Children Poetry posted July 3, 2015 Chapters:  ...10001 10002 -10003- 10004... 


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A chapter in the book Beautiful Death

my perfect child

by cbat

Did you hear?
he Say's
that child is wild
so bad too sad

blame it on
mom or dad
better parenting
should be had

their parent's
should have done
what we did
this they said

my little one
would not act
like that, did you
notice he is fat?

Have you seen
how she acted?
what she said?
keep her home instead

for my child
rights retracted
my child is smart
won't break our heart

she would never
break our rules
they should have
found better schools

have you noticed
clothes to tight?
an exercise program
Not another bite

this one is to thin
this one not tall
another seems
much to small

the parent's
each judging all
six small children
six proud parents

each sure they
have done the best
my child is not
like the rest

some keeping children
safe in the nest
tell them nothing
that is best

another pushing them
out to live their lives
if they know the score
they will survive

six sets of parent's
six children small
opinions change
as they grow tall

all do their best
sharing with the rest
all feeling
they know best




Watching my children become parents, I feel that if we were Grandparents first we may have avoided mistakes made.
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