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Tina Crute

Chip Kuzborski
Thank you, Tina.
11-Nov-2020
For the review on
Four Seconds by Chip Kuzborski

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This is a jarring poem that made me a bit sad, but I do see that you are effective in making all the parts of your presentation fit together. The words, meaning, picture and overall format go well together. Not being able to see the end of the bridge, is also and end of sorts.
Just a suggestion...you could put the National suicide hotline number in your author's notes.
Tina


Suzanna Ray
It does!
29-Oct-2020
For the review on
Presents for Barb by Tina Crute

Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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Dear Tina, it is wonderful for you to write this poem for Barbara. I never thought like you, that like you, I could not find a rhyme. I really appreciate you're sort of writing this for all of us, and wanted to ask only one question; about the play of words on "presence" and "presents".
I am a little slow at figuring things like this, out.


lyenochka
Thank you! We're about to consult more with the doctors to change the treatment. How is your hubby doing?
28-Oct-2020
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Presents for Barb by Tina Crute

Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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Aww! That's so sweet, Tina! Thank you for sharing and writing this upbeat poem with HUGE letters just for Katherine's mom. I'm sure she will be delighted!


Cindy Decker
I?m well, thank you.
What a a wonderful way of expressing birthday wishes.
Stay well, Tina. 😷🎃
27-Oct-2020
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Presents for Barb by Tina Crute

Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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What a wonderful way to wish someone a happy birthday. I love your poem and its beautiful rhyme. I'm not much of a flower person; what is the name of that bright yellow flower in the photo? I hope Barb had a happy birthday.
Very nice work.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy


Cindy Decker
I?m well, thank you.
What a a wonderful way of expressing birthday wishes.
Stay well, Tina. 😷🎃
27-Oct-2020
For the review on
Presents for Barb by Tina Crute

Chapter 19 of the book Blessings for Barbara

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What a wonderful way to wish someone a happy birthday. I love your poem and its beautiful rhyme. I'm not much of a flower person; what is the name of that bright yellow flower in the photo? I hope Barb had a happy birthday.
Very nice work.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Cindy


Carmen Ducharme
Thank you Tina im glad you enjoyed my poem God Bless
24-Oct-2020
For the review on
Love by Carmen Ducharme

Chapter 24 of the book Carmen' s Poetry Book

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The poem is simple, but universal in nature. Everyone has felt this at some point. Your few words are penned with emotion and stand out on a dark background. If the background were black, I would like it also. I am glad you didn't choose red, because the dark color expresses the poem better:)
Tina


sophie sullivan
A poem is how ever I want to write it, it?s authentic, it?s me and I?m sure we have dyslexic writers, you understood my poem. This is how I write, this is me and I don?t write to be marked on my grammar I write to express. Thanks 😊
21-Oct-2020
For the review on
The greatest sinner by sophie sullivan

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My heart saddened after reading this. The blasphemy will not be taken lightly by God, it says in the Bible, so be careful with your words about God. I will pray for you, that you come to understand God as the loving, caring God that He is. God. I will not take points from you because I do not agree with your poem, but because of your lack of grammar and proper punctuation.


sophie sullivan
A poem is how ever I want to write it, it?s authentic, it?s me and I?m sure we have dyslexic writers, you understood my poem. This is how I write, this is me and I don?t write to be marked on my grammar I write to express. Thanks 😊
21-Oct-2020
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The greatest sinner by sophie sullivan

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My heart saddened after reading this. The blasphemy will not be taken lightly by God, it says in the Bible, so be careful with your words about God. I will pray for you, that you come to understand God as the loving, caring God that He is. God. I will not take points from you because I do not agree with your poem, but because of your lack of grammar and proper punctuation.


lyenochka
Thank you so much, Tina! Have a blessed Sunday! Hugs!
17-Oct-2020
For the review on
Contemplation of Air by lyenochka

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What a thought-provoking poem. I love questions posed in poetry like that. It is that kind of curiosity that invites more poetry. I love the phrase from the Lord's prayer, "Our daily bread." It makes me remember, even more, to be thankful for air. There's so much the Lord does for us on a daily basis:)
I enjoyed this walk in the woods! Please be well and safe!
Tina


Gloria ....
Thank you Tina for an exceptional rating and terrific review. I find it is a fiddly form, but worth it each time in the learning of the shape and placement of words. Also thank you for the editing. Much appreciation to you always. :))

Gloria
17-Oct-2020
For the review on
Poetry Like Autumn Air by Gloria ....

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This may be my favorite of yours! There are a million or so Autumn poems out there, so an original that "captures my fancy" like this is rare.
What I liked best...everything! The art, the leaf in motion, the villanelle perfectly done, the imagery, the phrases," The heart in which we store our visions' fare..." Fair would work also! This is full of beautiful words about beautiful poetry and beautiful Fall.
Tina



3rd stanza, first line...night('s) affair?



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