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Lance Polin

Meia (MESAYERS)
Bless you and thankyou so much hard at work with my 'story poems' book now I plan to bring both out in paperback many many thanks Meia xxx
06-Nov-2018
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My first book of poems... by Meia (MESAYERS)

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Will do. Good luck with the two books. I am looking forward to reading the whole thing(s). I am, however, quite the luddite, and must wait for the hard copy. I hate kindle, even though I have and will continue to publish in the format (you know, it being today, in an era where no one really reads, and if they do it is somehow online. Again, good luck. Just for fun I considered giving this advertisement one star, but I like your writings too much, so you get just the traditional five--


Karina21
Thank you so much for your thoughtful review. I did intend this piece to generalize to many tragedies. It's funny you mention the form because I actually wrote two versions of this piece. The other version is in a free verse form, where I expand on this idea far more than I do here. I actually started writing that free verse piece with this 5-7-5. I look forward to posting the free verse version soon. I think you would like it, especially if you're into dark and cynical poetic content.
05-Nov-2018
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Front Page by Karina21

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This piece can be taken on a number of levels and each one of them retaining quite a bit of power. You could be talking about the latest horrible mass killing, or some atrocious tragedy or maybe it is just the sullen inevitability of death. I am not generally a huge fan of these limited format poems, but you nailed this one. Great job.


His Grayness
Excellent work in all dimensions and certainly, you've been there and earned the scars and stripes! Keep up the fine work and thanks always! Vance
05-Nov-2018
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Confessions of a Pollster by Lance Polin

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I found this to be an exceptionally well done work of very rare life experience indeed! Certainly the exposure to the raw behavior's of (what would be expected to be civil and serious voters, and instead, human trash} would leave one with scars not easily excused or forgot, even by todays likely harsh and radical voters, probably still reflecting their angst in any public setting! The bias of politics is surely a dark and ugly energy force, I would expect generated by gross failures of those elected who failed to deliver what was promised or even expected! and not really promised by the politician. Lets face it, POLITICS IS DIRTY BUSINESS IN ALL DIMENSIONS! And I, like probably most anyone else have my staunch dislikes and miss trust, based on what history of performance has reported. I simply HATE DEMOCRATS therefore! Amen! But as a Veteran, a blue blooded AMERICAN, and a lover of AMERICA, and what we stand for! it is an energy that is deep, rich, honest and genuine! HIS GRAYNESS


Cranial Thinker
Thank you much Lance Polin for the wonderful review and humbling six-star rating on this work again thank you much...Cranial Thinker
04-Nov-2018
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Chose Evolution or Creation by Cranial Thinker

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This is just wonderful. The long, rambling passages give a certain fury to your statements and creates a profound questioning and understanding at the same time. On a side not--and I am not religious at all--some of the questions you ask, perhaps even the main one of the title, I believe can be rationalized into a mutual truth. I mean, this God character, maybe It caused evolution as well. Maybe the earth is much older than we think. Perhaps even God Itself evolves through time. And maybe, just maybe, what God actually looks like is the celestial slime that first crawled out of the sea . . .


Cranial Thinker
Thank you much Lance Polin for this insightfully uplifting review and humbling six-star rating on this work again thank you much...Cranial Thinker
04-Nov-2018
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The Darkness That Hangs by Cranial Thinker

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This is wonderful. There is a terrifying echo chamber to the five lines in each section. I saw this as a sort of tango. It is dizzying. It is very intense. Vivid. I wonder just what sort of drugs perhaps inspired this wonderful tizzy. You are the first person I've ever given six to.


Meia (MESAYERS)
Thankyou so much for your wonderful and detailed review Lance love and thanks Meia x
04-Nov-2018
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The Funeral Queen by Meia (MESAYERS)

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Another great piece. I truly enjoy your particular focus, historical crimes in the mold of tragic poetry. It is really quite lovely. More more more!


