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Lost Love

Where are you?

72 total reviews 
Comment from juliaSjames
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I like your poem. It's simple yet complex. For who can divine the workings of the human heart? The image of the connecting strings (threads?) being sewn into seams is clever.

Perhaps for me these two stanzas are the most effective. Authentic!

"I can't wait to hear your stories
Perhaps you wouldn't have to speak

We can look into each other's eyes
We can sit in silence and read"

Congratulations on your recognition by the Contest Committee.

Stay safe healthy and blessed

Julia

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2021


reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Thank you so very much Julia, Bless you :)
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2021
    Thank you so very much Julia, Bless you :)
Comment from ESOSTINE
Excellent
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A well written couplet that expresses one's innermost feelings of love and emotions. I could sense the natural flow of sincere thoughts of romance. Wishing you success in finding that true love that will endure a life time.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much :)
Comment from amada
Excellent
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This is a beautifully love poem, a very good contender for the Love Poem Poetry Contest. I celebrate that you already has the All Tme Best seal. Now I wish you well in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks I'm honored that I got it, and hopefully I do okay in the contest but if not I'm sure the winners will have great entries
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks I'm honored that I got it, and hopefully I do okay in the contest but if not I'm sure the winners will have great entries
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
Excellent
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My favorite line: "As we grow close in heart they will be sewn into seams". The alliteration brings a tenderness. You write with great emotion that hits the heart.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks, and I'm glad you liked it :)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks, and I'm glad you liked it :)
Comment from RGstar
Excellent
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Well done, couplets reflecting back at a personality. Good, clear and concise, it gives the aura and imagery desired; quiet guy. Good luck with this.

Wishing you a great week.
RGstar

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks RGstar I appreciated your excellent review!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks RGstar I appreciated your excellent review!
Comment from harmony13
Excellent
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and extremely creative.
Thank you for the author's notes - the artwork goes perfectly with these
words. The poem flows and connects well. The words of this poem
convey a strong belief. Great Poem!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks harmony :) and the artist did a great job, and I'm glad you liked it!
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks harmony :) and the artist did a great job, and I'm glad you liked it!
Comment from QC Poet
Excellent
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A very Hopeful and positive outlook in versing and gray flowing thoughts in your poetic offering. I don't quite know what an underground writer is but your work is well written and thought out. Welcome and I look forward to seeing much more. Blessings to you.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks alot QC :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks alot QC :)
Comment from Ann Market
Excellent
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Your friend is quite gifted-this picture is beautiful!

The poem is lovely! I enjoyed this as a unique entry to the Romance Poetry contest because instead of the usual romance poem with one you love, you wrote one about "finding" the right one!! I liked the point of view of the poem from knowing what kind of person you would like to know in a relationship, but you haven't met them yet.

Good luck to you in the contest; this is a wonderful entry!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks much Ann :) and I hope I do okay in the contest, if not I'm sure the winners will have great entries
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks much Ann :) and I hope I do okay in the contest, if not I'm sure the winners will have great entries
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Excellent
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First and foremost, My friend, this poem deserves a six star rating. I love the artwork and the message. The delivery is outstanding!!

Such a wistful poem written about a love you know is out there, but have yet to meet. A great theme, and not one that's been done and redone. It's fresh and stirring.

What a wonderful idea to have a friend, and a talented one at that, design artwork just for your poem. That gives value to what you've written, because it indicates its important to you, which makes it important to us as well.

The background information under Author's Notes is helpful in setting the stage for us.

Well done, my friend,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks for your in depth review Rhonda :) I am truly flattered by your compliments and I can't thank you enough :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks for your in depth review Rhonda :) I am truly flattered by your compliments and I can't thank you enough :)
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 08-Feb-2021
    It was a poem that stuck with me. I remember when my children were small that I used to pray for their spouses that they would some day meet. Someone gave me the idea, and it wasn't until I read your poem that I remembered doing so.
Comment from sandramitchell
Excellent
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I believe what you have written, our soul mate is there and although we might not have met them yet, we will. But sometimes people are too impatient, and miss the love of their lives. This is such a lovely, romantic poem, and a winner in my mind. I love that sketch, too. Good luck! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks Sandra for the excellent review and I appreciate the luck as well :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
    Thanks Sandra for the excellent review and I appreciate the luck as well :)