General Fiction posted October 27, 2020

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by Bill Schott

Herb couldn't take it anymore. His constant worrying had driven everyone away, leaving him alone.

Wanting to end it, he got out his best suit, ironed it, and went downtown to jump off the bridge.

His final thought, as he plummeted to the water, was whether he had turned off the iron.


Dribble Flash Fiction contest entry


Thanks to Renate-Bertodi for use of the artwork
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