His Grayness
Thanks so much for your very wise and wonderful message. Peace and Goodwill always! Vance
02-Nov-2018
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What Has Become of Racism? by Lance Polin

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I honestly and sincerely find it a shame and great disappointment than an author and Teacher with such a gift of communications skills, has turned those gifts to focus on demeaning a man who has done so much positive work for AMERICA in the face of constant angst and corruption delivered by the ruthless, shameful democrats and their sorry ass followers! Donald Trump is a personal friend of many years and I know him to be one of the wisest and most generous people I've ever met. He loves the right things in life and has done a wonderful job of positive improvements to America since taking office, and all in the face of immediate and constant hatred from the media and Democrat pigs who only seek their own privilege of corruption and power. I share his friendship with many other Americans and foreign business people that have worked with him and myself in often very difficult circumstances. His works have always been fair and decent in all my experiences and when comparing him to the ETHICS AND CREDIBILITIES of the American Democrats, it is like comparing puppies to PIGS! An unbiased and honest reflection of his positive achievements to the USA should fast shut the mouths of the truly ignorant hate mongers! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance


His Grayness
Thanks LANCE, and let peace and joy be ours always! Vance
02-Nov-2018
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What Has Become of Racism? by Lance Polin

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I honestly and sincerely find it a shame and great disappointment than an author and Teacher with such a gift of communications skills, has turned those gifts to focus on demeaning a man who has done so much positive work for AMERICA in the face of constant angst and corruption delivered by the ruthless, shameful democrats and their sorry ass followers! Donald Trump is a personal friend of many years and I know him to be one of the wisest and most generous people I've ever met. He loves the right things in life and has done a wonderful job of positive improvements to America since taking office, and all in the face of immediate and constant hatred from the media and Democrat pigs who only seek their own privilege of corruption and power. I share his friendship with many other Americans and foreign business people that have worked with him and myself in often very difficult circumstances. His works have always been fair and decent in all my experiences and when comparing him to the ETHICS AND CREDIBILITIES of the American Democrats, it is like comparing puppies to PIGS! An unbiased and honest reflection of his positive achievements to the USA should fast shut the mouths of the truly ignorant hate mongers! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance


His Grayness
Lance, this is my official sincere apology for trying to sell Trump as it is obvious to me and many others that his demeanor has shifted greatly since my times respecting him in person. I do actually remember a time even back then, when he went off on one of my work team guys and then I went off on him and it took quite a while for all that to settle out. he is clearly impatient and now under circumstances that call for a damn lot of it so I'm taking a new perspective now and resolve that my commentary about him shall remain quiet and I will simply say a regular prayer for him and hope it helps. I do believe that in spite of his downsides, he has done one hell of a good job in cleaning up Washington and certainly hope he can keep the crats out of any powers that matter. Best wishes to you and I shall look forward with positive anticipation of any of your new works! Vance
02-Nov-2018
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What Has Become of Racism? by Lance Polin

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I honestly and sincerely find it a shame and great disappointment than an author and Teacher with such a gift of communications skills, has turned those gifts to focus on demeaning a man who has done so much positive work for AMERICA in the face of constant angst and corruption delivered by the ruthless, shameful democrats and their sorry ass followers! Donald Trump is a personal friend of many years and I know him to be one of the wisest and most generous people I've ever met. He loves the right things in life and has done a wonderful job of positive improvements to America since taking office, and all in the face of immediate and constant hatred from the media and Democrat pigs who only seek their own privilege of corruption and power. I share his friendship with many other Americans and foreign business people that have worked with him and myself in often very difficult circumstances. His works have always been fair and decent in all my experiences and when comparing him to the ETHICS AND CREDIBILITIES of the American Democrats, it is like comparing puppies to PIGS! An unbiased and honest reflection of his positive achievements to the USA should fast shut the mouths of the truly ignorant hate mongers! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance


His Grayness
Lance, I guess we shall simply have to agree to disagree and I deeply apologize for not being able to deliver the written joy, understanding, perspective, and praise that my experience with Trump has instilled in me! Sorry it did not give you any peace! Vance
02-Nov-2018
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What Has Become of Racism? by Lance Polin

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I honestly and sincerely find it a shame and great disappointment than an author and Teacher with such a gift of communications skills, has turned those gifts to focus on demeaning a man who has done so much positive work for AMERICA in the face of constant angst and corruption delivered by the ruthless, shameful democrats and their sorry ass followers! Donald Trump is a personal friend of many years and I know him to be one of the wisest and most generous people I've ever met. He loves the right things in life and has done a wonderful job of positive improvements to America since taking office, and all in the face of immediate and constant hatred from the media and Democrat pigs who only seek their own privilege of corruption and power. I share his friendship with many other Americans and foreign business people that have worked with him and myself in often very difficult circumstances. His works have always been fair and decent in all my experiences and when comparing him to the ETHICS AND CREDIBILITIES of the American Democrats, it is like comparing puppies to PIGS! An unbiased and honest reflection of his positive achievements to the USA should fast shut the mouths of the truly ignorant hate mongers! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance



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