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Susan X Smith

Barb Hensongispsaca
You are so right, I changed the last line and used 'Till. Thank you for the second set of eyes and the help. Always wanted.
28-Mar-2020
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'Til Break of Dawn by Barb Hensongispsaca

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This is a lovely romantic poem and an excellent contest entry. Your use of rhyme throughout the piece is well done. I would suggest changing "To" in the title to "The" or "Till." Also in the last line, I think it should read "tears of joy are...." rather than "tears of joy is...."


Jed Fern
Thank you, I'm pretty happy with that.
28-Mar-2020
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Only Twenty? by Jed Fern

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Ha, ha, this is a cute one, and so true. The hyperbole works well here, as does the nifty image. Thanks for sharing this one. It is an excellent contest entry.


Rmocruz
I am guilty of raunchiness as charged.
I hope you got a chuckle.
Many thanks!
28-Mar-2020
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Horny Rich by Rmocruz

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This is a bit raunchy for my usual tastes. However, I have to admit it is funny, and traditionally, a limerick is meant to be a bit bawdy. Thanks for sharing this one.


dovemarie
Dear Susan, Thank you for your review, compliment. Dove
28-Mar-2020
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Dearest Hope by dovemarie

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This is an excellent contest entry. Your words are well chosen and I love the background color, which is certainly in keeping with the sentiment. How about adding a piece of Fan Art?


Mary D Hollingsworth
I'm sorry that's suppose to be humerous not numerous but I really enjoyed it thanks for sharing
28-Mar-2020
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Divine Inspiration by Susan X Smith

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The content has a twist of very cunning sexuality in a very little cute numerous way and I like it. I'm sure the Sisters weren't too happy about the incident but I can certainly understand how a praise report of Hallelujah coming from every Deacon, male member and even the Pastor would be a sufficient response. I applaud you on your clever use of humor.


Thank you Susan for reading and the review!
28-Mar-2020
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Neighborhood Smile-Maker

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This is a beary cute short story and an excellent contest entry along with the image. "Contagious smile" as a concept, is a nice play on words, considering the current pandemic.


Thank you, maybe attacker is to strong a word, it was meant to relate to the fishing line, bait, and hook
28-Mar-2020
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Ripples Upon The River

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This was a good start at a story, limited by the fact that the writing prompt is flash fiction. I was a bit confused as to who the attacker was. The ending was a nice touch.


Cindy Decker
You?re welcome!
27-Mar-2020
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Cat call by Susan X Smith

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A nice, fanciful poem capturing the essence of cats. The photo is very beautiful. I'm a dog mom and a cat aunt and, while there is an ocean of difference in the two species, cats and dogs are both valiant, loyal creatures. A very sweet poem. Good luck in your contests.


Janice Canerdy
Thank you, Susan. Janice
27-Mar-2020
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Nature's Little Creatures by Janice Canerdy

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I enjoyed reading this one. The rhymes that you use are really quite unique and effective. The picture is a fitting complement to the words. Thanks for sharing.


Cindy Decker
Thank you so much for the wonderful review, Susan. Stay well.
27-Mar-2020
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Solo Flight by Cindy Decker

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This is an excellent contest entry. The picture is a real "wow" and the words describe what the reader is seeing. I enjoyed reading this one. thanks for sharing.



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