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humpwhistle
Thank you, Shawlyn. I'm glad you enjoyed. Peace, Lee
18-Mar-2018
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Chances Are Slim by humpwhistle

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Hi humpwhistle,
Great scene setting in so few words. Public embarrassment is handled well and cringe worthy. Good job.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.


Kerry Robinson
Thank you so very much, I appreciate it. Sorry for the late reply, I've been moving.
15-Mar-2018
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Haiku (fireflies) by Kerry Robinson

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Hi Kerry,
Beautifully put together. Simple words with great imagery. The picture you have included, combine well with your words.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn


Tootie
That's so nice of you to say! Thank you so much for your kind words and review. It means a great deal to me to know the impact came across well. I was thrilled with the image that I chose to accompany the poem. Best wishes to you also!
10-Mar-2018
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Sudden Impact (Ecstasy!) by Tootie

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Hi Catherine,
I enjoyed your poem. It is simple and yet contains the 'joyful excitement' you aimed for. The image you have chosen embraces your work beautifully, well done.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.


Mrs. KT
Hello Shawlyn!
This is only the second cleave poem I have attempted. Really challenging but rewarding as well.
Thank you for your positive and thoughtful review!

diane
10-Mar-2018
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I Imagine White Tulips by Mrs. KT

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Hi Mrs.KT,
I've never seen or read a cleave poem before. You have put together such a beautiful work with much meaning and imagery. Very impressive.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.


Jeffrey L. Michaux
Yes, one face is the best way to try to be. I'd rather not put on. To much work to pretend to try to impress or please. I appreciate your comments and excellent review.
09-Mar-2018
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So many Faces by Jeffrey L. Michaux

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Hi Jeffrey,
I truly believe that people put on faces for the occasion. It would be wonderful if they could realize that their one 'true face' would be appreciated by all who would be their friends.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.


Jannypan (Jan)
Shawlyn,
I appreciate your time reviewing my poem. Thank you. Jan
09-Mar-2018
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SCENTsational by Jannypan (Jan)

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Hi Jan,
I enjoyed your poem and the way you poke fun at these highly scented and misguided people who wend their way through life, unaware of of the effect they have on others.
Well done.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.


Susan Burger
Thanks for your rating and kind comments. They are much appreciated.
09-Mar-2018
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Good Samaritan by Susan Burger

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Great little story. In so few words you have shown a woman trying to escape an unwelcome situation and someone coming to her aid to facilitate her escape. Well done.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.


Jan26
Thank you so much! best regards, jan
09-Mar-2018
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Never Beyond Repair by Jan26

Chapter 48 of the book Poems

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Hi Jan,
I enjoyed your poem immensely. Your words tell me that truth and memories can effect ones life adversely, but there is always hope for a better tomorrow.
Regards and best wishes, Shawlyn.


Debbie Pope
I will look for them. Thanks for mentioning it.
07-Mar-2018
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Time Travel by Shawlyn

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I love this poem. You say no more and no less than is necessary. And, you manipulate the words in an appealing way. Like evolve I must instead of I must evolve. Another example, a simple thing, you change "live life to its fullest" to "love life." That is so much nicer. I did not even notice that it is an acrostic poem until I read the notes. It flows so well. And with the change in words from time to travel, you change your voice. Expertly done. The more I read, the more I like. Good luck in the competition. You ought to win.


dragonpoet
Hi Shawlyn

You're very welcome. Have a great week.

Joan
07-Mar-2018
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Time Travel by Shawlyn

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This acrostic reminds us that time is fleeting and we must use it to live life to the fullest. I don't think we could be immortal unless we could rid the world of war and disease.

Keep writing

dragonpoet



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