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Killer Candy

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PI's track maker of candy killing kids

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Comment from Shirley McLain
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I think some real excitement is about to happen for the investigation. From this chapter it makes me think a forgein government is involved in the kids deaths. You did a great job. Shirley

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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I liked the storytelling style. The dialogues makes get closely involved in the proceedings! The style is simple with good flow. The names of all sweets mentioned are alien to me.But that doesn't come in the way of enjoying a good story. Good luck!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This is a well written and enjoyable chapter. The story is flowing well and is easy to read. The dialogue is excellent in bringing the story along but also making the characters feel real and their personalities are coming out. Well done.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene
Comment from royowen
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Skerry tells them that a man was seen passing green covered candy out, Serria sain sounds like Rohn Gossen, but it's the red ones that are killing kids. Serria later gets in touch Ellazan Charbessa to get in touch with her daughter, it seems like the solving of the crime Is becoming closer to a solution, well done, Karlene, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Thank you for your review and great rating.

    Karlene
reply by royowen on 14-Oct-2020
    Well done