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Jeffrey L. Michaux

duaneculbertson
Thank you!
26-Jan-2021
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The Assassin's Debacle by duaneculbertson

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This was a very engaging and entertaining little story. It kept your attention throughout the length of it. I like the way you described the action in great detail. Well done.


Ulla
They are, aren't they? Thanks a lot for the great review. The ending of the story is coming nearer. But first the preparations for Jamaica and the big haul of bananas. Please do read on. I so appreciate your reviews and comments. Ulla:)))
07-Nov-2020
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The Fisherman's Son- 86 by Ulla

Chapter 86 of the book The Fisherman's Son

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Those lasses of Lorenzo's are quite the little feisty pair. Andrew has upgraded his digs and sounds serious about the lad making good on the loan that he is extending to him. I hope that he's successful for the sake of business and friendship. I enjoyed reading this engaging and well written chapter. Well done Ulla!


Iza Deleanu
Thank you so much, Mr. Jeffrey:)
04-Nov-2020
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Sweeper-wiper by Iza Deleanu

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This is witty, cute, and very adorable. I guess that they might be considered cat burglars, huh? You've done a fine job with this humorous and well written work. Well done!


Lisa Wharton
Thank you so much. This is why I like this website where I can use my visual imagination combining with my literature talent to make a nice piece of art.
03-Nov-2020
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Dahlia by Lisa Wharton

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I do believe that these beautiful little colorful flowers are eye candy indeed. I love all of the different assorted colors. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!


sammielwf
Jeffrey,
I love the review- but I will still not give you my Snickers!
Thanks for your thoughts.
Sammielwf
03-Nov-2020
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A Witch's Lament by sammielwf

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That is a lament, quite the lament indeed! I know if one is giving away such sugary treasures, a bit of selfish mischief could try to linger in. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!


Chrissy710
Hi Jeffrey, Thanks for your review and yes the pounds or Kilo's areceasily gained so now on 'diet' ( Sorry for delayed reply but my brother died 5 days ago and we are trying to prepare for his funeral next week) Cheers Christine
31-Oct-2020
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Muffin Top by Chrissy710

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I know for a fact that almost everyone has gained some weight since the arrival of this pandemic. I've gained ten pounds. I guess when confined and unable to do things like we use to, we resort to our comfort, food. Thanks for sharing this humorous and well written work. Well done!


lyenochka
Thank you so much, Jeffrey! Appreciate the review! Bless you!
30-Oct-2020
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The Dreaded Oxford Comma by lyenochka

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I like this Helen. I think that being grammatically correct is a great thing. I don't know that I always meet the criteria though. I do like to be that way though and this is a comma that I've used but didn't know that it was called that. I always like the excellent poem that accompanies your work. Thanks for sharing this informative and well written work. Well done!


lyenochka
Amen! Loved your analogy of Moses and the Red Sea! You seem to be a natural preacher, Jeffrey. I hope you use your gift of words for your church! Thanks for sharing here! Blessings!
30-Oct-2020
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Resting in the Storm by lyenochka

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This is absolutely beautiful Helen and I love the powerful message conveyed in it. That dynamic duo of faith and trust can't be beat. Just like Moses when He was at the Red Sea surrounded by the Egyptian armies, all we need do like he did is fall back into the arms of the Lord. He is the answer to every problem and will deliver us out of all of our trouble. I really enjoyed reading this inspirational and well written work. Well done!


Ulla
Hi Jeffrey, isn't she just! thank you so much for your great review. They are a great family. Ulla:)))
29-Oct-2020
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The Fisherman's Son- 85 by Ulla

Chapter 85 of the book The Fisherman's Son

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Martha is quite the spunky little fireball. I like a woman with some spunk, fire, and spirit. I see and knew that the lad would be a good and loving father. It's going to be good for him to be home for a while. I enjoyed reading this well written chapter. Well done!


Cynthia Adams1
I appreciate your review. Thank you.
29-Oct-2020
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A Month In The Life Of Ella T. by Cynthia Adams1

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I like what you've presented here. She had many choices but settled on just going back to what was familiar to her. She went to the ex's house. May I never find myself in such a condition. Thanks for sharing this well written work. Well done!



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