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Lost Love

Where are you?

72 total reviews 
Comment from lancellot
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Wonderful. Do we really first meet our soulmate in our dreams? I wonder. But, I agree you know when you find them. The quiet moments are not lonely moments.


Great free verse entry.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks lancellot, and I couldn't agree more.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks lancellot, and I couldn't agree more.
Comment from equestrik
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This is a well written poem with a deep understanding and desire for connection. I think it has depth and i wish you all the best with all your writing.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks I really appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you liked it :)
Comment from Erika Seshadri
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This is my kind of love poem. So awesome. Congratulations on it becoming both--recognized and an all time best work.

Keep 'em coming! I enjoy your writing.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
    Thanks :) it made me feel good to achieve that and for sure I can't wait to post more.
Comment from Lance S. Loria
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You have received recognition which is well deserved for this romance poem and I have one suggestion which I hope you'll consider that may make you work even stronger.

In the next to last line, rather than say "lost" I suggest "undiscovered" since that is what the entire poem has been about. You are seeking this love. This is not a lost love poem.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks for your review and you have a good point, I will definitely take your advice into consideration. Thanks Lance :)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks for your review and you have a good point, I will definitely take your advice into consideration. Thanks Lance :)
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks for your review and you have a good point, I will definitely take your advice into consideration. Thanks Lance :)
Comment from rjuselius
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Aaawwweee, this is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear quiet guy! You have described an honest relationship where everything is not a fairytale.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much:) Blessings to you as well!!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much:) Blessings to you as well!!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much:) Blessings to you as well!!
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Q G,
This is a marvelous poem and entry for the love poem contest,
with a different perspective them most will take.
Your free verse in un-rhymed couplet reads very well.
"I can't wait to hear your stories
Perhaps you wouldn't have to speak" speaks volumes.
The art work by Crystal fits perfectly.
No sixes left.
Good luck in the contest and the search.
Robert


 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks much rspoet :) yes she did a fantastic job and I appreciate your feedback and excellent review
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks much rspoet :) yes she did a fantastic job and I appreciate your feedback and excellent review
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks much rspoet :) yes she did a fantastic job and I appreciate your feedback and excellent review
Comment from Wendy G
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That is a beautiful entry for the Love Poem contest, knowing ahead of time that you will be so close in thought and ways that your communication can even be in silence. True unity. Well written.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks Wendy :) we all deserve to find our lost love.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks Wendy :) we all deserve to find our lost love.
Comment from nova2
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You have full out captured the longing of the soulmate experience that only a special group of people in this life time will have the privilege of experiencing.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks nova2 :) that is true, not everyone will find their lost love but best of luck to everyone in their search.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks nova2 :) that is true, not everyone will find their lost love but best of luck to everyone in their search.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Wow, this is a beautiful poem, expressing a desire to meet that perfect one for you and what life will be like. Really great rhyme and expression. Hope you win. =]

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thank you so very much for the Exceptional review Roxanna :) I hope I do ok in the contest but if not I'm sure the winner will have a great poem for sure.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thank you so very much for the Exceptional review Roxanna :) I hope I do ok in the contest but if not I'm sure the winner will have a great poem for sure.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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I love these lines; they have an unique fluidity that completes a perfect picture of souls intertwined: "

Our souls are bound by fate
Or at least so it seems

No matter how far apart
We are connected by unseen strings

As we grow close in heart
they will be sewn into seams"

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks alot Iza :) I'm glad you enjoyed those lines, I thought they fit together nicely as well, I'm glad someone else thought the same.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks alot Iza :) I'm glad you enjoyed those lines, I thought they fit together nicely as well, I'm glad someone else thought the same.