I love the sandwich analogy! The words are few, but thought provoking. As my generation prepares for retirement, I work daily with brilliant young generation that teaches me so much! Great job
LOL. Okay.. Maybe instead of all those other big names you would have done better to try one of the following: Dr. Scholl's, New Balance or the old school Buster Brown's. I don't know how pretty they would have been but they never go out of style and since they're good for your feet you might not be wearing that boot in the picture. Love that picture by the way! Well done!
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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
Thank you Brenda;
I loved your review and comments. You made me day, even with the boot!
This is a great entry for the contest. I have loved reading how many directions two small words can evoke. Words have power, neither numbers or size compare, nice job on your entry. Good Luck
Thomas Bowling
Thank you for reviewing and your kind words.
As usual, your story is riveting and leaves the reader wanting more. Reading your writing is a joy. You are simply fun to read and I am always left wondering how to review great works, other than to say "great job."
Dolly'sPoems
Thank you Ada for your review, glad you could identify with my words, love Dolly x
Sadly; I'm afraid many of us know this person. It heart breaking to watch one start with drowning their sorrow, but it's never too long before they have drowned their soul. Well done!
Sandra du Plessis
Thank you for the kind comments and feedback, I always appreciate your time to read and review my work.
This is beautiful, a blessing for everyone and each day we are blessed with. Life can get hard, this is a great reminder to find beauty in each day we are given.
Tedd Turton
Wow! Thanks so much Ada for your generous review. I was so touched by this woman. She was a champion in a almost totally male dominated profession. Her jaw-dropping buildings still amaze me.
Thanks for reading. Best Wishes, Tedd Turton
I learned a little about Assiduous and her sketches of youth, that reached invention. It's sparked my interest to read more. Nice job. Pioneers came in all forms
I love this, what a great job you have done. I believe the words
"The future's uncertain, and the end is always near." have caused many of us to do a " cautious U-turn and heading home." Very well captured.
Brenda Henderson
You're welcome! Glad to hear there was no cat abuse. Lol :)
Okay. What ever happened to picking the cat up and placing it on the floor or even putting it out of the room! I guess boys will be boys! This sounds like many exchanges between siblings baring the cat abuse. Well written. Well done!
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2019
Oh but there was not cat abuse, he was smacking his brother's head. Hahaha thank for ready, I now need to create that fact in the story a little better. Love it!
Hi there,
This is a chilling read for sure. You are such a fantastic story teller, and yet you are able to show your story so well. Great job as always.