isn't). But in the end He will guide us to the right one. Thank you for sharing


Sylvia Kennedy
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21-Feb-2018
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Faith by Sylvia Kennedy

Chapter 32 of the book SPECIAL TWEEN TO SPECIAL TWEEN

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This 5 line poem gives a strong message about faith and Christ. I also believe Faith in Christ is life. Well written. Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed.


Sylvia Kennedy
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21-Feb-2018
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Space 8 by Sylvia Kennedy

Chapter 101 of the book SPECIAL TWEEN TO SPECIAL TWEEN

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Different and unique, I liked it. I like how you stuck with the "which" at the end of each line, again different. Thank you for sharing


Sylvia Kennedy
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21-Feb-2018
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Laughter Here Hear by Sylvia Kennedy

Chapter 60 of the book SPECIAL TWEEN TO SPECIAL TWEEN

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A beautiful message in such a short poem. I can actually see the ocean when I read this, great write, I liked. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest



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