General Flash Fiction posted July 5, 2020

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The fleeting moments of happiness.

Love at First Sight

by SixFtLion (Suzanna)

She was beautiful, with erect upper body and long hair. She looked into my eyes, and I drooled. Like a real man, I had to chase her! I exploded into motion.

She swung her long mane and bounded toward the mimosa tree, the perfect place for romance. I ran harder, hyperventilating, choking. "I MUST have her!" But she was gone, up in the sweet-smelling tree.

Another disappointment in a dog's life, another squirrel fooled me.

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