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Bobby Cunningham

Shaye Kilby
I have not spell checked it yet, thank you for your pure honesty .
20-Nov-2020
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Positivity by Shaye Kilby

Excellent
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What a lovely story. Both my eyes and brain were eagerly pursuing the next line. This is a captivating tale. There's a missing word in the first paragraph " I felt I was going to single forever " need to add "be" and a typo at the beginning of the 2nd paragraph "I met Darren on March 11 20014" there's an extra zero. Despite these two issues it's a truly lovely story.


Realist101
Hi Bobby, I just now rejoined and thank you for reading and reviewing too! I really appreciate this. Best to you too! Susan
07-Nov-2020
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Goodbye by Realist101

Excellent
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Wow that's pretty darn good. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely beautiful and adds significantly to your presentation. The poem itself is both creative and profound. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful night.


Kerry Robinson
Thank you so much, my friend. I apologize for the late reply, I haven't been on in a while. Happy Halloween!
01-Nov-2020
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Joey R.I.P. by Kerry Robinson

Excellent
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What a wonderful tribute to Joey. This is a very impressive poetic story with consistently good rhyming. I did notice a small typo, but nothing that diminishes the beauty of this poem. The stanza that says "So when you struggle, with weight to (should be Too) heavy to bear." This is a great entry for the contest, best of luck with that.


bertodi
thank you
17-Sep-2020
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Socialisation! by bertodi

Excellent
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This is an absolutely entertaining read that held our attention throughout. Your impeccably descriptive words paint such a beautiful picture in the reader's mind. Wherever you're from, Hungary or Germany it sure does sound lovely. The writing itself is solid with no grammatical errors. Have a blessed day.


Fonda Little
Thank you so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray amen, Amen, AMEN!
01-Sep-2020
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An End to Hate! by Fonda Little

Excellent
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Such an appropriate message for these trying times. The photo is priceless and helps to bring this poem to life. The rhyming is pure not at all forced. I think this is a solid entry for the contest best of luck in that.


richie b
Bobby,
Thank you for your inspiring words. Your comments
mean a lot to me.
Peace,
Richie
23-Aug-2020
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Broken Butterfly by richie b

Excellent
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Wow!!! What an incredibly impactful and powerful poem that you penned here. The poem is both sad and beautiful at the same time. The photo is absolutely perfect. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.


Willie P. Smith
Thank you, Bobby, for your encouraging words and stars.
22-Aug-2020
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Smokey by Willie P. Smith

Excellent
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This is a very clever and creative poetic story that you penned here. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely perfect. The rhyming is flawless and allows the poem to flow effortlessly. Really great work. Have a blessed day.


JLR
Bobby, I am so grateful for your strong validation on this free verse entry. I thank you very much for this six-star review!
22-Aug-2020
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How I Write Free Verse by JLR

Chapter 36 of the book Muses of the Heart

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This is an exceptional poem that you penned here. The picture accompanying this is absolutely perfect. The poem flows effortlessly as well as any rhyming poem, that's quite an achievement. Best of luck in the contest. Have a blessed day.


A. Louise Robertson
Thank you for your kind words and excellent review as I await the contest voting today.
21-Aug-2020
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Why the Ocean Roars by A. Louise Robertson

Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Fantastic and a very strong entry for the contest. The picture accompanying this poem is absolutely beautiful. Your rhyming is impeccable, not at all forced. The poem and the presentation are both very elegant. Best of luck in the contest.


thaities, Rebecca V.
You're welcome. Good luck!
21-Aug-2020
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Money Hungry by Bobby Cunningham

Excellent
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This is an easy to read, easy to understand poem entry for the Deadly Sins Poetry contest. It should do well. I wish you the best of luck!



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