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Where Did Love Go?

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Feelings

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written three-line poem about having an affair will certainly hurt the one you are cheating on. It is hard to forgive someone who betrayed you and they cannot be trusted again.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thanks so much
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from sammielwf
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Bucket list,
Your pen name here is the first point of interest for me- but that may be a story for another poem.
Affairs is intriguing because in its simplicity it is true.
When trust is broken in a relationship because of unfaithfulness I am not sure that can ever be fully gained back. There will always be a kernal of count- thus a relationship with a constant crack in it.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    I agree. Thanks so much
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Well said in three lines--countless tomes have been written on the subject--you pegged it succinctly. (Also--thanks for accompaniment--great quote--esp. twist on forgive/forget)

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thanks so much
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wise and damning words here Trisha as once the line has been crossed many hearts will break. Lust is simply not worth the heart-ache that follows, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thanks so much
    Hugs Trisha
Comment from Paula Pivko
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That poem is very true you can't undo what's been done. I like the rhythm of the poem and the rhyming. And I feel the writer's sadness over whatever has happened.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thank you for reviewing my poem. It?s a situation that hopefully people will avoid.
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from ESOSTINE
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Hmmm, good one there! Surely, emotions and passion tend to becloud love relationships driven by lust while true love is lost. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Well written!

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thanks I appreciate your review. Many a couple has been torn apart from the behavior of one partner. Nobody likes to feel rejected.
    Hugs, Trisha