Reviews from

The Sparrow.

Small birds searching for food.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Your words paint such a beautiful picture, makes one feel they are there with you. I love your ending:
God has his eye on the sparrow.
Being out with nature is what I like, I get as close as I can.
"Only if we would put our eye on God.
just a thought"

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
    You are a wonderful lady, I thank you for this great review, And like you, our eye should be on God. I love birds and write about them often, thanks again.
reply by Anne Johnston on 28-Jan-2021
    You are very welcome, John
Comment from Blu Rider
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A lot of us are seeing things this way John. The world changing before our eyes, small things, miraculous even, seeing in the quality of light, in the beautiful filigree of a tree branch, perhaps an iridescence in the air we didn't notice before; in the intelligence of your sparrows working together, the old world falling away to reveal something yet unformed but wonderful nevertheless. Not everyone is moving with it, not yet, but there's a better world coming I'm sure - I feel it in my heart and see it with my eyes, a higher dimension manifesting, the inner reality of things revealed.

That's my two cents anyway - thanks for inspiring me with this one. -Blu

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2021


reply by the author on 27-Jan-2021
    Thanks so much, Blu giving me a great review, this was not my best but I wrote it as it was happing, If I could write any other way it would be like you, you are a true poet.
    I would love to read your work, we think alike I just can't put in words like you do,
    it's a beautiful thing/
reply by Blu Rider on 27-Jan-2021
    You're doing just fine brother. Whatever you write be true to your own unique voice and hone that connection. -Blu