Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted September 21, 2019

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I Hurt a Lovely Heart

by poetwatch

In a mindless manner to meet a review

Having had to hurry I hurt a lovely heart.
(Understand that we are imperfect writers and poets.)
Right or wrong, what I wrote was for you
To make you smile was my thought from the start.

Abandoned by request, I now stand alone.

Lost are the words, for the smile
Of this clown has turned to stone
Vilified by no reply, which ain't your style.
Entertaining you with my wit of wandering
Lunacy, you saw the bogeyman.
Your heart hardened and sent my traveling

Humor walking. I'm a humble man
Easy to smile and bring you joy,
Always ready to clear your tears,
Restless, but I'm not a little boy
To ask forgiveness for my years.

Acrostic Poem writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write an acrostic poem. Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. See an example in the announcement.

I wrote this for in case I write something you may not agree with in my reviews. I am only human and in my way of making you smile I sometimes write the wrong words. I hope you all take into consideration that I an not perfect. I also make mistakes. :)

Thank you Angelheart.
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