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Shed New Tears Fairytales and Fable

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A children's book of wonderful stories

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Well done on this short and well- written verse, Ricky. I enjoy reading verses that are meaningful and this one is just lovely. Well done and I look forward to reading more from your pen.

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
    Thank you very much Melissa I appreciate it.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Victoria Gatto
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I am very happy to see that there are writers out there who endeavor to bring wholesome, meaningful entertainment to our children, which is definitely something lacking in this world. Please keep writing and striving for this, as I'm sure you are. Unfortunately, this one was a little hard to follow, and I felt that there was too much going on at once.

 Comment Written 26-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2021
    In order to be a qualified reviewer here on fanstory not only do you need to review content.
    Review theme and imagery and descriptive measures.
    But try to understand what the writer is portraying.
    Once you start your writing career here you'll learn these things.
    Then you'll realize the difference between an exceptional piece which I presented which is five and six stars.
    Which would be in your case anything from one to three stars which would be poor to average.
    Since you have not shown any work here?
    I would suggest that you start writing first and then reviewing.
    Doctor Ricky 1024